| "Eternity's Wake" Reviews/Comments [ 28 ] |
Reviewed By: kmn1829 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2010 13:18 CDT
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Omgggg pleaseeee update this story I love the fact that its not like all the other stories I've read. I want to know everything that happend w| inuyasha nd kagome nd yy his dad is involved lyk he had this planned or sumthinn
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Reviewed By: prettypet On: November 01, 2006 21:37 CST
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wow! this is really good! you need to update asap! and you need to tell me what's going on!!!!
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Reviewed By: lilomeinthecorner On: April 23, 2006 16:55 CDT
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o_O Oh... my GODS!!!!! Thisa is getting good! Update soon please!
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Reviewed By: inuyasha_cute_doggy_ears (not logged in) On: April 23, 2006 14:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So did Inuyasha and Kagome have a relationship before she lost her memory ...? I thought it was funny when Inuyasha was listing all the stuff that he would do to 'them'. lol. Well anyway, update soon because i can't wait to see what happens next. Love the story!
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Reviewed By: Midnight Moon On: April 23, 2006 08:38 CDT
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Hmmm, interesting... I'm realyy growing to this fiction... Yes, please write more soon.
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 01:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Still cant remember squat, eh? Heh, I still like the bit of mystery here. And Miroku does seem to know a lot bout whats wrong with Kagome. Interesting. Good chapter. Update when you can.
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Reviewed By: dangersque [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2006 21:57 CDT
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Well, I'm relieved I wasn't just seeing Firefly stuff where there was no Firefly stuff. I think this is the first time I've seen River Tam-ness in a character for an Inuyasha fanfic, which is weird, because there's so much you can do with a character like that it's not even funny. Beats seeing a She's All That rip off for the billionth time anyway. And YAY for potential Reavers (Naraku's bee thingies maybe?)! And if there are Reavers, Miroku can be Wash (because you know Sango's gotta be Zoe) and that would rock. Can you tell that I'm not a huge fan of Miroku? And that's the last time I'll mention Firefly. Promise. And this chapter gave me the feeling that Miroku might have had something to do with Kagome's amnesia. He just seemed to know a little too much, and get a little too nervous about Inuyasha's threats. Not that I think he had a whole lot to do with it, but was involved in a "Batman being a minor catalyst in Blue Beetle's death" kind of way.
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Title: Yo
Reviewed By: HigherBeing [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2006 20:50 CDT
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Awesome chapter! I loved it! It was really good! Continue on with the story! The plot is totally original. ^_^ update soon please!!!
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Title: oooo
Reviewed By: KAZ1167 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2006 20:51 CDT
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ooooooo...i really like where this story seems to be going...unless i'm completely off base...who knows! i hope you update soon! :)
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Reviewed By: lilomeinthecorner On: April 17, 2006 00:28 CDT
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Hee, this was funny in some parts. ^__^ Post mor soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: anubis_himura nli On: April 16, 2006 15:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again, wonderfully enticing chapter! Can't wait for another update!! ^.^ - always Anubis
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Reviewed By: Midnight Moon On: April 16, 2006 01:55 CDT
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Gotta say, this is very interesting... I can't wait to see what happenes next... so post more whenever possible!
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Reviewed By: inuyasha_cute_doggy_ears [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2006 22:47 CDT
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Wow, so Kagome is like some kind of bomb or something? And she can't remember anything but Inuyasha knows all about her. That's what i got out your story so far so you had better update soon! I need to continue reading this story b/c it is totally awesome!
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2006 17:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Getting good. Lots more info I see. Still a good bit of mystery, which I like. And love how he argues with his youkai. Makes me wonder who's going to win out sometimes, lol. Great chapter. Update when you can.
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Title: Miranda...
Reviewed By: dangersque [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2006 14:26 CDT
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So, you've turned Kagome into River Tam... It's about time someone did it. Will there be Reavers, or the equivalent? This may be one story where my Joss Whedon obsession might come in handy.
