| "Ranma's Hour of Darkness" Reviews/Comments [ 32 ] |
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Reviewed By: dogbertcarroll [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2007 13:59 CDT
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I've been waiting for an update for quite a while. It's a good story.
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Reviewed By: Hiryo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2007 19:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!
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Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2007 06:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this is really great work. I hope that there'll be more.
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Title: Enjoyed
Reviewed By: TerraBull [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2006 23:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Enjoyed the read. What did Gos become then? I was curious if he did become a Demon, what type? A Succubus like Cindy or something totally inhuman? I am curious if Happi suggested to Ms Hinako Transmigration as a possible cure, or did she already do something like that? Update when you can.
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Reviewed By: Innortal [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2006 08:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not a bad re-write, much better in my opinion, and Ranma is evolving at a better rate. When can we expect more?
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Title: You should know
Reviewed By: kurokawa On: April 10, 2006 13:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, You seem to be doing just fine. Your writeing as i said before it in it self is a nice peace of work but don't forget you still need to catchup...... Much to do not much time good luck.
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Title: dead links
Reviewed By: ho-iatneh On: April 07, 2006 18:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
not bad tho chapter 7 through 9 are dead links...yes...they are...anyhow
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Reviewed By: WarpWizard [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2006 02:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
Good stuff! I want to read more. Thanks for writing.
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Reviewed By: Scyggy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2006 22:42 CST
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Hm... very good, original to a degree, not boring to read, nice realistic sex scenes, as far as I can tell... Not so much of a 'video-gamization' as a lot of other fics are. You aren't really to the 'meat' of the story yet, as far as I can tell, so I won't judge your plotting ability yet, though it's pretty good so far. Keep up the good work, hope to see more from you.
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Reviewed By: goku_90504 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2006 15:10 CST
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i hope you don't see akane as mearly prudeish she's been tramatized by kuno and the hoard thats why she is the way she is she's terrafied of the possability that someone might force them selves on her that is why she's always so angry at ranma shes really terrafied of him because of how skilled he is and translates that into anger
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Reviewed By: JohnnyG [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2006 10:09 CST
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Nice chapter. Keep up good work.
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Title: AWaC
Reviewed By: Waruiko On: March 30, 2006 03:53 CST
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Hinako-Chan/Ranma/Ma-Chan lemon! WOOT I hope I'm right! ROFEL! LOLI! Now all we need is Pedo-Bear!
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Reviewed By: mimizukujin [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2006 19:15 CST
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Yeah, that lemon was probably 'Moonlight's Gift', by TeflonBooger. It's in the Sakura Lemon Fanfic Archive, if anyone else is interested.
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Reviewed By: Formus On: March 26, 2006 18:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good stuff, but reminds me a bit of an old Ranma 1/2 lemon with a succubus or two in it. Maybe it was Lemonade Punch? I can't remember... Anyway, good work, first lemon I could be bnothered to read in quite a while. Keep the story coming however, don't get lost in thise little flings on the side.
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Title: AWaC
Reviewed By: Waruiko On: March 26, 2006 00:48 CST
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I won't go into much depth, as there isn't much to go into when most of the chapter is smut, but I like how Cindy didn't guess the value of Ranma's first time properly. The way you originaly had that set up kinda rubed me the wrong way, but this is better. Also if Ranma never has sex in his girl form with anyone, including Cindy, then Cindy will allways have a "virgin" form to take since she seems to enjoy the fealing so much.
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