| "'Till Death Do Us Part" Reviews/Comments [ 30 ] |
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Reviewed By: vegeta_saiyajin_no_ouji On: October 16, 2002 02:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
ummmm...i kinda found those last few chaps a bit confusing. they werent as good as the first few, but its still a good story. |
Reviewed By: SailorCallie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2002 15:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a nice B/V fan-fic that you've wrote and I hope that there's a sequel in the works. :D
BTW, please R&R my fan-fic too. |
Reviewed By: Evan On: September 20, 2002 19:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bravo! Bravo! Great job PrincessBulma. Please write the sequel soon! I was on the edge of my seat at the end of each chapter wanting to read more and more. See you at school! :) |
Reviewed By: Mel On: September 09, 2002 16:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hell Yay Manders!!! When's the sequel coming???? Hmmmmmmm?? I'll leave it at that.Melzers |
Reviewed By: Cherry_Saiya-jin [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2002 14:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
You've got to be kidding me!!!!!!!!!!!My friend i would never let you live with yourself if you rewrote TDDUP!!!It is beautiful the way it is and you have nothing to be ashamed of. Ally and i both think so!!! And don't think i'm going to let you end it that way~!!!!!!!!! You've just GOT to make a sequel! I'll just die if i don't get more!!!!!!!!!!!
From your friend,
~``~Cherry~``~
P.S. I wouldn't think 25..wait 26 reviews is anything to rewrite it for either! |
Reviewed By: Ally On: August 29, 2002 17:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a GREAT read!!!! I'll be curious to find out what happens to Vegeta. Like where he went and why although I have a pretty good idea.
My ratings are based on the aurgument between Bulma and her father, I sware I about fell out of my seat! And yes please, please, please, PLEASE! add more soon! |
Reviewed By: jewelsunicorn [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2002 17:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
aahh! that was so sad! another great chp. i think the next will be the best though! lol |
Reviewed By: margaretsweetpea3 On: August 10, 2002 22:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved it plain and simple |
Reviewed By: Mushi_azn [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2002 19:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
Poor Bulma.....
Ending was a bit weird....like..
was he leaving as like dying....or leaving as in like...going to the hospital to die...
and I wanted to know what he was dying from.....
I thought he wouldn't die soo soon. Like.....die in like a few years.......that can happen....if you get some kinda disease or cancer, and then you only have like 4 years to live....=( |
Reviewed By: Saiyan Eyes [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2002 15:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! It's so cute the way you make them seem so innocent and everything! I just love it and I hope you keep writing! |
Reviewed By: Chichoie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2002 18:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
write more!!!!!! O.o |
Reviewed By: Veggiegirl4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2002 18:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
please put on another chapter i'm begging you *beg* i know i know i'm truly pathitic and put Vegeta to shame but i'm loving this fic and i just want to read the rest |
Reviewed By: Sk8nBaBe [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2002 15:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
TEAR : (
PLZ update soon i love ur story
thanx : ) |
Reviewed By: Brittany and Heather Miles On: June 20, 2002 13:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Manders,
This is an awesome fanfic!! Great job. It was fun to read, and very well-written. The fanfic was extremely creative. WOW!! Keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: hachitajhii [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2002 10:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
COOL |
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