| "Two Sides to a Story" Reviews/Comments [ 123 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sluggy [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2002 21:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't think I've rated any of your fics here yet, but you're on my favorite's list and I read the new fic at your site too...which is great btw...and I KNOW you said things would get back to normal soon n stuff....but WHERE ARE YOU?! Did you die? I just reread all of FBTW and TSTAS and I'm pining for more reading material...*whimpers* come back please? |
Reviewed By: Editor Rascal On: October 12, 2002 16:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
superior writing style, effective and creative use of language. original, believable story line, characters. writer exacts emotional responses from readers and effectivly sets tone.
profanity and violence appropriatly and effectivly used. keeps one in suspense. exciting to read, a page turner. one complaint! waiting too long for up dates!!!!
also, grammar and spelling are nearly perfect!
easy to read. a pleasure to read. now if we could only read the next chapter...
PS
all other stories by this author are excellent! check them out!
DA, we love you! swak! |
Reviewed By: nicola-claire88 On: October 29, 2002 12:19 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Veggie's back! I hope you are going to make this a happy ending... Or I will not be happy. *Evil grin* Update soon! *Smiles* |
Reviewed By: camaro On: September 25, 2002 11:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I only rated the originality/creativity a seven because I've read so many get together Fics. It's not because it was so much like the others. I noticed that you did add pieces that were original and suprised me. To be quit honest I haven't read the second part to from bad to worst. I just thought that perhaps this was a good time to comment on the first portian. I want you to know that I really appreciate you creativity and your articulate words. Your a very talented writer and one of my favorites, which isn't a title I use loosely.
Camaro |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2002 19:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn... I can't help but giggle with glee over Veggie running a muck. And him picking Trunks' clothes was genius. I guess some memories are seeping through. I just hope Bulma and Trunks don't get caught in the crossfire. 18 kicking Vegeta's ass was pure comedy. I'll never be able to get the picture of Vegeta hitting on 18 out of my head now. As always, can't wait for the next chapter.-JB |
Reviewed By: Lupin Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2002 17:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy crap. That was an AWESOME chapter. Everything was portrayed soooo well! And Geta, man you wrote him out so well. You definatly brought back the badboy in him. ^-^ The clothes bit was cool. Nice add in there. And Trunks, VETA KI! hehehehe Loved it!!! |
Reviewed By: autumn On: August 21, 2002 13:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
What a great chapter! The return of evil Vegeta, I love it! Especially the part where he has to get new clothes -- that was too funny. I'm really interested to see where this is going and how Bulma & baby Trunks are going to play into it. Great job as always! :) |
Reviewed By: manga, the Awesome One in pigtails [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2002 06:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Geh. You're still the master of the cliff hanger. I can't wait for the next one! Arrrrrgh....! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: August 17, 2002 04:02 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!OMG!OMG! I need a sedative. Veg has gone on a rampage and I'm afraid of what will happen when he meets up with Bulma and little Trunks. It's a shame because it looks like some memories are trying to resurface. I just hope someone puts a stop to the destruction before Veg wipes out the entire planet. On a lighter note, 18 kicked his ass, hehe. Man, I can't wait for the next chap. |
Reviewed By: Dou's Dame On: August 16, 2002 23:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is it just me, or is Fanfiction.Net down AGAIN? I don't care for Mediaminer, but *sigh* here I am. Great fic, Dark- I just loved the Vegeta/18 interaction there. Personally, I always think the little, horny bastard has more in common with the blond-bombshell than with Bulma. But, that's just me. Thanks for putting a fresh spin on an otherwise over-used cliche!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Angel Wings [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2002 13:05 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, no! Has Vegeta gone back to his evil ways? Say it isn't so! |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: August 07, 2002 21:50 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thank the gods you updated! i was beginning to lose hope for you finishing this fic! it's my favorite, too.
aarrggghhh! i don't want to wait to find out what's next!! i have to, i know, but yeesh! i really need to learn that handy trick to speed up time.
it's makes me so happy to know that someone with the ability of a prospering novelist actually takes the time to write such fantastic fan fics!
i am also very grateful for the immense length of your chapters. they're huge! |
Reviewed By: Zorella [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2002 05:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
I was speachless...... I had my hand over my mouth just saying over and over, 'oh my god...'.
Krillin's singing was so funny, and then Veg wakes up and boom! ack! memory loss! wha... Bu... OMG.....
Mind you, and hour later I was laughing... This story has done a complete circle. You could practically have to start again...
Where did you learn to write? I wanna join... |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2002 03:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy shit! Vegeta is back! Mean...ahem...he's evil again. Well that was an interesting turn events. Where do you think up this stuff? Oh well looking forward to the next chapter. Oh and mm.org lost all the stories in the DBZ section so you have to go back and relist them in that anime section to have them show up there. Just spreading the word. Anyway great chapter and have I told you that your site is one of my favorites out there. Just thought you should know. Til next update.-JB |
Reviewed By: Susan On: August 07, 2002 02:31 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! Veggie has lost his memory! You gotta feel sorry for him, and poor little Trunks can feel his daddy's pain. Bulma's a basket case and she doesn't even know that Veg is back to his old evil self again. I can't wait to see what he plans to do while on earth. Please update asap!! |
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