| "Ancient Powers Long Forgotten" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
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Reviewed By: God Of Deaths Little Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2002 19:55 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was cute I liked it alot. hehehe the ending made me laugh alot. :) This was awesome! Peace |
Reviewed By: mai On: March 16, 2002 21:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: Shooting Star On: March 15, 2002 18:19 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! Please make this an S+S fanfic! It's so cool what happens next? Write more write more! |
Reviewed By: Digifan316 On: March 14, 2002 22:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
CROW (Li): You killed my mom... but I still love you.
TOM: Li dosen't get that she dumped him the hard way, does he?
BRIAN: MAKE IT S+S PLEASE! |
Reviewed By: Cyber Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2002 22:28 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you went way overboard kill is one thing torturing is a whole nother thing. You seem to have gone way over the top. |
Reviewed By: God Of Deaths Little Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2002 14:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey this is really cool, I like the idea. I was really excited when I saw what books you were taking the ideas from, I've read them all! I love how you have put some lines in from The Forgotten Beasts Of Eld, it is an awesome book. I was so happy that some one had used the animals because they all totally kick ass! Anyways I think you should make is S+S but I mean I wouldn't stop reading it if ya don't! This is really interesting! You're a great author! Peace |
Reviewed By: Cyber Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2002 02:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope and prey that this does not turn out to be a S+S he has done to much to her for little reason other than his clan told him to or be cast out. That is not a good enough reason to kill her, her family and friends. |
Reviewed By: ryoku On: March 13, 2002 22:29 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i would have given you a 20 but they didn't have it 10 was the hiest rating! well any way i love your story its excelent i'll be back when the next chapter comes out. see ya |
Reviewed By: Cyber Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2002 04:40 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Comment/Review:
No not after what he did. For fear of losing his family and not to death but just them ignoring him he kill her family and friends. It would have been one thing if his family had been threaten with death but it is a hole nother thing if it was just to cast him out. |
Reviewed By: ~*LoveBug*~ On: March 11, 2002 16:42 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please Oh please make this a Li and Sakura
Fanfic!!! I like shooting stars idea. Please oh please make this a Li and Sakura Fanfic!!
I love this Fanfic so much don't ruin it by not
making it a Li and Sakura fanfic. Please continue and make a Li and Sakura fanfic |
Reviewed By: Shooting star On: March 10, 2002 15:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi its me again. I have an idea for you.
You know how you said that Li has killed sakura's
brother and father right? Well that could be a clow card that took an image of Li o lets say
the mirror card? And the real Li was trapped by the stupid Li clan the whole time and wasn't even there. So I hope you check out you're fan mail.
So read this and see what you think of it.
Hope it helps with you're fanfic. So please just make it a Sakura and Li fanfic.
They make a Kawaii couple!!!! |
Reviewed By: Shooting Star On: March 10, 2002 15:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi there! I hope that you check this place out where you get you're fan mail stuff. Here is
what I think that you should do. I say that
you should make it a Sakura and Li fanfic.
Those two so like totally belong together. So please oh please put them to gether in this fanfic I'll die if you don't. I wish I could e-mail you but my parents wont let me so I really hope that you look at you're comments, on you're
fanfic site. Please please make it a Sakura and Li fanfic please. |
Reviewed By: ~* CherryBlossom*~ On: March 08, 2002 16:42 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi there! I congradulate you on you're first
fanfic. The rating should be changed to pg.13
for later on but rather then that, you are
doing a lovly job on this fanfic. Please continue As soon As posible. Oh one more thing.
Li and Sakura make the cutest couple. How are you going to put them as a couple in you're fanfic? I hope you do though. Oh I want to
congradulate you one last time. So congrats!
On you're very first fanfic. |
Reviewed By: Kero-chan On: March 08, 2002 16:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What happens next? Does Sakura and Li realy
become a couple after all what he did to her?
I mean don't get me wrong or any thing
Li and Sakura make a good couple. But please continue this story. I would like to know what
happens next I love these kind of fanfics. |
Reviewed By: SakuraSyaoran4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2002 12:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's so good! Please email me when your fics are updated at flovergirls@yahoo.com. This is gonna be S+s, right? Also maybe you could have her dad & brother come back to prove to sakura that it wasn't really Li's Clan who killed them but the mirror card ( like in shooting star's idea ). |
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