Title: Interesting
Reviewed By: Oneesan no Miroku Houshi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2006 22:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
You did a good job for this being a first fanfic. I usually don't read self-insertions, but I tried this anyway. You might want to chenge your format however, just save your document as an HTML or DOC file and re-upload it. You should be able to fix it that way. It should look better and not so much like a large paragraph. Feel free to check out my works if you wish. It's always good to share the fanfiction love. I do encourage you to write more on this. It looks promising.
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