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Reviewed By: White Luna(offline) On: April 12, 2006 03:42 CDT
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That was so sweet I think I cried!
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Title: NICE!!!
Reviewed By: CelticMist On: April 10, 2006 18:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, this was one of the best AU one-shots I ever read! Man, you were able to make out of a (let's say) relatively ordinary setting a truly reading worthy romance - and the lemon was HOT! And you blend so well intimacy with romance!NICE I would love to read more of this! Nice Greetings, CelticMist
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Title: Rinseternalsoul
Reviewed By: Rinseternalsoul [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2006 21:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice one-shot! I LOVE the romance between them. Her knight in Armani come to whisk her away to a tropical paradise. So dreamy. The lemon was very sexy too. Thanks for the read! Rinseternalsoul
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Title: The Affair
Reviewed By: sesshomaru's-btch-n-v-me On: April 05, 2006 01:15 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED IT! I think that it was soooooooo romantic! i really lov how at the end u made it lyk how they meet soo CUTE!! Plus i think dat Sess/Kag pairings ROCK!!! Thanx 4 agreeing wit me and makin dis amazin story. I loved it alot so i hope dat u make more stories b/c i think dat u r good at writtin so Plz make another mayb have Rin and Shippo be the cause of there meeting, though the bar was classic u made it seem so different i dont kno mayb b/c i actually lyk ur story than others that TRY 2 write them ::srug:: Anywayz keep up the good work i really do lyk it so if u will i expect another story!!!! So... ::hands and knees beggin u:: Plz write a sequel to this story please!!! ~:~ N_V_Me ~:~
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Title: The Affair
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2006 21:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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Reviewed By: care102 On: April 04, 2006 11:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Let me just say that your story is amazing!!! It is one one of the best I have ever read. your characterization is great i loved sess and kag.[drops down to knees,giving puppy dog eyes] please please please write a sequil.
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Reviewed By: Jo On: April 04, 2006 00:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
Um, do you even pay attention to canon and characterization? Because you seem to have replaced Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru with two unidentifiable characters, who do and say things they would never do. Congrats on mangling the fandom!
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Reviewed By: bubbles-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2006 21:42 CDT
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Awww! That's so cute! You made me cry! Wow, you're good! I love this story!!! This is a keeper! *huggles*
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Reviewed By: Lady Fluffy-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2006 21:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Completely wonderful! You did such a great job on this story that I will read it over and over again! Keep up the great work!!
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Title: cool!!
Reviewed By: sesshoumarustruluv(notloggedin) On: April 03, 2006 20:06 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow!! so sweet and mushy!! i loved it. couldn't have been better. i hope that you do write more fics like this in the future!
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Title: Danie
Reviewed By: shadowfan92 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2006 18:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
IT SUCKED LIKE HELL!!Naw,I'm jus messin with u.It was actually very good.By the summary when u first see it,i thought u were talking about Yash & Sesshy, but thank the lord it wasnt,cause even if they werent bros in ur fic,that would still be EEEEWWWW! So anyways,good story and write some more.Also,was he cheating with Kikiyo,cause it didnt say.
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Title: The Affair
Reviewed By: fluffydog On: April 03, 2006 15:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that what he get for cheating on Kagome. he broke poor kagome heart and sess ways their to show haer love it was beauiful. love your work.
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Reviewed By: kagome15 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2006 13:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT STORY!!! i enjoy reading sess/kag and this 1 was 1 of the best!!!
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Title: The Affair
Reviewed By: darkagome On: April 03, 2006 08:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the story it's one of a kind in my book. that what inuyasha get for cheating on kagome. that just show you can't have your cake and eat it too.
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Reviewed By: FayeMegan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2006 01:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautiful oneshot! Almost had tears there at the end! Very good story! I LOVE sess/kag pairings. Hope to read more from you soon!~
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