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Reviewed By: esmeralda21 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2007 22:48 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story; how you put the relationship with kagome and inuyasha. they have finally taken the next step because of you so thanks!
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Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2007 21:55 EDT
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Your story has won an award from the Feudal Association for the August 2007 term! Your award can be found in the following location for the period of one month. http://www.cadkitten.com/feudalassociation/aug2007awards/Best-Oneshot-Ficti on-1st.jpg After that, only first place banners will be available for download, as they are on perminant display, here: http://www.cadkitten.com/feudalassociation/Awards_Aug2007/Awards.php The Feudal Association is a group that presents awards to fanfiction and fanart in the InuYasha Fandom several times a year. We just finished our seventh term in existence! Our official website can be found here - http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/ And our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs can be found here - http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ The Daimyo Owner of the Feudal Association
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Reviewed By: Dragon Queen23 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2007 18:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was an absolutely wonderful fic. I felt as if they maybe had a chance to really be together. Beautifully written, and kept to the characters. *hands medal* For your fine efforts. Xoxo
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Reviewed By: MetsukiKaraTen [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2007 06:44 EDT
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Just beautiful! So true to the characters, and sweetly hot, with the interruptions and discussion that threaded throughout the encounter. I have to honestly say that this is the best 'first time' that I have ever read. Kudos!
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Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2007 02:04 EDT
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This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! The Feudal Association is a group that presents awards to fanfiction and fanart in the InuYasha Fandom several times a year. Our official website can be found here - http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/ The current nominations pages are here: http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/aug2007art.html http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/aug2007.html And our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs can be found here - http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Voting is open August 1, 2007 - August 15, 2007. Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! Winners will be notified by me after August 15th. ~ The Daimyo
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Reviewed By: InusGurl4 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2007 21:03 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aaaawwwwww! I loveded it!!
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Reviewed By: Maloy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2007 17:26 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know, that was probably the best 'First-time' cannon lemon I ever read. I don't know why, but it really seemed to fit their personalities. You did a very good job. I liked the way they talked. Don't laugh. It really made the whole thing seemed belivable)) It wasn't all 'dirty-talk-you-bitch-you're-mine' kind of story, which was the best. Sure things like jealosy were there, bet it was not overwhelming. Anyway, I'm rambling... Very good one-shot!
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Reviewed By: jennlynnfs [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2006 00:27 EDT
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I really enjoyed your story. I just caught up and it feels like InuxKag have been neglected in the storyline. I like your interpretation!
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2006 00:15 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was beautiful! My heart was totally sucked into the ending. I love it when Inuyasha opens up a little bit like that letting her in. It was very sweet and tender. I loved it, great work, thanks!
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Reviewed By: sublimetrickster [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2006 02:36 EDT
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This was refreshingly original and enjoyable. Your analysis of the Kagome and Inuyasha relationship is amazingly well thought out. Thankyou for writing this.
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Reviewed By: Angelstars [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2006 21:01 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Very nicely done, I liked how you wrote the lemon; very realistic and not overely done. Plus it was within plot, and didn't stray.
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Reviewed By: medli [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2006 17:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say that was a good one-shot. It made sense on what was happening and what will be happening. Hope to be reading another from you real soon.
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Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2006 00:32 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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::sniffs:: That was so beautiful. I sorta cried at the end cause it was so lovely. I loved this one-shot very much!
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Reviewed By: bubbles-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2006 23:53 EDT
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Awww, that was so sweet! I felt that you really captured Inuyasha's character because he seems to get frustrated and feel awkward about certain things. Not many people can do that, so awesome job! Loved it!!! Wonder if the others heard them, lol!
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Title: *whew*
Reviewed By: Wheezambu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2006 20:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! is first to review. Damn fine porn.
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