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Title: YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Cricket42 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2009 14:01 PDT
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I was starting to get sad. I'm glad your up and back online. I really have missed reading your stories these last couple of months. I'm only gonna comment on this one cuz there is no reason to leave the same comment three times. So does this mean you'll also be up more on your myspace and such? Ok get to work will still expecting your absolute brilliance which we all know you can provide. So much love from the one and only Crickee. *huggles*
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Title: UPDATE
Reviewed By: inusgirlkagg [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2009 21:22 PDT
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UPPPPPPPPPPPDAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATTTTTEEE PLZ?
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Reviewed By: White Raven [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2009 02:23 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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omg are you kidding me? the last update was a year ago and now i want to know what happens T_T ehhhh keep updating! please! for the sake of this one addicted reader =P
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2008 00:24 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great updates... seems that inuyasha hasn't marked kagome & shippo yet... looks like he doesn't want to mark kagome though... so it's up to kagome to decide for him and herself... what'll happen next... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: ObsessedInuyashaFan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2008 22:27 PDT
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oh and to make a comment on a comment. they way youre having the characters behave.. taking inuyasha for example.. how bold hes been and to the point hes trying to be.. youve already explained the changes hes going through. and hes still the same guy and its hard for him to say stuff sometimes. but yea some people really need to pay attention. ..once again, good work.
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Title: update
Reviewed By: ObsessedInuyashaFan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2008 22:25 PDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
so i thoroughly enjoyed the idea of making the inu gang a pack via blood connections. the only thing i really didnt like about your fic so far is how you had to flashback to naraku's battle. i was really confused for a few minutes by having kohaku and hatchi there. it probably wouldve been better if you didnt flashback. but hey maybe you couldnt figure out how to make it flow right. either way its okay. still a great story overall. i love how the character relationships are progressing. inu/ship too cuute. inu/mir more respect..nice. mir/san wedding wedding yay. just waiting for inu/kag now.. how will you get them together exactly? im curious to say the least. please please please update again soon. its been too long and im going nuts lol. please and thank you. bai. =)
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Reviewed By: BurningTheMidnightOil [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2008 15:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Freakin' Awesome story. I am looking forward to an update. I am going to go scope out your other works. Thank you for writing this kick ass story.
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Title: It's been a while, Harpy, but here I is!
Reviewed By: Da Grrrl On: January 16, 2008 14:22 PST
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What a nice little explosion of updates! I'm sorry I didn't get a chance to read them before, but I'm catching up now! GREAT STUFF. One of the "handful" of canon stories that I actually have on my faves list. I loved how you gt InuYasha explaining things and I laughed when Kikyou said the jewel was shattered again. This is just a joy to read, especially when I have so little time for such things anymore. I itch for an update, and I love the things InuYasha said about being in heat. I'm I/K all the way, but it was a bit sexy to think of him having to keep himself away from Sango as well. Well written, and always fun! ~InuGrrrl
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha_luvs_kagome_forever [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2008 06:47 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^_^ CUUUUTE KITTY! I have cats that do that too, especially new kittens, they're so curious and cuddly! *SQUEE!* Nice chapter, I don't think he would normally be as bold as to say all that, but, It's your story, we're just readin' it.
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Title: *bows*
Reviewed By: iPoe (Licentia poetica) On: January 06, 2008 14:21 PST
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I'm honored, even for a "half-assed" dedication! And once again you've left us wondering how Kagome and Inuyasha will get together, you little trickster. I can see how the chapter was difficult to write, not because it didn't flow but because you were walking a characterization and plot line. You nailed the biology well (though poor Kags didn't get nailed ~_*) and gave a good explanation as to why Miroku is always such a hentai..male sex drive. BTW, it's also a programmed drive in all males to impregnate as many females as possible...poor Inuyasha! Human and youkai sides out to get him! I enjoyed this.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2008 13:32 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... seems inuyasha is uneasy about that female bear youkai... and the talk with miroku with kagome & sango listening... glad they defeated naraku... and kagome saved kohaku... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you... HAPPY NEW YEAR!
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Title: WOW!
Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2008 13:23 PST
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Wow! This story is so good! You really delve deep into InuYasha's character and he's maturing in a logical way. On top of that, the idea is so original! Who would've thought Shippo asking a simple question would lead to so much controversy! I can't wait to read the next chapter, this is so going on my favorites! -Amber :)
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Reviewed By: CandlelightQuill [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2008 09:47 PST
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Well..., honestly that wasn't what I had been expecting. Just out of curiosity though, what prompted you to have the bear youkai in heat in the first place? Not that I can't make a few conclustions on my own, I'm just curiouse as to what is going on in your mind as you write. Good work by the way.
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Title: Nice, very Nice
Reviewed By: SlightlyMadHatter [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2007 10:56 PDT
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I really enjoy this story, I cannot wait to read the rest.
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Reviewed By: TheMaskedReviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2007 16:54 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wondrous harpersong, there are no words to convey the joy which fills my heart when I see that you have once again updated "One Simple Question". The drama! The action! And now...the music! Kohaku's life is saved, and Naraku's death appears to be imminent. There is one problem only.*dramatic pause* You just had to have a cliffhanger, didn't you? I'm kidding, i'm kidding. That's part of what keeps me coming back for more. It was very well done. May your creativity never cease to flow! Keep up the good work!, TMR
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