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Reviewed By: fadingdreams [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2007 20:28 CST
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I quite like this. It seems your having fun torturing them! ^_~
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Reviewed By: fadingdreams [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2007 20:28 CST
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I quite like this. It seems your having fun torturing them! ^_~
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Reviewed By: fadingdreams [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2007 20:28 CST
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I quite like this. It seems your having fun torturing them! ^_~
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Title: Oooo Hurry!
Reviewed By: villagefox [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2007 18:01 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
U so gotta write another chapter Im dying here. I love the twist U put on Ryu being the bad guy. Im waiting for the next one Chow!+_+
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Reviewed By: tinkle time kelly [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2007 22:40 CST
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Good chapter! Looking forward to your next. Good Luck with everything. Later.
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Reviewed By: ellad [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2006 12:29 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I like shuichi being assertive when pushing Ryuichi away. changes a bit from his usual passive attitude. I like Ryu/Tatsu, so whoever you'll choose has written the email, I hope it won't have too much bad repercussions on them. Great fic, take your time but don't drop it!
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Reviewed By: Morlana [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2006 07:45 CDT
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In regards to the review before mine. I really do'nt think that Yuki should say anything beyond what he did in the first place. Shu had to find closure on his own, if Yuki would have interfered I think it would have left the door a little cracked for Ryu to make a comeback...I mean if it was in the cards it is but Shu needed to stand on his own feet and let the anger out. He probably would have lashed out at Yuki if he's spoken up.
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Reviewed By: Morlana [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2006 07:43 CDT
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Did Daisuki send the email? He seems to be really acting guilty. And I hope Ryu isn't having a heart attack, I mean the man just admitted that no matter what happens with Shu his true love is Tatsuha. Talk about beyond selfish.
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Reviewed By: Inari_kari [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2006 23:29 CDT
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This chapter was a bit uncertain...um, if you'll allow me to say, my friend and I were reading this and some things are just out of place-I mean, Yuki COULD have done MORE, y'know, instead of smiling meanly at the scene-and Shuichi could have tried to break down in the middle the 'throwing out Ryu' part and he could have called for Yuki, which Yuki would come to him thus bringing the two closer. This story is great, but the whole Eiri' thing made him look like A REAL BASTARD and HE Isn't. My friend and I are trying to decide if we hate Yuki or Ryu more (I mean, who could cheat on Shu?) ANyways, on to the positive things, liked how everything made my head spin, wish you can go faster with your chapters and, if you ever need help I'm all free (except for the time I use to write my fics). Thanks for the update and hurry up with the next one!!!!
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Title: Angst! yahooo!
Reviewed By: Angeloflight (not signed in) On: September 05, 2006 18:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! you updated! And angst, lots of angst. Ryu was delusional if he thought that Shuichi was just going to take him back. Nice play on both sides of the Drama. and Eiri's just standing on the sidelines laughing at Ryu *shakes head*. Hm... what diiiid happen in those 3 hours that they were alone. I must know, so write it in the next chapter please. I bet Daisuke sent those pictures to Shuichi. That's why he felt guilty. Muwaha. Well, keep up the good work and haul on the fluff, drama and angst. Oh, and lemony goodness.. can't forget that now can we?
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Title: tinkle time kelly
Reviewed By: tinkle time kelly [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2006 14:17 CDT
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Well done. Doesn't matter what you do next. Oh,there are so many option. And I'm looking forward to it.
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Reviewed By: tinkle time kelly [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2006 13:32 CDT
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Good chapter. It's about time that those two got together.
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Reviewed By: tinkle time kelly [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2006 13:28 CDT
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Good chapter. It's about time those two get together.Looking forward to your next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Ashcat [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2006 01:20 CDT
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For just a moment - knowing you as an author I thought OMG she's *not* going to make Shu pregnant in this one too?! Oh, that would be too much I think the betrayal with Tatsuha and Ryu love makes this one different and special enough :) How interesting that Eiri is waiting for him :) I can't wait to see how the next chapter goes!
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Reviewed By: Morlana [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2006 11:26 CDT
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Great chapter kept me on my toes. Yes I was wondering if Shu somehow got a hold of the news paper. I can't wait for the next chapter
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