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| "Playing With Ranma" Reviews/Comments [ 41 ] | | Pages (3): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 ] | Reviewed By: BTSV On: January 04, 2007 05:19 CST
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Just ignore "Jaded Ranma fan". It's obvious he/she doesn't understand the point of creating an Alternate Universe story. I second that. He's a real whiner.
| Reviewed By: Scyggy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2006 01:59 CDT
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Hm, nice Ranma hentai fic. You've got a few unique ideas among the overly used ones, and that's saying something good. I look foward to what you come up with next.
| Title: Where the heck did that come from?
Reviewed By: Alias Aaron Aecher On: May 22, 2006 19:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy your fanfic. It's a diffrent change of pace than most ranma hentai fanfics. If you need suggesstion for character pair ups, there's always Ryoga, Ukyo, even Hinako. in another twisted pair off, Ranma and Gosunkugi or Ranma and a tentacle sex monster (would like to see that one myself!)
| Reviewed By: elgreygato On: May 18, 2006 05:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Decent so far. Not much plot to speak of at this point, so it's getting a bit episodic. This isn't quite a PWP, but it may yet end up that way. I'm interested that you used Makoto and Hiromi, however. Boku no Futatsu no Tsubasa isn't exactly a big-name, widespread fandom, so it was a good surprise to see them here. I bet Makoto and Ranma could have quite a bit of creative fun. ^_^ And, just in case you didn't know, DummyScan took over for ADTRW in scanslating BnFnT.
| Title: just wondering
Reviewed By: Mz Demeanor On: May 15, 2006 07:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is excellent and by far the funniest I've read. There is is still a couple of Ranma 1/2 girls that have yet joined the fray and Im dying to know if Ranma would succeed in his quest. On another note, I love the fact that Nabiki and Kasumi has not yet succumbed to Ranma's seduction. Could there be something more to it? I would like to read more of what happens next and how far can Nabiki resist Ranma. (Please have Nabiki resist for the longest time possible, I enjoyed their little trysts far too much for her to be bedded too early.) I want to see the lengths Nabiki would go through to try resisting Ranma. I would love how Ranma would Handle the rest of his would be fiancees such as Ukyo, Shampoo and Kodachi... Just imagining the chaos you could create is making me giddy with anticipation. Please continue writing... GO Nabiki-Chan! Resist temptation!
| Reviewed By: Neon King 4 On: May 09, 2006 19:16 CDT
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like this story a lot can't wait to see what happens next. will ranma get urd, hild, kasumi and usagi plus any other females. get them pregnant? does nodaka get progress reports on who and if any children plus if he's learned any new techniqus, maybe she wants him to show her what he has learned and what improvements he has made. well genmas not going to be coming back any time soon. will girls from tenchi muyo, girls bravo, battle vixens, devil hunter yohko and the other digger girls make an apperance and ranma screws them. siren would help ranma with his quest from nodaka if he could get there that is. ranma meets the mido family, well there are bound to be some two or 8 families keeping the sex demons away? main starlet of battle vixens is hot, ranma savingthe girls though he would need to improve his skill and power to fight. lara croft maybe visits to get some stress relief, street fighter, KOF and doa females come meet ranma for the same relief. wonder what happend to the 2 girls ranma is doing now as something strange happend will doing them. wonder what all the tea will do, plus is ranma going to ask why tofu made the tea bag and gave it out. ranma getting kasumi pregnant will help with the honour well he did the same with the other families. akanes going to lose it seeing she is tring to suppres the sexual need, plus she lashes out when she get anger when trying to ignore the problem. up date soon and more sex with the other girls plus what is happening with the outers and will ranma get usagi next chapter along with kasumi and urd. need t read soon please up date.
| Title: Ukyo
Reviewed By: RagnaBlade On: May 08, 2006 23:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't like how you left Ukyo out of the story. She is an intergal Ranma 1/2 character and shouldn't be left out completely. Nor do I think that she should be pregnant, that's just too convienent a plot device to remove her from the story (in case your wondering I'm an Ukyo fan if you haven't already figured that out). Maybe have her become another sex ninja along the lines of what Yuka and Sayuri are becoming. Ranma could decided to found a new sex-ninja clan with him at the head and start recruiting willing female trainees/followers/concubines to form the basis of the new clan. Personally I think the whole encounter with Ukyo needs to be reworked; however, since you are the author you have complete autonomy in what you can do with story so my criticism probably won't sway you to include Ukyo in the story.
| Reviewed By: Ignore Jaded Ranma fan On: May 05, 2006 10:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just ignore "Jaded Ranma fan". It's obvious he/she doesn't understand the point of creating an Alternate Universe story. I think you're doing a fine job, and I look forward to the next chapter.
| Title: This is NOT a Ranma 1/2 fanfic
Reviewed By: Jaded Ranma fan On: May 03, 2006 19:10 CDT
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Call it a personal bias, but fanfics like these really, really, really have been irking me as of late. Maybe this is because I've been reading through the Ranma 1/2 Manga and meeting and speaking with other writers who have turned a disgusted pen away from the Ranma Fandom. However, the way I see it, this fanfic isn't about Ranma 1/2 anymore. In fact, the same can be said for many fanfics that have Ranma out and screwing anything lacking of a Y Chromosome. These fanfictions are cleverly (or poorly) disguised Author Avatar or Self-Insertion fanfics that use Ranma as said avatar. What we have here is a bare bones caricature of Ranma's character running around laying girls from other fandoms who honestly in this scenario wouldn't DREAM of having any relations with an egotistical, conniving, dishonorable bastard like Ranma Saotome. This is fanrape, just like every other Ranma 1/2 fanfic that has this ridiculous premise.
| Reviewed By: DrewB On: April 21, 2006 23:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have never read anything quite like this. Update soon.
| Reviewed By: goku_90504 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2006 22:11 CST
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ranma has alot of imaganation though its more or less geared towards battle ranma is not at all dumb just ignorant to a very high degree after all being intelegent does not mean you will have high grades if you dont study at all
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