"Into the Gekkou" Reviews/Comments [ 87 ] |
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Title: yay Reviewed By: kitsuneyoukolover On: May 06, 2006 08:22 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: that wasn't very nice u using a cliff hanger like that arn't sapposed to do that. it was long though. but no more cliff hangers. well thanks for updating regularly none of my other favorite storys do other than this one of course. hey do u think u can make kagome a kitsune in another story and she has mood ring eyes. sorry i am absessed with kitsunes and mood eyes i have them and they are light blue with a little red and a hint of grey. i have only had that when i met a cheer leader and i realy loathed her. hey can u email me and tell me how i can get a story put together. i have an idea of a hiei story
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2006 03:43 EDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: lol Update soon Please i want to see what she does after the scream!
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Reviewed By: LadyLuck13 On: April 26, 2006 20:04 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: i dont give reviews...ever. but this story is AWSOME!!! and i agree with the other people, you should make it a kagome/yoko/kuronue. that would be fricken amazing lol. threesoms are.....fun ;)
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Title: Yes I Too Want 3Some Reviewed By: Fox Vixen not logged On: April 19, 2006 22:49 EDT Comment/Review: I don't care if you ain't no good at writin 3somes it just the fact that u wrote one that I would love you! And it a Kuronue/Kagome/Yoko pairing :D Update soon
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Title: Chapter 6 Reviewed By: Kage Otome (Shadow Maiden-NSI) On: April 19, 2006 18:43 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Love it! Hm, who was the shadowed figure? *ponders* I wonder... Kawaii, loved the playful and friction of the relationship between the three. If you do decide to make it a Kuronue/Kagome/Youko, well, I certainly wouldn't object ^_^ Keep up the good work, I can't wait to see what you have planned next.
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Reviewed By: OblivionAngel On: April 16, 2006 01:42 EDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: I luv the story so far and can't wait until the next update. Although...I was curious...the summary said this was going to be a Kuronue/Kagome fiction, could you possibly make it into a threesome pairing? ^^; I'm very fond Youko/Kagome/Kuronue pairings and can't find any stories anywhere with that threesome. Please?
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Reviewed By: Anonymous0 On: April 09, 2006 14:24 EDT Comment/Review: Please update real soon. This is really great. When will father find out about Kagome's powers.
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Reviewed By: Sana-chan On: April 09, 2006 10:36 EDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I enjoyed this chapter.It was worth the wait. Please update soon.Thank you ^.^
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Reviewed By: sesshoumarustruluv(notloggedin) On: April 02, 2006 14:41 EDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Great chappies once again! I can't wait to read more. It's a joy to see that you've added chapters. Keep up the great work!!
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Reviewed By: KogasGrl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2006 23:23 EST Comment/Review: Really good story. I don't give out reviews very often, so feel proud that your stoy was good enough to get one.
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Title: YEAH! Reviewed By: Fox Vixen not logged On: March 30, 2006 20:54 EST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I like this chapter too update soon! You should make a love triangle with Yoko/Kagome/Kuronue. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: blurby On: March 30, 2006 12:40 EST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: this is a great story line, but would you please put appostrophies in?
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Reviewed By: jamc79 On: March 29, 2006 09:36 EST Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I enjoy reading crossover stories and have been pleasantly surprised with this one. I appreciate how the story line is different from the other crossovers I've read recently. I also like that the story line is moving along at a nice tempo. I abhor a story that seems to drag along at a snail's pace. I don't know if anyone told you, but your use of 'ne' in chapter 3 was correct. It doesn't really have a direct translation into an English word, but it is similar to someone saying 'right?' rhetorically at the end of a sentence. Keep up the good work. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
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Title: Chapter 4 Reviewed By: Kage Otome On: March 29, 2006 03:38 EST Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: It was wonderful! Yay! Kuronue entered! Though I do wonder if their will be a competition for Kagome's affections between Reimei and Kuronue, or perhaps Kuronue and Yoko? Keep up the good work, I loved the interaction!
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Title: wowie! Reviewed By: Inu_lurvs_me On: March 28, 2006 21:19 EST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: GAH! i wufs it! *pokes u* u better update soon!!!
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