| "The sun and the moon" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] |
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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2006 23:22 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is the kinkest thing I have ever read! Keep it up!~ B reading U!
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Title: YAY
Reviewed By: mindfreak [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2006 15:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like where this story is going. I like the plot alot. Your doing a GREAT job. Keep it up cuz i want this one to keep on going...and going...
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Reviewed By: sesshys numba1 gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2006 15:11 EDT
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i loved it. i can't wait to see their cravings and there mood swings update soon!
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Reviewed By: Onniyaoi On: June 29, 2006 16:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Izayoi... hmm switch the y and the a... and it makes iz yaoi! hehe >.< Nice story ^.^
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Reviewed By: sesshys numba1 gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2006 15:15 EDT
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i loved it. it took me like 3 days to read lol but i loved it keep updating :)
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Reviewed By: Inu_sesshoumaru_luver On: June 19, 2006 22:37 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can do translations and beta reading if u want you can reach me through my mediaminer account (Inu_sesshomaru_luver) or by my email address DragonDamon92417@aol.com anyways i love this story plz keep updating
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Reviewed By: Lady Aqualyne [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2006 07:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic! It is a wonderful read, and the last chapter was absolutely wonderful, and not corny at all. I gave you tens as I saw no mistakes, and it is quite enjoyable, I look forward to the next chapter!
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Title: Finally!
Reviewed By: LadyIvy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2006 03:52 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're going to have to excuse my slowness, but I finally got around to reading this story, and I must say that I love it! It's descriptive, hot, and even though it's OOC, entertaining. The brothers wore each other out, didn't they? I can't wait to read more...Great update!
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Title: Uhh.......Nothing to say....
Reviewed By: Sailor Xs Biggest Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2006 17:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, the story is good an' all, but my Lord Sesshomaru is being humiliated, he would never be nice to his brother, he's a half breeeeedd! Sesshomaru may love him as a brother, but no more. Beleive be, he tells me himself, I'm his bestest follower! "Don't always tell everyone what I say wench!" Uhhh Sesshomaru.....Sorry, you can punish me.....I Was Just defending you! "Silence WENCH" *Whimpers as he whips me with his poision whip* Seeya, Oh, and great story, I just don't agree with the whole brotherly Love thing.....great story though!!
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Title: The sun and moon
Reviewed By: dalk kagome On: April 18, 2006 13:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love your store hope you would write more soon. its different and i like it keep up the good work.
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Title: The sun and the moon
Reviewed By: FAN kagome On: April 18, 2006 10:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love it can't wait for more update soon.
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Reviewed By: angeluswilliam1 On: April 15, 2006 06:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
For a 1st time writer this is an excellent fic keep up the good work.
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