| "Memories of Shadow and Light" Reviews/Comments [ 78 ] |
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Title: Formatting
Reviewed By: jhoney [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2006 15:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You might want to reupload this chapter. The formatting is off.
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Reviewed By: yokihsune [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2006 23:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
no...you can't just stop there -pout- i want to read more ^.^ its been great so far, can't wait for the update
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Reviewed By: Jenny C On: August 17, 2006 09:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read thiss tory all the way through and I think it's brilliant! I love the contast between Yami and Atem, the insight into everyone's thoughts, the brillaint storyline. I think this sticks out from other yu-gi-oh Ancient Egypt fics, and I would love to read more!
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Title: :'(
Reviewed By: kitten meru On: August 17, 2006 08:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
why have you fotgotten us? we are your loyal readers and we have enough heart to review! pleas eupdate, or we shal die of boredom from not being able to read such a good story! please update!
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Reviewed By: Yeri On: August 12, 2006 09:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT!!! Please up date soon!!! I will die if you don't!!!!! You Don't whant me to die do you??!! I can't wate till you up date!!! I LOVE IT!!I LOVE IT!!!!I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Cosmic Tomato [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2006 19:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've really, really missed this story....any chance of an update soon??? (I'll try the 'puppy dog eyes')
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Title: *
Reviewed By: kitten meru On: July 14, 2006 18:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Song* it's a good song
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Title: SOS (rescue me)
Reviewed By: kitten_meru [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2006 11:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
have you ever heard the some "SOS (Rescue me)" By Rihanna? It almost seems as if it was written for this story, but sung by a girl. it was strange, when i first heard the song i just thought about this story. you should listen to it!
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Reviewed By: mysticneko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2006 03:40 CDT
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I've liked the story so far. The only thing that bothered me was the messed up format on the last chapter. Made it hard for me to read. The changing between english/japanese/whatever its called is confusing but it makes sense why its being done.
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Reviewed By: kitten_meru [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2006 09:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely LOVE this fic! it's so much better than anything i've ever read before! it's so deep, i feel compelled to read on, as much as i can each day! you have a way with words... but what do all the words mean? (other language words, i mean) still, wonderfully done! keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: twister's revenge On: June 16, 2006 16:35 CDT
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YAY! you updated! im so happy... i think that this is the best yami/yugi fanfic that i have ever read! i love this one soooo much! i hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: darkphoenix1130 On: June 12, 2006 21:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES! UPDATE!!! awesome chapter, as per usual. the only thing that bothered me was the lack of paragraphs. it made it alittle difficult to read and took away from the overall presentation, but the writing was great. If you could go through and put them in id love it. sorry if im telling you things you already know^.^
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Title: Awsome!
Reviewed By: YGO Cupid [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2006 02:40 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like how the story went and how you put a little history to it. But one thing is bothering me the most is that... Is Yugi really going to die in Egypt? Or is he going to return to modern day Japan? I guess I'll find out in the next chapter then. *sigh* Well... don't leave me and everyone else hanging, kay?
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Reviewed By: D.S Gltich On: June 10, 2006 18:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
>_> Dammmmmmmnnnnnnn....I usually don't read yaoi of anything but....dammmmmmnnnnnnn....^_^; I like and I can't wait for the next chapter...Well...I can....but you get the picture...XD
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Reviewed By: Chaos Blade [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2006 15:15 CDT
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Oh! Now it's gonna heat up, huh? I can't wait! I liked this chapter, how you wrote Anzu, most people don't really try to write her out like you do. They just sort of, i dunno, make her act stupid or something. CAn't wait to see exactly how this is going to play out. Keep the updates comeing!!
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