| "My Futures' Past" Reviews/Comments [ 382 ] |
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Reviewed By: che lee [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2006 14:07 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
bold UP DATE
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Title: 10++++++++2000:P
Reviewed By: Hyena On: September 04, 2006 13:31 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES! MIROKU HENTAI BUTT FINALLY GOT KICKED!!! NICEST CHAPTER YET, YOU'RE THE BEEST! CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT THE CLIFFY WILL BRING WITH IT NOW.:D
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2006 13:11 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. I'm glad that Miroku got his interfering butt kicked! And Sesshomaru is a real piece of work here. I look forward to the next chapter. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Karen Angelica [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2006 12:45 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I AM IN LOVE WITH YOUR STORIES!!!!!!!! I DO MEAN STORIES BECAUSE I LOVE THIS ONE AS MUCH AS, "CROSSING SWORDS!" YOU ARE AMAZING! I CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE!
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Title: OMG!!!!!
Reviewed By: mel f On: September 04, 2006 10:54 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
what a cliffy!!!! what are you tryen to do drive us people crazy?!!!! please update again soon.
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Title: wwwwwwwwwweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Reviewed By: Silent Miko Slayer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2006 10:16 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE ^^ I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE AS SOON AS POSIBLE!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!! This is my fav fanfic and thats sayiing alot since I have read 587 stories so far! ^^ update!!!!! please!!!
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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2006 08:21 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa that was hot! Awesome chapter, but I expect nothing less from you! Until the next chapter~ B reading U!
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Title: Hot Damn!
Reviewed By: InuYasha's Babydoll On: September 04, 2006 01:01 PDT
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Now, THAT was a great damn chapter. Nice citrus and I loved the interaction between Miroku & InuYasha. But what I find most adorable, is the little canine things you have Yasha do. It adds such cute realism. SQUEE! Lurvely!
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2006 00:52 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A CLIFFY???This long and you left us with a cliffy? Sneaky wench, lol....And I was SOOO wondering when they'd both get their first kiss...Awesome....update when you can,
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Reviewed By: Hyena On: August 31, 2006 14:46 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!! If you pleese.
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Reviewed By: Ronnika On: August 30, 2006 00:13 PDT
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awsome chapter can't wait to see what happends to Miroku. I'm waiting on the edge of my seat as I'm sure everyone else is for the next chapter. Please update soon!!! :P
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Reviewed By: crimson_tear [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2006 21:16 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
fantastic story, i cant wait for more updates. I was wondeirng if/when our dear monk would be coming along. cant wait t find out what happens to him after this particular indecresion.
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Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2006 21:30 PDT
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Congratulations, this story has been nominated for Best AU/AR Fiction at the Feudal Association. Voting continues until the 22nd of September and membership to the group is open! Feel Free to join us! http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com ~Dark Avenger (aka The Daimyo)
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Reviewed By: Leo-mae On: August 24, 2006 08:13 PDT
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Oh yea more stuff to add. Could you please not make Kagome pregnant. I think pregnancy tends to ruin fics, unless that's the way the author intends for the story to go. But with the way you are setting this up, and adventure story, a pregnancy would hamper the traveling and fighting that would be necessary for this story to continue and thrive. I also like the way you portray Kag in this story, she's a lot stronger and isn't into trusting people blindly. I also like the way she listens to Inuyasha more, which is something that Rumiko didn't seem to think about. Men during that era did not really take women into consideration as leaders or decision makers and they wouldn't like the idea of a woman being in charge, something the real Kagome often does when it comes to Inuyasha. However, this story does take place in Japan which is in Asia, a region where women were given more freedom and respect. So the way you have depicted their relationship, in my opinion, accurately shows the way a man from Inu's era and a woman from ours would interact in a relationship. I'm also going with the "Kag isn't pregnant thing" because I do believe that Inu is infertile most of the time. Think about it, he is a hanyou a hybrid and most hybrids are infertile, with the exception of wolf-hybrids. Going with the fact that he is a hybrid he should only be able to breed on the nights of the new moon and the full moon, when he is more one way than the other. And he and Kag have not had sex on these nights. Well that was a lot of info sorry. ^.~
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Reviewed By: Leo-mae On: August 24, 2006 07:58 PDT
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Ahhh!!! You gotta update soon I HAVE to find out what happens next!!! And could Kagome and Inu kiss in the next chapter? It would be a good way to keep Inu from killing Miroku, even if he does deserve a good beating. Anyway please update soon ok ja!!!
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