| "Guarding Life" Reviews/Comments [ 33 ] |
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Reviewed By: LCAR [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2006 11:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a great story keep it up.
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Reviewed By: raykay [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2006 12:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good job! Please update. It's not fair! To leave your readers hanging, waiting for you to UPDATE.
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Title: Chapter 3
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2006 22:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting. Can't believe that Kagome's mom would tell on her. Update soon. Can't wait to see what Kurama does with the information and how Koenma handles Sesshomaru and Kagome.
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Reviewed By: DragonPrincess89 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2006 18:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your story but I don't think that Kurama should've found out Kagome's past that soon. It should've tak.en langer
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Reviewed By: inukoro On: May 05, 2006 04:09 CDT
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ahh nice chaoter at last but it could been longer? heh oh well
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Title: Guarding Life
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2006 19:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: KEEP GOING
Reviewed By: KaGoMe_KuRaMa_4_EvEr - not loggin On: April 27, 2006 18:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: angeltsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2006 17:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
Could've been longer, but I love it^^ PLZ update asap.
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Title: YAYS!
Reviewed By: Hieis_soulmateis_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2006 14:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an awesome story. I hope you update again real soon. It's very enjoyable and I like it. Ja ne!!
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Reviewed By: lffhyktj On: April 24, 2006 19:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah you added more; I also feel your pain I'm failing French, but not to fear summer is near!
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Reviewed By: maranjade@yahoo.com On: April 23, 2006 19:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
I liked it. But I thought you said her grandfather died? Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Anonymous0 On: April 23, 2006 11:35 CDT
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I'm a bit confused. On chapter 2, grandpa is suppose to be died for 2 years and yet in chapter 3 he's alive and talking to Kurama. Or is that his spirit hanging around the shrine and telling tales? I don't think they should find out right away about the jewel. What is it about Koga that Rin's not saying to Kagome? Why does Koenma want the jewel and how would his father react to this? Wonder what will happen when they find out that Kagome is the lady of the East. Please update real soon. It's very interesting so far.
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Reviewed By: lil rin On: April 23, 2006 08:28 CDT
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It's a start of a story. I'll be waiting on the rest.
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Reviewed By: ponygirl2112 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2006 22:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I like it so far but there is a major/minor goof in the story, in chapter 2 it's stated that Kagome's grandpa died 2 years before their meeting with the detectives & she'd tell Souta not to say anything about the jewel but in chapter 3 you have Kurama meeting grandpa & him telling almost the whole jewel story & later getting bawled out by Kagome for doing so. So you have a boo-boo that needs to be fixed some way.
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Reviewed By: Kougalover123 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2006 19:29 CDT
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the story is good so far, but in chp 2 kag's gramps is dead, then in chp 3 he is alive. just wanted to inform you. otherwise it is great. well update again soon.
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