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Title: Yo
Reviewed By: HigherBeing [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2006 11:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*happens to scroll down review page* Oh looky! I was the first person! *beams* I never happen to be the first person! ^_^ Anyway: I have reviewed in a while so when I looked at my e-mail i says to myself, "What's Eternity's Wake??" But enough about that! The Story: Second chapter was the bomb. It had so much information, but in a good way so that it shed some light. If I understand correctly, Kagome doesn't remember who she is or why she's here, she finds help from a feminine-like man and a silver haired hanyou, she's told she is supposedly a "wepon of mass destruction" (i kind of laughed at that part), and she was supposedly operated on, but not completely finished, and now she has 30 days to stay... well... Kagome... And now I'm guessing those people who supposdely opperated on her will be after her again?? But who knows, it's your story after all. *whew* Plot sounds extreamly interesting! Keep goin'! I love it so far.
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Reviewed By: lilomeinthecorner On: April 05, 2006 15:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your SO on my favrits! I love the story! But now I want to know y Sesshomaru wants to talk to his father. That bugs me. And what a cliffie! Evil! You need to post more and tell me what happens!
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Reviewed By: Gothic Kagome On: April 04, 2006 22:07 CDT
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oh please dont stop i actualy realy happened to like it very much i just hope you make the chapters atinsy bit longer is all im sorry if im afending you i realy am i hope you keep up the good work with joys and smiles
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Reviewed By: SeikoChan On: March 31, 2006 20:42 CST
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Awesome job, cliffie! =O Can't wait until the next chapter! And btw, gj on your other fanfic as well. =)
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Title: COol
Reviewed By: Inuyasha Luvr11 On: March 28, 2006 21:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT PLEASE UPDATE!!
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Reviewed By: dangersque [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2006 21:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting start, I thought it was a little confusing, but that just goes with the genre. And that was an evil cliffhanger. This chapter kind of seemed like the teaser part of a show. Just really short and a what the fuck moment at the end. I must say though, Sesshoumaru was kind of a jerkass in this one. I must have spent 20 minutes looking for the bad grammar that he tried to point out. In fact, I'm still looking. This is going to bother me more than the fooled by the foolish thing. Lousy jerkass...
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Reviewed By: inuyasha_cute_doggy_ears [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2006 20:39 CST
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What's gonna happen next? I need to know! Update soon, i can't stand the evil cliff hangers ... although more people want to read the next chapter to see what will happen ... but thats beside the point. Love the story so far and can't wait to see what happens next!
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Reviewed By: DarkMoonStar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2006 16:09 CST
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omg what a cliffy, I'm loveing this story so far, so PLEASE update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Giggles a lot On: March 28, 2006 00:12 CST
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I like this story so far... it's funny how at the end I completely expected it to be Kikyo or someone else... I really like how it turned out to be Kagome instead... sounds like they were in love and split up or somethin like that... wow I'm a hopeless romantic lol... anyways keep it up and update soon! ~Giggles~ :)
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2006 22:41 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a good start. By the sounds of it at the end, that they know one another? And why was InuYasha all ticked off at his brother to begin with? Interesting. Well, I hope you continue. Would be nice to see where you take them. Update when you can.
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Title: ahh
Reviewed By: anubis_himura nli On: March 27, 2006 21:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ahhh why no more?? haha I want to read more!! ^^ excellent start; lookin' forward to a lot more Love always Anubis!
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Reviewed By: Midnight Moon On: March 27, 2006 18:31 CST
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Hmm, interesting... this seems to be a... good--shall we say?--story so far... I'm iterested to see what shall happen now, however, so try to post more soon... ~Midnight Moon
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Title: Yo
Reviewed By: HigherBeing [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2006 18:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
... oooooooooooo...... What... what's gonna happen?! Oh I thought it was great! really interesting! keep going!!!
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