| "In Your Eyes" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
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Reviewed By: inujo [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2007 00:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know you should maybe try yourself on FF.net you might get more reviews and if you need to post something that FF.net do not accept you just post it on mediaminer and could say so on your bio to tell people.
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Reviewed By: sublimetrickster [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2007 01:05 CST
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I really do hope you haven't given up on this story. I have enjoyed it and think you really have something interesting going on here. The cliffhanger is also unfair. I need to know who it is. Is it Kouga? Is it a demon Inuyasha? Is it Naraku? whoooooooooo!
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Title: elenacala
Reviewed By: elenacala [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2006 17:08 CDT
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You must update soon! This is geting intriguing! I am curious ot find out who the stranger is what he wants with kagome who he works for what the ring means to both te stranger and inuyahsa, i must know if inuyahsa will take his head out of his ass long enough to realize his feeligns for kagome adn not kikyo and aww heck so many questions so little answers so update soon so i cna not be so plauged by questions.
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Reviewed By: DarkMoonStar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 22:27 CDT
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Whaaat nooo? Omg he was sooo close...I wanna find out more about this ring!! PLEASE tell us...hahah. Loved the chapter, it was sort of a filler, but good none the less. Update soon please!!!
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Reviewed By: DarkMoonStar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2006 02:34 CDT
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No!! Why the cliffie? Why?? lol...Great chapter, can't wait for the next one, update soon!
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Reviewed By: Anime Lady PIMP [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2006 00:21 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Uh-oh. Kags shoulda stuck it in her shirt! Please update.
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Title: elenacala
Reviewed By: elenacala [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2006 19:35 CDT
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BTW mm reviwer can shove it where the sun dont' shine they wouldnt' know a good story if it bit them in the A$$!! HMPH!
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Title: elenacala
Reviewed By: elenacala [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2006 19:34 CDT
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OMG Whats going to happen!!! Not a cliffie!!!!! AHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! *screams in frustration* i hope you have another update caues i have to know or i wil lget no sleep tonight.. please please please update soon *begs*
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Reviewed By: mm-reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2006 19:29 CDT
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The song lyrics are really irritating. If you don't have actual story to write, make your chapters shorter, but don't keep shoving song lyrics in them. It takes no talent to copy someone else's original poetry or song lyrics. I've lost interest in the story.
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Title: elenacala
Reviewed By: elenacala [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2006 19:00 CDT
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ohh an intruder so the plot thickens. I hope kagome finds someone. I hope hes hot enough to make inuyahsa realize jsut what he's missed. But anywya please do update soon, you rstory is exciting. Its different it seems like tis gonna be a story you never forget!
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Reviewed By: DarkMoonStar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2006 18:25 CDT
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Great chapter, I wonder what it's for...lol I was hoping Kag would put it on and something would happen...hahah. Update soon!!
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Reviewed By: DarkMoonStar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2006 00:22 CDT
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I love this story so far, can't wait for another chapter, update soon!!
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Reviewed By: rainydays [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2006 16:04 CDT
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well at first i thought this story was going to be a simple love story, but wow.. def. not. i like the intricacy of the plot line. good job!
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Title: elenacala
Reviewed By: elenacala [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2006 22:37 CDT
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wow, intriging to say the least! I do hope you will update again soon, i like your story and am very eager to see where it leads!
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Reviewed By: Minerva519 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2006 21:06 CDT
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very cool.
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