| "Exhibition II - Training" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
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Title: You've raised the bar on OOC and bad sex
Reviewed By: SG On: July 03, 2007 02:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your synonyms for the vagina and all its components are a source of never ending lulz. channel smoothly shaven nether lips tight little box Pure, unadulterated bad!fic gold. Thanks for obliterating my already shaky faith in the IYFG :D
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Reviewed By: selfish me On: March 19, 2007 23:40 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hah. train. sweet play on words. anyway that was seriously one of the best lemons i've read. i totally wasn't expecting for it to be that kinky.
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Reviewed By: Aura12 On: March 10, 2007 15:21 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, okay.... this was one of the best lemon's i've ever read. it was sooooo HOT!
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Reviewed By: lilbabybee [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2007 11:35 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
God that was hot! I'd say it was the best lemon I've read so far.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: wildthundakat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2006 14:19 EDT
Comment/Review:
that was one of the best lemons i've ever read. i never would've imagined sesshy to share kags like that, and on a train. kudos. good fic. :)
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Title: damn!!
Reviewed By: inu197 On: September 01, 2006 01:35 EDT
Comment/Review:
DAMN...D-A-M-N..DAMN!!!!that was H-O-T..hot...sizzling hot...
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Reviewed By: White Luna [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2006 04:27 EDT
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Well fuck if I thought your first one was hot, because this one was mind-blowing! When you said exhibition, you didn't lie! Wow.
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Title: Exhibition ll - Training
Reviewed By: sesshomaru's-btch-n-v-me On: April 15, 2006 02:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.O Damn!i sooo loved yur story it waz a bit kinky but very enjoyable.The smut was great i look 4ward 2 more Exhibitions in the near future that was freaking hot as hell! and if i hadn't known n e better i would have swore u waz Youko's relative in some shape or 4rm. i happen to enjoy the litte 'show' and hope u write more. so plz more chappies!! and remember... SeShOmArU's BtCh N v Me
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Reviewed By: thyme_cat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2006 19:41 EDT
Comment/Review:
oi. are you going to write more? perhaps with other characters. I don't think I've read such explicit smut before. ... I need a cold shower.
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Reviewed By: RhiannonoftheMoon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2006 00:03 EDT
Comment/Review:
HOT DOG! Literally. Fantastic lemon and one shot - now I know what to nominate for 2nd quarter 2006!
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Title: hey it's me mistyleer!
Reviewed By: shiroi creatress of destruction On: April 13, 2006 12:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so good good job loved it very god write more soon pkease!
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Title: Pant!
Reviewed By: Rinseternalsoul [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2006 19:29 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn it that was freaking hot as hell! A nice little piece of smut, and I consider myself a connoisseur of Sess/Kag smut, so that is a huge compliment. haha! Nice job and thanks for the read!
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Reviewed By: K.M. On: April 12, 2006 16:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must say that was....werid, but I liked it. I truly doubt that sess would EVER share, but this is what would happen if he did.
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Reviewed By: darks_lil_angel (NLI) On: April 12, 2006 12:30 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
umm... wow that left me alittle speechless... Good it's like they suddenly put the heater on in my room! good god even my boyfriend got aroused but then who wouldn't? Well I have to say the smutt was very good and the plot was quite good but I too am surprised Sesshy shared her but other then that it gets full marks! Anyway a sequel wouldn't be a bad idea and maybe a few more one-shots! Well thats it for me C YA!
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Reviewed By: moosegirl13 (not logged in) On: April 12, 2006 11:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.O Damn! That was so good! lol. I never expected Sesshykins to share Kagome like that. You should write a sequel thingy. Good job. The smut was great and now I have to take a cold shower. Two thumbs up!
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