| "Two Sides to a Story" Reviews/Comments [ 123 ] |
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Reviewed By: RingPrincess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2002 18:38 CST
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Oh yeah, a new chapter!!!! and it is as wonderful as all the rest. Hmm. . . the next chapter sounds very interesting. ;P |
Reviewed By: Storm_410 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2002 21:33 CST
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I love this story...
yup, thats all I have to say. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: December 02, 2002 12:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great update. For a while there Chichi was really starting to get on my nerves, and everyone elses for that matter. I can't believe that she had the nerve to mouth off like that in Bulma's house. Poor Veggie developed a taste for cat food? I think it's finally starting to dawn on Bulma that his life for a long time was a living hell. Vegeta is so messed up that he's still angry about having to wear that infamous pink shirt-lol!
Looks like Trunks is the only person that he will trust or seek help from. Can't wait to read what happens next!!! Great job Darke ^_^! |
Reviewed By: Mr Peepers On: December 14, 2002 01:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is exceptional in every way. Darke Angelus brings a realness to characters and story that makes it addicting and satisfying to read. Written with such insight and intelligence, "Two Sides To A Story" nails us to our seats and has us panting and pining for more.
Now, where IS that next chapter? |
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2002 07:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one intense chapter DA! I am glad that you are still updating ths wonderful fic! You know I have been making predictions on how this story is going to porgress and I NEVER get it right! It is wonderful to find a story that in not predictable, and it leaves you either worried, exicited, dismayed, or whatever until the next chapter! You're doing a great job, and I wonder how you will have Bulma & Vegeta interact with each other in the next chapter...update soon...or when you can...I know you're a busy little bee! :)
Take care,
aka "vejitasbabe" |
Reviewed By: autumn On: October 30, 2002 00:56 CST
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This chapter was fabulous. I thought you really captured a maniacal Vegeta very well and I especially liked Gohan's role in everything; the way his presence gave Vegeta the first spark of doubt and how Gohan had such trouble accepting the fact that he might have to kill Vegeta. It was all very well done. Of course, I loved the ending, seeing little baby Trunks help his daddy and Vegeta actually being grateful. Again, you got those emotions down so well. I can just see Vegeta kneeling in the dirt, bewildered and confused and then... remorseful. *sigh* Might have to reread some of this story while I wait for an update, I just love it so much. :) |
Reviewed By: Sluggy [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2002 14:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are my ALL TIME favorite fanfic writer! I'm SO glad you're back, and just in time for my birthday! What a present this is ^_^ and you didn't even know it. Like always, you lure the reader into your little trap and keep him there squirming and writhing in agony for another great chappie to be posted. Great work and I can't wait for the next one! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: October 29, 2002 04:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG There are no words to describe how I'm feeling after reading this chap. The fight scenes between V/G were so intense as well as heartbreaking. The last thing Gohan wanted to do was hurt Vegeta. You could almost feel the emotional conflict he was going thru. Finally that bastard doctor is dead. Using baby Trunks to bring Vegeta around was sheer genious. Absolutely amazing is all I can say. Now maybe B/V can start to repair their relationship, although that's gonna be a tough road ahead. Bravo for this incredible chapter. |
Reviewed By: Zorella [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2002 23:51 CST
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Oh yay! I get first message for new chappie ^^
As usuall I am utterly lost for words but *sigh* that was good DA, unbelievably and incredibly good.
You are the best author I have ever known, and I'm not only talking about fan fic authors. |
Reviewed By: Hetchi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2002 14:36 CDT
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Please update!! It's been 2 months!!!! |
Reviewed By: Zorella [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2002 16:09 CDT
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DA where are you? *snif* there are two stories that I can not live without and that's TSTOS and 'Shadows of the past' and you both have not updated for months. *sighs* Though your last one shot was great! Almost as good as an update to tstoa, note that I said 'almost' ;)
echos Editor Rascal; we do love you!!! bow down to the might of DA!! |
Reviewed By: MistressAlexa [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2002 22:01 CDT
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Ok, I really, really want to read more of this. I hope you're working on the next chapter. This fic is awesome. I love it. Hope to read more, soon. |
Reviewed By: Sluggy [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2002 21:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't think I've rated any of your fics here yet, but you're on my favorite's list and I read the new fic at your site too...which is great btw...and I KNOW you said things would get back to normal soon n stuff....but WHERE ARE YOU?! Did you die? I just reread all of FBTW and TSTAS and I'm pining for more reading material...*whimpers* come back please? |
Reviewed By: Editor Rascal On: October 12, 2002 16:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
superior writing style, effective and creative use of language. original, believable story line, characters. writer exacts emotional responses from readers and effectivly sets tone.
profanity and violence appropriatly and effectivly used. keeps one in suspense. exciting to read, a page turner. one complaint! waiting too long for up dates!!!!
also, grammar and spelling are nearly perfect!
easy to read. a pleasure to read. now if we could only read the next chapter...
PS
all other stories by this author are excellent! check them out!
DA, we love you! swak! |
Reviewed By: nicola-claire88 On: October 29, 2002 12:19 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Veggie's back! I hope you are going to make this a happy ending... Or I will not be happy. *Evil grin* Update soon! *Smiles* |
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