| "Into the Gekkou" Reviews/Comments [ 87 ] |
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Title: Yes I Too Want 3Some
Reviewed By: Fox Vixen not logged On: April 19, 2006 22:49 EDT
Comment/Review:
I don't care if you ain't no good at writin 3somes it just the fact that u wrote one that I would love you! And it a Kuronue/Kagome/Yoko pairing :D Update soon
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Title: Chapter 6
Reviewed By: Kage Otome (Shadow Maiden-NSI) On: April 19, 2006 18:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it! Hm, who was the shadowed figure? *ponders* I wonder... Kawaii, loved the playful and friction of the relationship between the three. If you do decide to make it a Kuronue/Kagome/Youko, well, I certainly wouldn't object ^_^ Keep up the good work, I can't wait to see what you have planned next.
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Reviewed By: OblivionAngel On: April 16, 2006 01:42 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I luv the story so far and can't wait until the next update. Although...I was curious...the summary said this was going to be a Kuronue/Kagome fiction, could you possibly make it into a threesome pairing? ^^; I'm very fond Youko/Kagome/Kuronue pairings and can't find any stories anywhere with that threesome. Please?
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Reviewed By: Anonymous0 On: April 09, 2006 14:24 EDT
Comment/Review:
Please update real soon. This is really great. When will father find out about Kagome's powers.
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Reviewed By: Sana-chan On: April 09, 2006 10:36 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed this chapter.It was worth the wait. Please update soon.Thank you ^.^
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Reviewed By: sesshoumarustruluv(notloggedin) On: April 02, 2006 14:41 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chappies once again! I can't wait to read more. It's a joy to see that you've added chapters. Keep up the great work!!
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Reviewed By: KogasGrl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2006 23:23 EST
Comment/Review:
Really good story. I don't give out reviews very often, so feel proud that your stoy was good enough to get one.
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Title: YEAH!
Reviewed By: Fox Vixen not logged On: March 30, 2006 20:54 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this chapter too update soon! You should make a love triangle with Yoko/Kagome/Kuronue. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: blurby On: March 30, 2006 12:40 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a great story line, but would you please put appostrophies in?
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Reviewed By: jamc79 On: March 29, 2006 09:36 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoy reading crossover stories and have been pleasantly surprised with this one. I appreciate how the story line is different from the other crossovers I've read recently. I also like that the story line is moving along at a nice tempo. I abhor a story that seems to drag along at a snail's pace. I don't know if anyone told you, but your use of 'ne' in chapter 3 was correct. It doesn't really have a direct translation into an English word, but it is similar to someone saying 'right?' rhetorically at the end of a sentence. Keep up the good work. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
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Title: Chapter 4
Reviewed By: Kage Otome On: March 29, 2006 03:38 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was wonderful! Yay! Kuronue entered! Though I do wonder if their will be a competition for Kagome's affections between Reimei and Kuronue, or perhaps Kuronue and Yoko? Keep up the good work, I loved the interaction!
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Title: wowie!
Reviewed By: Inu_lurvs_me On: March 28, 2006 21:19 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GAH! i wufs it! *pokes u* u better update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: k-girl17 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2006 12:42 EST
Comment/Review:
it doesn't suck it is a great story update soon ok
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Title: Chapter 3
Reviewed By: Kage Otome On: March 25, 2006 21:37 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting, Kagome's power. So will Kuronue have some competition for Kagome's affection (Reimei) I can't wait for the next chapter!
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Title: Your story
Reviewed By: Dannie On: March 25, 2006 14:11 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey great story I can't wait until the next chapter so hurry up and update!! {joking}
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