| "Live and Let Die (Part 2): Awakenings" Reviews/Comments [ 151 ] |
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Reviewed By: GinaCat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2006 21:01 CDT
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Love it this story is awesome you rock I can't wait till you update again
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Reviewed By: Ayashi no Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2006 19:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i read some of your works on AFF and they're great. this one is funny and cool. i like what you did to that priest in the chap. today. keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: inu hanyou nikkie On: April 13, 2006 19:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sweet!! Awesome!! Whoot!Whoot!Whoot!! Walks up to her Goddess shrine erected in her room and lays for the offering of virtual Pocky, Ramen and Inuyasha plushies. The Literary Goddess has turned out another of her fantastic and super-dee-duper chapters!! I say 'KUDOS!!' and 'Right On!!' to you for writing such a brillant story! You have kept it going strong and beautifully. The varying genres and descriptions that you have prefectly blended and merge together to create these masterpieces!! I love your stories!! Love 'em!! Love 'em!! Love 'em!!! And that wretched priest! What a coward! There he was bragging before the fight and then goes and cowers behind some rocks throughtout the whole thing until the snake youkai was lead away. And a big 'YAH!!' to Sesshoumaru for reviving those killed. Shows that dumb priest. I really loved the battle scene that was very, very, very well written and in wonderful detail!! The scene with the two seperate bathing rooms was really funny. I loved that Miroku was cowed before the great lord. I wonder what shampoo he uses to make his hair look sooo good... ( Imagines Sesshoumaru grooming himself with his tongue (dog form)lol.) It was a really exciting chapter. I smirked big time that the priest wasn't invited. I humbly bow to your great talent!! Thank you for writing this story. Thank you sharing this story with us. And Thank you for having the review option open!! I love leaving you reviews!!! Please keep up the most excellent and exquiste work and can't wait for the next installment!!
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Title: frani1375
Reviewed By: frani1375 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2006 19:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it!! Can't wait for more!! I should have both Mark of intent and Reunited updated by friday night.
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Reviewed By: Danny Girl On: April 13, 2006 18:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good Job!!!!!!I love this chapter....Keep up the good work can't wait till the next chapter
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Reviewed By: jammies2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2006 18:48 CDT
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Cool chapter sorry I didn't reveiw the last couple. This is a great story they keep running into that stupid priest is he working for Naraku? LOL He is like one of those "relatives" that you can't get rid of hahaha!! Anyway I like how you are developing that Inuyasha/Kagome relationship. Sango/Miroku are ok too even though I am not as interested in them. And you are writing Kouga and Sessy great I am also glad Inuyasha didn't have to hurt Kouga. Keep writing and thx for posting
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Reviewed By: adea neri On: April 12, 2006 19:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this as much as all the rest of your writing. cant wait for another chapter.
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Reviewed By: inu hanyou nikkie On: April 12, 2006 14:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just read the next chapter and Oh... my... word!! That was a hot scene, Literary Goddess!! You have The Gift!! Nikkie proceeds to wipe fog and steam off her monitor and glasses while fanning herself. Youkai Inuyasha, he is just sooooo nyummy!! I rreeeaallllyyy enjoyed this chapter. I wonder if Kagome will do little things to make Inuyasha's youkai come out more? Will they have little "hunts" together - Where Inuyasha is hunting/stalking his Prey .... namely Kagome? Or a game a Strip Tag? giggles.... I loved how the issue of Koga was handled. It was a great touch and prefect!! Sesshoumaru tried to do the 'Youkai Mind Meld' did he... chuckles.. if he does the live long and prosper saying and hand greeting I think I'll put myself into stitches from laughing so hard!! I think you are definitely doing an awesome job with this sequel!! I was soooo ticked with that buttheaded, thick skulled and cowardly monk!! When will he learn? prephaps Kagome should take her bow and whip his butt a few times. Grrr... he keeps on popping up like a bad case of food poisoning. And the big mean and nasty youkai is coming.. with unfriendly friends.... oh boy!! I wonder what will happen!! And did Kagome's purfying powers get assimalated into Inuyasha's own powers as well? Wowwowwowwowwow!!!! Is all I can say at this moment. My heart is in my throat, I'm on the edge of my chair and I eagerly await the next installment. Please keep up the most excellent and superb work!! Nikkie holds up a huge banner and waves it around-You totally ROCK!!! I love and admire your writing talents!! You are sooo totally awesome!! I can't really even come close to express my admiration of your talents!! I have my fingers crossed that you again win awards!!
