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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2006 21:48 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally an updation, ne? I keep falling more inlove with tis fic! More chappy, more love! School started this week, n it's a killer. I snuck on to read your fic, cuz am dying to read an updation like yours. I felt so sorry for kikyo. Like I said, your the only one that made me like kikyo. Then the whole scene with kags n Inu wuz hot! I mean, all the tension. Baka; thats the word for kags. Inuyasha is SOOOOOOOOOOOOO much better looking that Kouga eva will b! She obviously luvs Inu, the looks are big bonuses, so go for him! I wuz so happy when they kissed that night. I wanted to kill kouga myself when he hit inu's bootiful face!!lol. Every time i read a chapter I feel like writing an essay. So image how I feel about the whole fic itself. And believe me, I hate english writing.lol Once again, you've proven yourself to be a wonderful writer, even tho this is your first fic. I really still cant believe it. You make my fic seem like an ant.lol. It's been so long since i updated. I got the next chappy, but am too lazy to post it, plus all the reading i have to do now that am doing accounts and O.P STRESS!!!! Amma die trying ya kno.lol. OH n PLZ do bring on the lemon! I KNOW that it would be amazing! You've read InuGrrrl fics, lemons. And am sure you've learned a thing or two...maybe three or four.LOL. But, yes. If it's lemon or citrus, it's gonna be off the charts. No positive words would be able to describe it at all!^^ A so feel like a hentai.LoL. Thats jus me for you trini!!! Am glad you finally posted a story n updated too.^.^ Do take your time n update, am sure it will be worth it. OFCOURSE IT WILL. All the chapters are!:D I luv you trini, for writing your fic!!!!!!!!^.^!^__^
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Reviewed By: Half-Demon Punk ~nsi~ On: September 06, 2006 16:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes! Kagome finally stopped listening to the logic in her brain and listened to feelings in her heart. As for the lemon... I suggest you change the rating first. It says you have to have the rating 'Y' to write lemons. And can you give us people who don't really feel comfortable with lemons a warning first. I'm not telling you to write a lemon but I'm not telling you not to. So just do whatever you want. Kouga, they say ingnorance is bliss but you're going to have to face the harsh truth of reality. Kouga should stop having the idea of having the perfect relationship with Kagome 'cause it ain't gonna happen. Well, enough of me and my rambling's. I just want to thank you for the very long chapter and compliment you on a very, very, very, very, very good chapter. Update whenever you can. And I'm hoping that's soon. Well, now to do the homework my teacher's gave me. WHICH IS A WHOLE LOT!T_T Great chapter! Bye! :D
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Reviewed By: DarkMoonStar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2006 01:16 CDT
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Awww this was such an awesome chapter. I loved reading every second of it!! You did such a great job, everything you wrote and said, WOW. I LOVED IT!!!! I cannot wait for more. PLEASE update soon!! I wish I had this drive to finish my stories...*sigh*
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Reviewed By: Keeko~The~Silver~Witch On: September 04, 2006 23:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter it was wicked please update soon please
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Reviewed By: Ender_kb [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2006 20:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are a very gifted writer. I love that you incorporate the songs into the chapters. Encouraging the readers to listen to it while reading is a great suggestion. There are very few spelling/grammatical errors which pleases me. I suggest re-reading (I know they're long chapters)your chapters to catch them. The reading experience is so much greater when there aren't wny errors. Great job! Keep it coming.
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha Baby_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2006 20:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
U cease to amaze me ur good . the story is exsquisid(sorry if i mispelled) i loved it to no end and will continue to love this story till the end!!! much luv 2 ya keep it up p;zupdate soon
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2006 14:43 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well this chapter made for your lateness but you where sick, had school like all of us. Well at least you actully came back to your story unlike some others out there. But hey I hope you update soon and keep on, keep on.
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Title: LEMON!
Reviewed By: xSimplicity [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2006 11:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you so totally have to put a lemon heheh and yes that was a VERY long chapter -_- maybe I'm just a slow reader but it took me a half an hour to read O.o' anywho update soon I can't wait ^^
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Title: Excellenta'
Reviewed By: Inuyasha Baby_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2006 23:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
brilliant brilliant. beautiful dancing .u r very talented at fanfics plz review soon.
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Reviewed By: kacey On: August 31, 2006 19:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT WAS F#^@ing amazing!!!! the best story ive read in a looonnngggg time. thank god i started reading this when you left on a happy note. PLEASE Oh Please dont make it too painfull before she finally comes to her senses and dropps koga...please! great job writing, and cant wait to see what you do next.
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Reviewed By: scoobydoo123 On: August 31, 2006 17:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay first let me tell you im dying waiting for you to update! im so sucked into your story! and i listened to 45 and its one of my fav songs now. and if your running low on songs you should listen to hate me today by blue october. i think with how your story has been going you could find a spot for it, but its just a request. okay so update soon!
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Reviewed By: Half-Demon Punk [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2006 11:52 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am confused. I remember I read the chapter but it says I sent in a review three days before it was posted. Anyway... it's almost a month since you updated. T_T Oh well, since school is coming back it's probably gonna be hard for you to update. so i'm not gonna start saying 'why aren't you updating?' or 'when are you updating?'. I'm just gonna say... update whenever you can. i hope it's soon but your probably really busy. so just update whenever you can. thanks. bye :D
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Reviewed By: Cagalli-San [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2006 20:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I love this story! For some reason, I think Ayame might be involved more in later chapters. I don't know why but if Koga and Kikyo get together ( shouldn't happen...not right..not at all) But like I said, I think Ayame might get together with Koga....but chya neva know! No matter what you decide to do with your story, I'm sure it'll be great! It's truly an Awesome story! Long Lost... Is truly unique and you must keep up your great work!! And I LOVE the songs you put in! They fit so well!! Please update soon!!
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Reviewed By: kt On: July 31, 2006 23:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh man...I REALLY like your story! Its so good! I mean the singing thing is getting a little cliche but you really make it your own unique story. Can't wait for the next chap! Oh and thanks for not making Kikiyo a bitch in this story because that's where I was thinkin this was gonna go. Great so far!
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Title: elenacala
Reviewed By: elenacala [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2006 16:14 CDT
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wow that was a great long chappie!!! I loved it!!! I am so glad they finally acted on thier passion.. man kouga is gonan be pissed as all hell...
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