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Reviewed By: me On: May 17, 2006 02:39 CDT
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hey love the story very interesting....do you think tho the chaps can be a little longer? lol what can i say i need to read more :) i look forward to all your updates ^_^ ja
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Reviewed By: Lady Kio-tye On: April 17, 2006 15:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like how this story is going, so please continue, & i would like to know the website about the currency. my email is: ladykiotyeanime@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: gothic fuzzies [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2006 00:56 CDT
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YAY! Another great chapter. Nice to know you're taking my advice. Note: When you get to the site: type in "fruits basket episodes english" if you want english or else you'll get like japanese with subtitles and hebrew and stuff. If you want to include the fangirls, check out episodes 18 and 22, those all about them. They are crazy!! There's also a lot of funny amvs on that site too. Well, L8ER, DUDE! P.S. Ever wonder if anyone used up all the characters on a reivew? Hmm...
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Reviewed By: moosegirl13 (not logged in) On: April 13, 2006 20:24 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice chapter. On some parts it was really cute! ^^... Oh, and if you want another website that allows you to watch the Fruits Basket anime.... Muah... I'll e-mail you it, okay? I would love to be your beta, but sadly I suck at grammar... lol. I hope you find one, though. Anyhoo, great chapter. I can't wait to read more. It was longer than the first. Keep up the fantastic work! Don't quit! TTYL, peep! Have a great day!
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Reviewed By: Devilangel620 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2006 17:29 CDT
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:P Watz a beta-reader? Iznt it a person who checkz your work or something? heh. I'm not very good at checking my own stories, T.T I think the chapter was cool and now i know their ages! Now I'm REALLY suspensful to find out what happened between Kagome and Yuki. Keep up the good work!.................................. Laterz
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Reviewed By: vballbrea12 On: April 13, 2006 16:54 CDT
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hey keep updating the second chapter came really fast. Isn't Miyu that person from the anime Vampire Princess Miyu? How does Shigure know Kagome? I guess I will find out next chapter.
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny49(bloodbunny) On: April 13, 2006 14:45 CDT
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keep writting. KEEP WRITTING!!! Or I'll send Kyo after you in his true form!!!! Mahahahahahahaha!!!
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2006 12:36 CDT
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kag/yuki, kyo/toh I can't wait for you to continue writting this story AND Zodiac Love!
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Reviewed By: Kougalover123 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2006 19:37 CDT
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interesting so far. please update again soon.
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Reviewed By: Devilangel620 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2006 10:12 CDT
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oooh! itz great! it kind of suckz that you arent doing 'Zodiac Love' NEmore but i hope you can finish this one. Now I really want to know what happened between Yuki and Kagome. and how old are yuki and the others? Does Kag know the other zodiac members out of the skool? pleez keep on writing! ^_^ . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .Laterz
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: moosegirl13 (not logged in) On: April 11, 2006 09:35 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy! You made me feel special!!! Thanks, peep! Anyhoo, your story is awesome! I think it's very unique and has so much potential. Keep up the great work! You're doing great. Oh, and update soon!
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Title: sorry
Reviewed By: gothic fuzzies (not logged in) On: April 11, 2006 07:54 CDT
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Sorry i sent the same review twice. You can delete the first one. My bad.
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Reviewed By: gothic fuzzies (not logged in cause I'm in school now) On: April 11, 2006 07:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woohoo! Another FB/Inu crossover! Yayness! Also, it's great to know inspired someone. Yay, go me. So I take it that Yuki knew Kagome before. So what were they? Friends? Lovers? Enemies? Fried Chicken? ^_^ Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter. Also, I think you should take up Zodiac Love again. It was one of the first FB/Inu crossovers I read. Okay, I got to go now, cause the teacher's coming. But, first...if you didn't knew too much about Fruits Basket, I had the same problem so I went to youtube.com and watch FB episodes that other people downloaded. FYI those fangirls are CRAZIER than I thought. L8ER, DUDE!
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Reviewed By: gothic fuzzies (not logged in cause I'm in school now) On: April 11, 2006 07:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woohoo! Another FB/Inu crossover! Yayness! Also, it's great to know inspired someone. Yay, go me. So I take it that Yuki knew Kagome before. So what were they? Friends? Lovers? Enemies? Fried Chicken? ^_^ Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter. Also, I think you should take up Zodiac Love again. It was one of the first FB/Inu crossovers I read. Okay, I got to go now, cause the teacher's coming. L8ER, DUDE!
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Title: Chapter 1
Reviewed By: Kage Otome On: April 11, 2006 04:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must say I loved it, there really aren't enough FB/IY crossovers. I can't wait to see what you have planned next, it intrigues me. Keep up the good work!
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