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Reviewed By: kokoro no miko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2006 11:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I didn't realize until just now that I hadn't reviewed ch.4. My bad. Consider this a combined comment. I'm really loving this! I was glad to see Shippou finally starting to grow up--I only hope it's permanent. Still, I can't really believe that his actions were genuinely malicious--just extremely thoughtless. I very much like the fact that you're not neglecting Miroku and Sango's relationship: they so often seem to get lost in the shuffle--I know I've been guilty of that myself, but hope to do better. I found it interesting that Kouga didn't hear Kagome's call for help even though Inu, Myoujou, and Sesshoumaru all did. Maybe it's because she has a sort of connection with each of the other three that she doesn't share with him? Anyway, it looks like Kouga's one lucky wolf--he could easily have become cold cuts for what he tried to do. Inu generating a barrier was a little unexpected, but a very nice touch. I really like the idea of each of the mates gaining something from the other, although there could possibly be a few rather awkward moments before they manage to get everything sorted out. I thought that that priest was going to be more trouble, but I never expected him to do something as stupid as pissing off Sesshoumaru--talk about a death wish! It's going to be very interesting to see how he handles himself against the approaching youkai, especially since he's now surrounded by people who know him for exactly what he is. I think that the fight coming up will probably lay to rest his stories about the dark miko for good. As always, the lemons were amazing--I've had a few nights like that, mostly when I was somewhat younger, and I treasure the memories to this day. I particularly like the reference to the pair being together in all of his various forms--that's so perfectly Kagome! Of course, with a very busy holiday weekend coming up, you probably won't have time to work on an update, so have a great holiday and I hope to see more goodies soon!
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Reviewed By: Inusbabe at work On: April 12, 2006 09:21 CDT
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I have been reading and loving it.
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Title: he whimpered
Reviewed By: bluezinthos [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2006 17:13 CDT
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kouga whimpered...like a little puppy! it's about time! he just had to learn the hard way that going around saying that a girl is your woman does not make her your woman. and did sesshy make a funny? he hoped the evil priest would get eaten by the evil demon! that priest is sooo going to be counting his blessings if they save his sorry ass from getting stepped on when big, bad, and full of jewel shards comes to play. i remember mama higurashi insisting kags get the shot but did she? i don't remember. it just struck me when kagome said she had been with inu as a hanyou and a HUMAN and i wasn't sure if you went into detail about that or if was one of the things that happened on the other side of the well while kagome was taking care of the school stuff.ahh no harm i just have to go and reread. that's one of the things i love about your style of writing, it's so easy to go back and reread and it doesn't feel like i have to skim through it. i'm looking forward to a little action (not that there hasn't been action...i mean the sword wielding kind...wait...oh i give up, you know what i mean). i have a feeling everyone will be in for a surprise when they see what inuyahsa and kagome are fully capable of. i can't wait!
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Reviewed By: Kyo-Chan-Lover On: April 11, 2006 16:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really ejoyed this fanfic. There were almost no grammar mistakes, and it was very entertaining. I also love the way you write. I think you have a natrual talent of writing! Update soon!
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Title: frani1375
Reviewed By: frani1375 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2006 16:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutly love the way you write! I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: dark irish sorceress [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2006 13:39 CDT
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YAY!!! AWESOME! i LUV this STORY!! can't wait until you update WOOHOO! (i am so amazed that it is hard to fully express my love for your work...you go!) ~dark irish sorceress
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Reviewed By: inu hanyou nikkie On: April 11, 2006 12:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am back again. And I had just finished reading the next two chapters (3 and 4) and I must say.... WOW! Literary Goddess has done it again and written another two chapters of glorious brillance!! What a story this is turning out to be! What an awesome sequel!! Heck it doesn't feel like a sequel!! It just flows so prefectly together!!!Go Kagome for creating the barrier and blasting those evil men! pouted a little that she didn't singe a certain attackers naughty bits. I was upset that the others left her all alone with no help. I agree they should have left Kirara and Shippo with Kagome. Proceeds to smack Sango and Miroku upside the head-Baka. I loved when Inuyasha comforted her afterwards and her saying only he will be the one to touch her. It was heartwarming. I really like the way you are bringing mind powers into this. I think that is really cool!! I also liked that Myoujou came to Kagome call. I hope they will have a lasting friendship with her. I laughed when Myoujou carried those men back to the village. I like that they will be punished. I can't wait to see the downfall of Koga. Will Kagome take the stand up for Inuyasha this time in the fight? And Sesshoumaru.. Is he harbouring a hidden talent? Mind Powers or a relative who can teach them? I wonder will Kagome be able to use her powers to temporarily transform herself into a youkai or hanyou when the need arises? Will Inuyasha be able to control his youkai side and will he be able to transform into a dog form? And poor Sesshoumaru... he had to wait until Kagome and Inuyasha finally finished for the time being and consent to talk to him. He must be floored at the want those two have for each other. Also thank you for having Miroku being an experienced man - he was after all found by Kagome and Inuyasha in a brothel. That is such a realistic touch. and so true to character. Lots of writers tend to make Miroku a virgin, all bashful and clueless. The hotspring scene with the fundoushi- that was a cute and sweet touch - loved it! You are such an awesome writer!! and your story so rich, vibrant and flavouful!! So wonderfully exquiste!! I really do love reading your stories!! Please keep up the most excellent work and You Totally ROCK!!
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