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Reviewed By: lil rin On: April 23, 2006 08:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
It's a start of a story. I'll be waiting on the rest.
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Reviewed By: ponygirl2112 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2006 22:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I like it so far but there is a major/minor goof in the story, in chapter 2 it's stated that Kagome's grandpa died 2 years before their meeting with the detectives & she'd tell Souta not to say anything about the jewel but in chapter 3 you have Kurama meeting grandpa & him telling almost the whole jewel story & later getting bawled out by Kagome for doing so. So you have a boo-boo that needs to be fixed some way.
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Reviewed By: Kougalover123 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2006 19:29 CDT
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the story is good so far, but in chp 2 kag's gramps is dead, then in chp 3 he is alive. just wanted to inform you. otherwise it is great. well update again soon.
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Reviewed By: YaY4AiR [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2006 17:21 CDT
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very intersting plot! i really enjoyed it. please update soon. i cant wait to find out what happens on the girls night out. ^^
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Reviewed By: angeltsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2006 15:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
Why are all teachers EVIL>< Anywho really like your story plz update^^
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Title: Guarding Life
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2006 00:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: yue no rei (ff.net) On: March 28, 2006 04:08 CST
Comment/Review:
nice update
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2006 15:43 CST
Comment/Review:
I really loved it! Keep up the great work and update asap please!
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Reviewed By: VanillaValhalla [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2006 17:46 CST
Comment/Review:
Hello again! I really like this fic, keep writing up a storm!
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Title: Yeah
Reviewed By: Fox Vixen [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2006 10:43 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is good please update soon.
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Title: Guarding Life
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2006 15:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: Guarding Life
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2006 15:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: KEEP GOING
Reviewed By: yasha_21_12 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2006 12:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update
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Reviewed By: Monkey gurl15 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2006 21:19 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey great start! Hope to here more from ya. Update soon.
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Title: Update!!!
Reviewed By: KawaiiKoneko89(not logged in) On: March 17, 2006 08:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update I really like the direction that this fic is going so... update
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