| "Quicksand" Reviews/Comments [ 29 ] |
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Reviewed By: Rawben.. On: May 19, 2006 20:03 CDT
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lol! niiice chapter! ;) and happy bday to you!!
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Reviewed By: Cricket42(to lazy to sign back in) On: May 16, 2006 23:10 CDT
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Happy birthday to you then. lol. Anywho great chapter i hear you on the being lazy part. one question is Kagome preggers? I need to know. hurry and reply and update thanks. *Birthday Huggles* Happy birthday ~Cricket42
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Reviewed By: yanna_enoah [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2006 14:21 CDT
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Hey, update!!! writer's block?hmmm.....mine lasted for two days, i know...i'm weird. when it happens i get to picture the last chapter i wrote and think what my reaction will be if i were the one in the story and think what the characters; reactions will be based on what they are in series/manga. interesting results.
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Reviewed By: Kitsunesan nsi On: May 12, 2006 22:13 CDT
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Hey *poke* update*poke*....*poke*
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Reviewed By: LilSis [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2006 23:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just read the 4th and 5th chapters and i like the story better the more i read.it gives a little different spin on some of my favorite characters. there are a few places that make you kinda scratch your head though. Case in point "sesshoumaru looked at his aunt, then at the inu demon, and then back to his aunt" or something close to that... you can see what i mean. also, its a drawer. a junk drawer. but thats all that was bugging me to distraction in these chapters. otherwise they were great! keep up the good work and i look forward to more updates ^_^
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Reviewed By: star555555528(not signed in) On: May 08, 2006 14:48 CDT
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DONT SAY MMMKAY!!!! cause there was this one really creepy guy in this story i read and he alway said mmmkay it was creepy!!! ok well bye!!! ~starts to leave~ oh yeah......ur storys great!!!
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Reviewed By: Rawben... On: May 08, 2006 00:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aww!! poor shippo! ohoh!! but i can't wait till the dinner!! will sess and rin be coming?? cause miro and sango are hilarious together!!!!!!!! :D i can't wait!!
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Reviewed By: Princess-in-Training On: May 07, 2006 23:42 CDT
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Why does Shippo think tat its his fault his parents are dead? I can't wait to read about dinner that is going to be funny.LOL!
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Reviewed By: Princess-in-Training On: April 21, 2006 23:10 CDT
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Sesshy has a heart. And it's leading him to Rin. Poor Rin she really likes Sesshy but afarid she get attached and he will leave her heartbroken. But it's too late she started falling for him the first time she heard her voice.
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Title: Kierra
Reviewed By: Kierra [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2006 23:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would have reviewed a lot sooner but you seem to only except reviews from registered members...so here I am, registering so I can review your fic :) I loved Demon Daycare, and now I love Quicksand too! The only 'ship I love more than InuKag is RinSess so I was so happy when you decided to write a sequel. I completely understand about writer's block--I'm suffering through a 8-month long drought myself. I hope you pull through it. Besides, I'm dying to find out what Rin's secret is *G* best wishes, ~Kia
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Reviewed By: Rawben [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2006 17:58 CDT
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aww! cuteness. ;) wait...what? writers block?! noooo! the bain of a lurker's existence!! ha! oh well, i'll be happy when the next chapter comes out...whenever that may be...
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Reviewed By: Rawben [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2006 22:40 CDT
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lol! great stuff!! definitely treated her like an adult. nice sess. ;)
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Title: Me again!
Reviewed By: Angel_fanficluva [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2006 14:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update!! its rellii good...:):)
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Title: Hello
Reviewed By: BloodRedMoon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2006 20:38 CDT
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Love how its going please update soon ^^
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Title: GrEAt!!!
Reviewed By: Angel_fanficluva [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2006 08:09 CDT
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I'm a huge sess/rin fan...please please update, can't wait to see what happens. Oh yes...and yay im your first reviewer!:)
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