| "One Simple Question" Reviews/Comments [ 332 ] |
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Reviewed By: Amy Liz On: August 29, 2015 18:51 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! I had forgotten about it but was glad to reread what
was there. I was excited at first when I saw it was completed, but
it isn't really. It just stops. I don't care if we find out about
them going after the jewel shards again, but the triangle is not
truly wrapped up. Even a few more paragraphs explaining what
exactly happened between Inuyasha and Kagome would work. The part
where you explained what happened with Naraku and Kohaku seemed a
little rushed as well. But over all yours is one of the best
thought out and in character IY fics I have ever read. I know the
chances of you finishing it are exceptionally slim, but it is a
great story and I thought you should know I spent most of the day
reading it from beginning to not-end instead of working on projects
for college! Great job!
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Reviewed By: bookbabe13 On: November 18, 2013 13:50 PST
Comment/Review:
Love Love Love this story! Nice use of the new mental bonds in this new chapter. Please please please keep writing! I was sooo happy when I finally checked back in and saw a new chapter. |
Reviewed By: CandlelightQuill [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2013 14:42 PDT
Comment/Review:
I MISS this story!!! Would you please consider writing and posting more? |
Reviewed By: ameko On: November 20, 2012 18:51 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
love the fic, really i do but when are you going to update please. i would really like to see how this ends. |
Reviewed By: Angelica_Pierce [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2012 22:52 PDT
Comment/Review:
Hey, I hope you're planning to finish this! I'm looking forward to reading more! |
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Reviewed By: parvatilotus [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2012 05:01 PST
Comment/Review:
I was so excited to see a new post on this one! I came late to this story, but I love the premise of it and I like where you're taking it. I hope you find the time to update it soon, I know that life can get hectic and carry one away at times. But you are such a good writer that I'm going to keep this one on my faves list anyways :) Thanks for a unique story. ~Kathleen aka ParvatiLotus |
Reviewed By: Inuyashalover1o1 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2011 21:54 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing story! Been reading this since you first started posting it and finally found the story again. Can't wait for more updates! |
Reviewed By: cynbad146 On: November 09, 2011 14:44 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey . . . I am really impressed with this story. The diregtion is good, the writing is good and in all the story is great. I definitely will be looking for the next update. I presume that you have already written this story and this is a reupload, or am I wrong? Regardless, I think your story is great and I will be glad to leave some reviews if you are not limiting to members only. Don't stop - keep going. Cannot wait to read the next chapter. Thanks, Cynbad146 |
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2011 19:07 PST
Comment/Review:
I am SOOOOOOOO glad that you haven't given it up. I have been a fan of this fic since the first chapter was posted and am happy that you continue to update. Hopefully, you'll be able to continue to update more often. this story is 5 years old, and still being followed by fans. That should tell you something. LOL. Please update soon. |
Reviewed By: dangersque [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2011 12:43 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I had forgotten all about this story. I actually had to re-read everything through again. Glad to see you haven't given up on it. |
Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2011 22:10 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
great update... wonder what happens next... update when you can... please and thank you! |
Reviewed By: Suzy On: October 25, 2011 17:28 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for updating this is great story anf I really love it. |
Reviewed By: mystmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2011 07:00 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love Sango's explanation for why Kagome isn't sitting Inuyasha anymore. Very clear. I'm interested to see how the rest of the story goes. |
Reviewed By: Akina315 (Candlelightquill) On: October 25, 2011 05:19 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was a good read. I have to admit I was excited when I saw the link to this chapter in my inbox this morning. It's been forever it seems since your last update. My oldest son was only a few months old when your previous chapter was posted, and he turned two a few weeks ago. I noticed that there were some misspellings and a few problems with grammar. Other than that, good job. |
Reviewed By: crolynx [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2011 22:39 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Writing for this chapter just show's you're getting back into the swing of things. I enjoyed the update. I was honestly surprised to see the update pop-up in my e-mail for this. I thought the story'd died. Glad to see I was wrong. I look forward to more on this one. |
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