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Reviewed By: Leanne5582 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2006 19:31 CDT
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very cool! I was JUST thinking (before i got to the part about kagome's makeover) that someone should write a story where kag changes her appearence. Either cutting or dying her hair, or if the person was writting a darker fic.. she could even like.. try to maim her face.. like cut it or something.. just like in despair. it's creepy i was even thinking of that neh? Anyway, I'm really excited to see your next chapter. Please don't abandon it!
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Reviewed By: Nami_wave_101 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2006 13:47 CDT
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Luv it please continue
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Reviewed By: xSimplicity (nsi) On: July 29, 2006 11:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awe that was kinda nice of kikyou... i personally don't like her but i ll accept her for once lol great story =D
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Reviewed By: marbear411 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2006 19:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!Like tommorow or, the next day... well i don't care just update quickly please! I LUV YOUR STORY! I CAN'T WAIT UNTILL THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: ~Alanna On: June 28, 2006 12:46 CDT
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well that was odd, the last part of the chapter confused me, why was Inu human?
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Title: Lizzy1993
Reviewed By: Lizzy1993 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2006 10:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep writing it's really good and Inu/Kag all the way!
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Title: wow!!
Reviewed By: anime RuLeS u all [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2006 17:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow i loved that story!! keep it up!! i can't wait until the next chapter is up!!! i am anxiously waiting for the next chapter of this great story!
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Reviewed By: katie_inuluvr On: June 01, 2006 21:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your story! You have great ideas and so much emotion in your writing. I love the picture you paint for me in my head. I am a little confused about a part in your story though. In the first chapter when Kagome is going all crazy on Inuyasha and Kouga, she said that she can offer Inuyasha a family and Kikyo can't. While I think that's true and haven't really thought of it that way yet, I thought she could offer him acceptance and unconditional love. It might just be an difference in interpretations, and I do like the whole family idea. So I don't mean to discourage you, but just give you something new to think about. Unless you've already thought of this one. If that's the case, then it's just an observation. Please keep writing and I'm going to recommend this to my friends!(I only recommend really good fanfics to my friends.)
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Reviewed By: shadow of the star On: June 01, 2006 16:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is one of the best ffics i have ever read. i love it. please rite again soon ^-^
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Reviewed By: Nori of ninetails On: May 30, 2006 19:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked the plot, your creativity, and writing style. but i think you could check some spelling error and put the writing in different text not making it look like a poem... Other than that, great story keep writing.:)
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Reviewed By: QuartetOfThree On: May 30, 2006 17:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
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I'm not sure why you have everything centered on the pages, but that is wrong unless you are writing a poem. It is also irritating and distracting. You should also never have two people talking in the same paragraph and you break most every other grammar rule there is too. Open up a novel or go look at the formatting of a good fanfic author like Sueric to see how they format their paragraphs and the dialogue. Your story might be more enjoyable if you followed basic grammar rules. I hope this helps.
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Title: Just a simpe review
Reviewed By: Sweetcakes [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2006 11:10 CDT
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I suppose this happened a few stories back, but even I know that quotation marks mean that someone is speaking! But anyway, on with my review...I may not be the best person for this, but I love your story! The characters are all in control, your not rushing through the scenes just to get through them (making it feel like you'd rather be doing something else). It feels like you're taking the time to flesh out the story, one chapter at a time (how was that for a stupid comment?) through the eyes of each of the main characters. You just keep to your own pace and don't let anyone get you flustered. I truely feel that you're doing an excellent job!!!!
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Reviewed By: BiggestInuyashaFANever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2006 21:03 CDT
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LOve it please update soon!
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Reviewed By: peridot215 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2006 19:30 CDT
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i held my breath and i cried and i can't wait for you too update again. -San
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Reviewed By: Ryo-Truesdale (Lazy Member) On: May 18, 2006 09:58 CDT
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This is an awesome story. You really went in depth about Kagomes feelings. I like your example of breathing. Thats just amazing. Please keep updatings. And yeash, INUYASHA AND KAGOME FOREVER!!!!!
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