| "Beneath a Shattered Fountain" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lil Nezumi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2007 06:43 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This story is wonderful. I hope that you continue through with it. I love Draco!Veela stories and this one is certainly original, with the cage. I also love that Hermione is dusty and bookburning the ones that are useless. Ron went the way I always thought he'd go, I can just picture him with a slave and I know it would be abused. Please don't give him one. Update when you can, but please continue this story.
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Reviewed By: Dream Keeper [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2007 15:24 CDT
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Wow... I REALLY like this story. You write the characters really well and I enjoy how Draco reacts to the different situations. Update again soon, please? ^_^
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2007 21:17 CDT
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Poor draco I really feel sorry for him I mean he loves Harry so much but Harry treats him like this. I AM LOVING YOUR STORY. update soon
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Title: my special praise
Reviewed By: Soubi_mine [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2007 09:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
at first i was freaked out that it was so dark and Harry was kinda evil but it sucked me in and i want more. Funny thing is i've always thought of Draco as the uke but very rarely does anybody pull it off very well but you did kick ass, i couldn't have done better. WRITE MORE LIKE NOW!!!
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Reviewed By: Kasen_Kurama [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2007 11:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
uuuuuuuuuppppppp ddddaaaaaattttteeeeee please!
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Reviewed By: DracoDormiens [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2007 04:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooh. I can't believe I only now found this fic. Dark!Harry and veela!Draco, a couple of my personal favorites! Absolutely love them! Harry can be so sweet, yet so...evil at the same time. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2007 17:54 CST
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Yay!!!! I'm loving this story sooooo much. The whole Draco slave thing is really a good idea. You do a really good job at keeping this story interesting. ^.^
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Title: I agree with Kin-chan Pandun.
Reviewed By: Luv Shadow 14 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2007 18:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is so cool! I can't wait to read more of it!!!! I'm just so excited that you updated it! I'll be looking for more chapters soon! Yay! lol ~Luv Shadow~
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Title: P.S.
Reviewed By: Kin-chan Pandun [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2007 14:56 CST
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Thank you for working so hard on this story and updating so many enjoyable chapters all at once. I loved every minute of reading them. >>>Also: Uke Draco is so cute and sexy!
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Title: Review for the entire story.
Reviewed By: Kin-chan Pandun [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2007 14:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I totally adore this story. I love everything about it. One peeve: Fred and George. I sort of like the originals better, but no biggie. Also: Is Draco getting any sexual gratification from these encounters? Because you write them like he isn't and then you say Harry scourgifies BOTH of them afterwards. Draco should be enjoying these things to the fullest. I can hardly wait to see what happens next. Is the Malfoy meeting going to happen next chapter or the one after? Will Harry and Draco grow closer?(Please make it so.)>>>>Thanks for writing, Kin.
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Title: osm
Reviewed By: Luv Shadow 14 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2007 21:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just have one thing to say before I get to reviewing, and this is on the review before mine titled "Quick Correction:" Who the fuck cares if it's in the "wrong section?!" I don't think it is! I think it is a great story with great potential! And if they have a problem with it, take it up with me. Anyway, like I said, this was a great story so far! I know you updated this on April 14, 2006, but I hope that you will update it soon! It's just so good! And I have to agree with AngelsRebellion: Draco and Harry ARE the sexiest combination I can think of! I love the part about Harry turning dark and Malfoy gaining veela wings. That really is original. My favorite part about this story, though, is that Harry made Malfoy his bitch. lmao I just think that is so cool. Well, I really do hope you will update this soon! You shouldn't spoil an osm story! Please, please, please, please, PLEASE update! ...Please...? lol ~Luv Shadow~
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Reviewed By: Quick correction On: June 30, 2006 18:19 CDT
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You have your story posted in the wrong section. This isn't an original story, it's HP fanfic
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Reviewed By: AngelsRebellion_lo On: April 14, 2006 20:17 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
o.O Harry's a bit scary isn't he? It's gonna be interesting, seeing this story unfold. It will unfold wont' it? Hope so. Update soon. XD
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Reviewed By: AngelsRebellion [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2006 19:20 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh please tell me this isn't a one-shot. please please please!!! It's just too good, I absolutely love it. Draco and Harry, now that is just about the sexiest combination I can think of. Really great, please continue it!
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Reviewed By: yanagi not logged in On: March 22, 2006 17:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was really good. I forgot to check to see if it's a one shot. I really hope it isn't.
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