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Reviewed By: Rae George [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2002 22:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmm... Just re-read chapter 11, got all teary-eyed and stuff.
Hm. Let's see. Figuring this out. Vegeta has no heartbeat for the moment, has lost loads of blood, and is unresponsive. Yet, he obviously can't be clinically dead (I actually looked this up in a medical dictionary once--fascinating stuff) because it'd be a big hassle to wish him back and all them over at New Namek would be very hesitant towards using a whole wish just to bring him back. SO! Taking into account those two little details, it seems to me that a little healing action from Dende is in order here, don't you think?
Well, I'll wait till the next chapter. Don't strain yourself. I'm patient. |
Reviewed By: Lupin Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2002 03:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
V_V Holy monkies. Wow, that was a truely, truely amazing chapter. The ending was just so...so right for the moment. I'm on the edge of my seat!! I can't wait to find out what you have planned. ^-^ Great fic so far and you'll hear from me again! -lol- |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2002 00:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay so I would be extremely upset right now if it wasn't for the fact that this story is written in the orignal timeline and Vegeta is so not dead right now. Well okay...he is but that's because I'm watching the Buu Saga.
Well I would have to say that this chapter rates a 20 out of 10 on my damness scale. It was simply wonderful and a real tear-jerker. Grade A stuff.
Don't worry about the updates because the last thing you want to do is make yourself worse. Here's to your health.-JB |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: July 15, 2002 23:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was so sad i almoat CRIED!!!!!
noooooo! vegeta can't be dead!!!!! and in such a gruesome way too... you've definitely got a way with words, that's for certain. i REALLY would enjoy your updating soon, but if you can't, well with a story as incredible as this, i can't hold it against you. it's gotta take time to pump those chapters out!
eleven! i give the whole thing an eleven! probably more! fantastic! |
Reviewed By: POAS [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2002 20:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
Vegeta: ...
POAS: You really did kill him... *sniff* S'not fair... It's not fair Darke! How could you! *Cries*
Vegeta: That's not fair... People like to kill me...
POAS: Good chapter like always...
Vegeta: It's not good! I'm DEAD!
POAS: Shut up... Bye Darke! |
Reviewed By: Rae George [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2002 14:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter, as usual. Don't worry about updates--take as long as you want. Your health is much more important, got it? Don't work on this unless you want to. And feel better soon, for the sake of being better, not just because thousands of people may be demanding the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: Shay On: July 13, 2002 16:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GENEOUS!!! That is what you are. These fanfics of yours are overall, I'd have to say the best I've ever read. Your veiws into the whole Bulma and Vegeta get together are great along with his whole attitude(how it ties in with the actual anime to make sense). ok well nough said by me just please keep the chapters coming the wait is killing me! |
Reviewed By: POAS [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2002 17:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think it'd be funny if Gohan were to kick Vegeta's ass! ^_^ Oh I think this is the best chapter yet! Can't wait for more, even though I have to -.-
$_$ POAS @_@ |
Reviewed By: Rae George [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2002 16:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ubi est Chapter Eleven? *pout* I hope you're okay and your computer hasn't, like, blown up or something. Because that would suck. You can have my computer if you need it. :-) |
Reviewed By: Lupin Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2003 14:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
-swoons- Wow..About damn time! -lol- ^-^ This chapter was awesome. I liked how it was done. (And mind you it was done very well) That little scene with Trunks and the christmas tree was great. -fofl- Poor Vegeta. Man, only one more chapter. That's a shame but at the same time, this story has been so awesome, its all worth it. ^-^ I'll just have to re-read them both again. -lol- Once again I applaude you on your fabulous work. Ja'Ne! |
Reviewed By: zosocrowe [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2002 18:20 CDT
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Thank goodness your story was here! I was so ticked when I discovered FF.net was still down and I knew you'd updated, but I couldn't get to the chapter! ARG! Anyway, another great chapter! Poor Vegeta, he's so tortured! I hope you send him home, where he belongs! I loved the talk with Gohan, I started laughing, especially when Vegeta gives him beer then downs a few before starting "The talk"....LMAO...that was so great and so...Vegeta...awesome job! |
Reviewed By: Chichi On: June 26, 2002 13:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I screw through a hole in the sheet? That one was pretty funny. Excellent story! Loved the Gohan and Vegeta Bonding too. Post the next chapter soon! |
Reviewed By: Zorella [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2002 03:23 CDT
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haha! tstas did needed a bit of humor lately, though that was so funny :D I never would of thought of veggie giving gohan a 'little talk'. Great idea, great story, you've just inspired me to go back to writing my own poor little negleted fic... :) |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: June 25, 2002 02:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
OH MY GOD THIS IS A DAMN GOOD STORY!!!!!!!!!!
WOW!!!!!
heh, yeah, i think this is decent and worthwhile for you to update (as soon as you can. or july 5th, whichever comes first. sooner is better though. just my opinion.)
oh, and, YAY! YOU UPDATED!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Serenestorm [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2002 15:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love this fic!! Anyway I have so many questions, will vegeta ever get his powers back, what's up with the black mail thing, how is Gohan's tutoring coming along (he,he), and for the love of all that is just, will chichi ever stop being such a bitch!??. I mean normally she is my fav. character but come on. Guess I'll have to wait for these answers huh, hopefully not long.
BTW: Chapter 9 was uploaded twice.
Ja ne!!!:) |
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