"Two Sides to a Story" Reviews/Comments [ 123 ] |
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Reviewed By: autumn On: August 21, 2002 13:49 CDT Comment/Review: What a great chapter! The return of evil Vegeta, I love it! Especially the part where he has to get new clothes -- that was too funny. I'm really interested to see where this is going and how Bulma & baby Trunks are going to play into it. Great job as always! :) |
Reviewed By: manga, the Awesome One in pigtails [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2002 06:45 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Geh. You're still the master of the cliff hanger. I can't wait for the next one! Arrrrrgh....! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: August 17, 2002 04:02 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: OMG!OMG!OMG! I need a sedative. Veg has gone on a rampage and I'm afraid of what will happen when he meets up with Bulma and little Trunks. It's a shame because it looks like some memories are trying to resurface. I just hope someone puts a stop to the destruction before Veg wipes out the entire planet. On a lighter note, 18 kicked his ass, hehe. Man, I can't wait for the next chap. |
Reviewed By: Dou's Dame On: August 16, 2002 23:04 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Is it just me, or is Fanfiction.Net down AGAIN? I don't care for Mediaminer, but *sigh* here I am. Great fic, Dark- I just loved the Vegeta/18 interaction there. Personally, I always think the little, horny bastard has more in common with the blond-bombshell than with Bulma. But, that's just me. Thanks for putting a fresh spin on an otherwise over-used cliche!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Angel Wings [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2002 13:05 CDT Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Oh, no! Has Vegeta gone back to his evil ways? Say it isn't so! |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: August 07, 2002 21:50 CDT Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: thank the gods you updated! i was beginning to lose hope for you finishing this fic! it's my favorite, too.
aarrggghhh! i don't want to wait to find out what's next!! i have to, i know, but yeesh! i really need to learn that handy trick to speed up time.
it's makes me so happy to know that someone with the ability of a prospering novelist actually takes the time to write such fantastic fan fics!
i am also very grateful for the immense length of your chapters. they're huge! |
Reviewed By: Zorella [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2002 05:43 CDT Comment/Review: I was speachless...... I had my hand over my mouth just saying over and over, 'oh my god...'.
Krillin's singing was so funny, and then Veg wakes up and boom! ack! memory loss! wha... Bu... OMG.....
Mind you, and hour later I was laughing... This story has done a complete circle. You could practically have to start again...
Where did you learn to write? I wanna join... |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2002 03:39 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Holy shit! Vegeta is back! Mean...ahem...he's evil again. Well that was an interesting turn events. Where do you think up this stuff? Oh well looking forward to the next chapter. Oh and mm.org lost all the stories in the DBZ section so you have to go back and relist them in that anime section to have them show up there. Just spreading the word. Anyway great chapter and have I told you that your site is one of my favorites out there. Just thought you should know. Til next update.-JB |
Reviewed By: Susan On: August 07, 2002 02:31 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: OMG!! Veggie has lost his memory! You gotta feel sorry for him, and poor little Trunks can feel his daddy's pain. Bulma's a basket case and she doesn't even know that Veg is back to his old evil self again. I can't wait to see what he plans to do while on earth. Please update asap!! |
Reviewed By: autumn On: August 06, 2002 13:14 CDT Comment/Review: Intense!! First, you had me crying because that scene with Bulma at Vegeta's bedside was so incredibly touching. Then you shock me with Vegeta's memory loss and violent awakening. Cool! They are all in a lot of trouble now... I hope Bulma can bring him back to his senses. She seems to be his soul mate so maybe she's the key. Whatever the outcome, I'm interested to see what your creative mind comes up with. Thanks for the update and hope you're feeling better. :) |
Reviewed By: Storm_410 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2002 12:47 CDT Comment/Review: Wow! What a turn of events. This fic is deffinetly a one of a kind. Keep writing!
Storm
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Reviewed By: POAS [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2002 11:50 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: ROTFLMAO! That ending was too funny, and Krillin's bad singing; I didn't even know Krillin even sang. Was Krillin telling Vegeta about the first fight what brought this up, or has Vegeta just forgotten everything?! You leave me confused! Guess I'll just have to wait until the next chapter, eh?
^_^ POAS -_- |
Reviewed By: kodomo On: August 06, 2002 10:12 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Chpt 12 was REALLY Great!!! You are such a talented writer!! From "Bad to Worse" was terrific and "Two sides to a story" is even better!! I can't wait to read your updates! You give all the characters (esp. Vegeta) such depth and the range of emotions, The Ending is going to be spectacular, I know it~ Please continue to write more!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: autumn On: August 02, 2002 12:33 CDT Comment/Review: Excellent, excellent sequel to From Bad to Worse. You have such an original take on things and your writing is superb. Hey, nobody knows what happens in those missing timeblocks so why not have some fun with it? I love your storyline!! Poor Vegeta, though, he's been through a lot. Glad to see he got to Bulma in the nick of time... but what's going to happen now?? This is great, can't wait for the update. :) |
Reviewed By: Darkfire85 On: July 24, 2002 10:10 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Need...next...chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next! |
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