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| "Anything Can Happen" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] | Reviewed By: Saiyamaru [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 21:51 CDT
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I refuse to read this or any more chapters writen in the current format 'no space'.*cries* My eyes can't take it! It's too much! T__T
| Reviewed By: Saiyamaru-nli On: June 11, 2006 01:13 CDT
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Guess who? Heh. And *gasp* what is this? Bakura, blushing? Stuttering? Being anything other then a crass, (wishfully)over-sexed bastard? Surely we're not thinking of the same guy. Going that long without hot boy smex mustive fucked with his brain more then forseen. Well in that case Ryou should remedy that. And since Baku is too brain-tied to do anything about it, maybe Ryou should also be the agressor. Heh. Things still seemed a bit rushed, but that could be because of lack of space between paragraphs. Yeah, I'm still bitching about that, but besides the rushedness and run-on-ness you aren't doing that bad. I mean, you have the guts to put it out there, and because of that, you are getting better. It's just harder to see sometimes.*shoe thrown at head* Ouch, goddammit, I ment that in the nicest way possible!*shoe's mate fallows* FUCK!!!
| Reviewed By: Saiyamaru-nli On: April 16, 2006 21:52 CDT
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Short, sweet, but a little pointless. I mean, yeah, Bakura's out of the Ring, and for his first action, blowing up the microwave was pretty amusing, but again, it's kinda rushed. Just a little, with the 'Rule #1' and 'no seducing' bit. I mean, Ryou couldn't be sure that that was what was on Bakura's mind, not after he just came out of the Ring. I guess I'm mostly put out that the chapter was so short, and that you cut out the potential for perverted genie fun so early on. That and Bakura is too docile. Keep practiceing. And don't forget to update.
| Reviewed By: Saiyamaru-(nsi) On: April 05, 2006 18:38 CDT
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Not bad, but don't think you can start slacking off. If you must take your time, make it worth it. So far, so good. I hope to see the begining of a plot soon.*fingers whip...*
| Reviewed By: sglily [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2006 22:39 CDT
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Damn it, Saiyamaru! You beat me again! ; ) And, OP... the story was just getting good and you stopped! What the hell? So, I agree with my friend, Saiyamaru, it's whip cracking time! Liked it thus far... ; )
| Reviewed By: Saiyamaru [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2006 22:32 CDT
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Hey! Why'd it stop?! I was starting to get into it! *growls* Update! *cracks whip* >.
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