| "Strangers Like Me" Reviews/Comments [ 69 ] |
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Reviewed By: SkippingAlice [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2007 11:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
'I hate when she touches me, the feel of her dead body touching mine--and yet I cannot help but press my cheek into her hand. It's almost like an order that had been imprinted into my brain even before I'd been born.' Amazing job, you've really begun to color the story, and have given each of your characters such brilliant life. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: Janice Park On: June 22, 2007 04:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your mom sounds smart...UPDATES SOONNNN!!!!!!!
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Title: new plot line?
Reviewed By: xXx_Wings_of_a_demon_xXx [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2007 21:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love tghe plot line, seems like there are things being hinted at- Please update soon!PLEEEAAAASSSEEE??? (Aggghhh... -_- I sound like Anna XD) Lotsa lurve, hurry up!
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Reviewed By: kara-chana [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2007 19:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Anna is such a cute girl--she really reminds me of someone....? Updat soon!!
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Reviewed By: MistedVines [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2007 04:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
AAHHH! I love this story!! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: SALAMANDER'S WIFE On: June 17, 2007 23:28 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE SOON!!! I LOVE IT!! :)
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Title: Gomenasai
Reviewed By: MakiyuHimura [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2007 23:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Id' critique you...but I dun know what to do it on honestly. It's a beautiful story and I WANT MORE. But I'll wait. Since you were nice enough to do this one for me. Also work on your Sakura/Itachi one. THat still catches my interest even before I went into my little reading obsession over here.
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Reviewed By: YvonneandNeji [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2007 22:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job on this new chapter. This story is a great read, and you're doing an amazing job with it. Update again soon.
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Reviewed By: xXx_Wings_of_a_demon_xXx [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2007 18:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooh, Is excelent! love Anna, she reminds me of my cousin...Who is also names Anna. o0;; If you'r looking for a potential editor, don't hesitate. Because it's test week, I have little (If any) homework. kudos, grreat job.
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Reviewed By: MistedVines [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2007 14:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it!! Anna is such a funny character!! Please update sooooon!!!
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Reviewed By: kara-chana [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2007 18:34 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOWZA! Great job on this! It's going to be a great story! I can already tell!
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Title: BEKAAAHHH
Reviewed By: Makii On: May 10, 2007 12:24 CDT
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;-; I WANT TO READ IT ALL...BUT BUT YOU ONLY HAVE 1 CHAPTERD DONE!! I SHOULD CRY!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: YvonneandNeji (NSI) On: May 10, 2007 05:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job, it does need a bit of work, but, that can be done later on! Great job, I can't wait to see how this story ends up!
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Reviewed By: SALAMANDER'S WIFE On: April 10, 2007 06:33 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.O This story is so sooooo cool!!! Please update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: YvonneandNeji [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2007 12:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
Much better. Remember to continue updating. Great job.
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