Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2006 21:30 CST
Comment/Review:
I've only read thru 6 so far but I had to comment. Don't you think that after a long day of sorting corpses and then burying them that Inuyasha would be in desperate need of a hot shower himself? I can see how that might interrupt the flow of the story but I keep thinking about the poor guy tracking bloody mud through the house in his dirty clothes and stinking. Also, call me naive, but under these circumstances, I don't think Kagome's nudity would have aroused Inuyasha much, if at all. That being said, I always enjoy your work, except for that torture one.
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