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Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2002 01:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*blinks* Damn... |
Reviewed By: Kandy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2002 17:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Trunks, why? |
Reviewed By: Susan On: April 26, 2002 15:51 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Christ Almighty!! You should be crowned the King Of Angst! Trunks is in a coma and Veggie's been missing for all this time. Poor Bulma, I don't know how she can deal with all this. I can't wait till you update, cause there's got to be a light at the end of this tunnel. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: April 16, 2002 01:20 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL!! "You taste like chicken"-great line (to everyone except Furiza). Good riddance to the Installation and all the assorted a$$holes that worked in it. Furiza met a fitting end, along with another part of his anatomy ^_^. What's gonna happen to Veggie now? I mean he can't die, specially after thinking of Trunks and Bulma. Maybe he's starting to regret that he left Capsule Corp. Awesome chapter!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2002 00:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn...
-JB |
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2002 20:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know if I can take anymore of Vegeta getting the blunt end of it all. He's been through so much...and you have to admit, if he left CC he wouldn't be where his is now. Besides finally getting revenege by killing Frieza now, is it worth his life? His ability to summon his ki? And will he ever get back home, and make things right with Bulma & Trunks? Oh! I just can't take it...but you I'll be here on the 26th! Laters! |
Reviewed By: Kandy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2002 16:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa, you bring new meaning to the word "original" This is excellent, even though I found one spelling error. Frieza's such a dirty it. Keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2002 13:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That is soooo f*** up!!!! Man, I really can't believe this happening to Vegeta. Again!!!! Poor guy just can't get a break! I hope that slimy pink freak is brutally tortured after this. And the guards too. How dare they leave Vegeta with HIM!! I really liked your memories they all fit perfectly into the timeline but then again that's what you do best. I checked out your webpage the other day and man, you're as talented an artist as you are a writer. Sheesh, some people get all the talent. Anyway looking forward to the 15th.-JB |
Reviewed By: AngelKali02 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2002 13:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sighs* that whole "full of shit like your father" sent me rolling on the floor ^_^ and i have to agree i got pissed at goku when he didn't come back, it was pretty selfish of him. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: April 06, 2002 04:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I can't believe I made thru this chapter without trying to slash my wrists. So Specimen F was Frieza all along and I can guess what he's done to Veggie. I think I'm gonna be sick. It's bad enough that Veg is being held against his will and experimented on and that his memories are driving him up the wall. I want him to destroy Frieza once and for all. Great chap!! |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing On: April 05, 2002 17:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
KUSO! Man! You--ARGH! Ok, flaming, stinking klfnsf (deep breath)... Ok, I'm slightly better. As soon as you said Specimen F I knew it was him! Turd! Bringing him back! You'd better make his death nice and long. OH! The suspense is turning my--nevermind. I must write now.... hmmm, interesting...my idea was along these lines too, but not quite. So, does Bulma figure it out and use her influence to save him, and who is useing Vegeta's card? That's how Bulma would find out after all.... |
Reviewed By: Chibi Beji [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2002 17:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude, that was great, as usual! The bit with Gohan was well done, I really enjoyed it! Still feel really bad for Vegeta though...as always with your fics. Not to say that I don't like that, it's awesome!
Keep up the awesome work! |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2002 00:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter. I really liked your little Krillin/18 romance, it's so sweet. Man, it sucks to be a Saiyan's woman, though I do like Bulma and ChiChi's little two woman support group. I feel sorry for Gohan. He's all alone now that Vegeta is gone (I mean since there are no other Saiyans). True there's Trunks but he really doesn't count. Yet. Oh, speaking of Trunks, his little Vegeta-like antics are absolutely adorable! Well if you haven't figured it out yet, I loved the last chapter and can't wait til the fifth.-JB |
Reviewed By: Susan On: March 25, 2002 17:20 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent chapter. I'm glad to see that both CC and Bulma are living together and supporting each other. Vegeta on the other hand...is just being Vegeta. I'm beginning to think that Bulma's better off without him. Can't wait to read more. |
Reviewed By: Maxine [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2002 20:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hehe, almost forgot you had an account here. Of course, I could have gone to your site too...oh well! I was going crazy when FF.N was down and I couldn't read the next chapter, then I remembered, duh!
Anyhoo, LOVED IT! The part with Gohan was hilarious, but also touching, in a way. I guess no one ever considered what it would be like for him to go through puberty without a father. Well, except for you of course. ^__^ Gah, I can't believe I have to wait almost two more weeks for the next part!! I can do it, I can! It's not...too...much...longer...right? *sigh* Well, loved it, and I'll be back on the 8th! |
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