| "Subjection, Subjugation" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Title: Wow....
Reviewed By: Bloody On: June 30, 2007 01:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... Just wow. You know you have encountered a fantastic writer when reading their work fills you with emotions! Reading this story, i was filled with fear, and anger towards these imaginary characters. I was so close to tears. When you find an author that can bring you that close to the charater, you know there is raw talent hidden in that person's mind. That is exsactly what you have. I encourage you to continute this story, which i will be sure to read, and try to publish a book. It was amazing.
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Reviewed By: Caitriona [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2006 18:46 CST
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This is one serious piece of angst. And it doesn't look like there is any way for his to come out of the torture chamber. It's death and degredation for Inu. Do you plan at some point to write another chapter to this where Inu either dies or is saved? I sincerely hope so.
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Title: ok
Reviewed By: loveed it On: July 29, 2006 05:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved your story but you sould ad how he gets out and blows the place to hell booom update soon.
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Title: awesome!
Reviewed By: Aoidragon On: June 16, 2006 02:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was very good! i wanna read more, please update soon.
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Reviewed By: CrimsonInHumanBlood [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2006 20:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thinks this was on AFF? or something... cuz i thought there were more chapters to this?
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Reviewed By: Cyndi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2006 00:45 CDT
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Wow, that's so tragic and sad for Inuyasha.
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Reviewed By: dancin4inu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2006 21:03 CDT
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You know, you seem to have a thing for torturing poor Inu. Your other story "chained" I'm reading as well, and gosh these are both so depressing. (And what's with all the abuse, huh? ^_^) Yeah, you could leave it here for a depressing one-shot, or you could turn it into another epic like "chained." I actually think I would like this plot better than "chained", so it would make me happy to hear where this story goes if you continue. I'll keep reading your stuff, no matter what.
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Reviewed By: BiggestInuyashaFANever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2006 16:34 CDT
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that is horrible!!!!!!!!!please continue... let Kagome find him! why do you torture inuyasha? please update soon!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: LOVE IT!!!! On: May 01, 2006 00:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love it!! Update really soon.Poor inuyasha:(
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Reviewed By: golden_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2006 18:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
A revision? It needed no revision!
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Title: A revision?
Reviewed By: CrimsonInHumanBlood [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2006 16:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
What was done different? O_o?
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Reviewed By: CrimsonInHumanBlood [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2006 18:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Please update!!! >.< Me wants moree!!
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Reviewed By: CrimsonInHumanBlood [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2006 18:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Reviewed By: golden_kitsune (too lazy to sign into her account) On: April 17, 2006 21:31 CDT
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Kagome has always warned him about being tested on...and now...*cries* Please let him be saved! I am actually crying!
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Reviewed By: SilenceoftheHeart [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2006 19:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Inu. Poor, poor little hanyou. Tries to save the world, and now we can't even let him drown in his own blood. I've noticed the lack of warnings, but secretly I'm hoping that maybe big bro will show up to save him. But any way this plays out, this is a great story. Thank you -Silence-
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