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| "My Futures' Past" Reviews/Comments [ 382 ] | | Pages (26): [ « ‹ 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 › » ] | Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2006 00:52 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A CLIFFY???This long and you left us with a cliffy? Sneaky wench, lol....And I was SOOO wondering when they'd both get their first kiss...Awesome....update when you can,
| Reviewed By: Hyena On: August 31, 2006 14:46 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!! If you pleese.
| Reviewed By: Ronnika On: August 30, 2006 00:13 PDT
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awsome chapter can't wait to see what happends to Miroku. I'm waiting on the edge of my seat as I'm sure everyone else is for the next chapter. Please update soon!!! :P
| Reviewed By: crimson_tear [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2006 21:16 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
fantastic story, i cant wait for more updates. I was wondeirng if/when our dear monk would be coming along. cant wait t find out what happens to him after this particular indecresion.
| Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2006 21:30 PDT
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Congratulations, this story has been nominated for Best AU/AR Fiction at the Feudal Association. Voting continues until the 22nd of September and membership to the group is open! Feel Free to join us! http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com ~Dark Avenger (aka The Daimyo)
| Reviewed By: Leo-mae On: August 24, 2006 08:13 PDT
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Oh yea more stuff to add. Could you please not make Kagome pregnant. I think pregnancy tends to ruin fics, unless that's the way the author intends for the story to go. But with the way you are setting this up, and adventure story, a pregnancy would hamper the traveling and fighting that would be necessary for this story to continue and thrive. I also like the way you portray Kag in this story, she's a lot stronger and isn't into trusting people blindly. I also like the way she listens to Inuyasha more, which is something that Rumiko didn't seem to think about. Men during that era did not really take women into consideration as leaders or decision makers and they wouldn't like the idea of a woman being in charge, something the real Kagome often does when it comes to Inuyasha. However, this story does take place in Japan which is in Asia, a region where women were given more freedom and respect. So the way you have depicted their relationship, in my opinion, accurately shows the way a man from Inu's era and a woman from ours would interact in a relationship. I'm also going with the "Kag isn't pregnant thing" because I do believe that Inu is infertile most of the time. Think about it, he is a hanyou a hybrid and most hybrids are infertile, with the exception of wolf-hybrids. Going with the fact that he is a hybrid he should only be able to breed on the nights of the new moon and the full moon, when he is more one way than the other. And he and Kag have not had sex on these nights. Well that was a lot of info sorry. ^.~
| Reviewed By: Leo-mae On: August 24, 2006 07:58 PDT
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Ahhh!!! You gotta update soon I HAVE to find out what happens next!!! And could Kagome and Inu kiss in the next chapter? It would be a good way to keep Inu from killing Miroku, even if he does deserve a good beating. Anyway please update soon ok ja!!!
| Reviewed By: Hyena On: August 23, 2006 01:25 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE SOON UPDATE SOON UPDATE SOON THANK U.
| Reviewed By: inusakura_19 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2006 21:26 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the last chapter and i can't wait to see what inuyasha does to miroku. please hurry, i cant stand the suspence
| Title: Chapter 10!
Reviewed By: Ki-Ki On: August 22, 2006 15:05 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pleese update soon! I can't wait to see how painful will Miroku-san's punishment will be! I just can't wait anymore! This story is too awersome! (Not to mention the evil cliffy!)
| Reviewed By: Luna18 On: August 22, 2006 15:00 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Something went wrong in my review..what was removed from it was basicilly that you update soon pleese that that I absolutly love this story. Pleese update it soon enough! {Oh btw Namine, thank you for that comment (though extremly long in my opinion) but you seemed to have mispelled my nick. It is Luna18, not LunaChick18. You've mispelled my name for another awersome Inu author by mistake, but it doesn't matter to me. That's rather common actually, but try to be more careful next time ok? Though you where porbably more procupated in running for your life than remembering names where you? Joke! It's a joke I swear!XD}
| Title: Chapter.10
Reviewed By: Luna18 On: August 22, 2006 14:52 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Stunning chapter just like the others! You never cease to amaze how wonderfully you write your stories! Now this fanfic can be called a real Inyasha story! (Not to mention the ultra-smexy Demon Inu!Huwaee!!I love Demon Inu!
| Title: STILL typing?!WTH, I'm running for my life! *flees*
Reviewed By: Namine On: August 22, 2006 14:41 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Before I get killed by the angry mob of tired & frustrated people who don't like wasting time reading loong re-views, I'd like to thank you for adding my name at the begining of Chapter.10 right before the Chapter begun. TTwTT I have to tell you that I feel honoured that you did , & I thank you a lot for that, (A LOOOOOOOT now that you mention it:P) but apart from me & Hyena, there are many other reviewers who keep you on your toes & help you out on update-checking & plot-prasing/criticising, like Anina, Boo-Boo, LunaChick18 & many many many others that would make up another long re-view on it's own. Also, I'd like to thank you for writing such a wonderfully composed story that make over-abused characters belive again that there are talented writers out there and that there aren't just the usual 'grab a pen & start abusing Inu-gang' people who thing that making Inu & Kag hump out of the blue is what makes an Inyasha fanfic an Inuyasha fanfic. You know what I mean..*shivers* That said, I hope you'll keep up the good work & will still keep up surpising us with your very original & creative ideas more & more. I hope to see more soon, and thank you again for being such a wonderful author!:D (Now I have to run away to the other side of the planet before the other reviewers find me in order to drown me in the nearest river. See you at the next update and good night *flees*)
| Title: Chap.10 {Part.2(??)}
Reviewed By: Namine On: August 22, 2006 14:18 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Also, I'd like to point out at how you wonderfully portraited both Inuyasha & Kagome. Their relationship has turned quite soild, and there is already long threads of trust between the two. The way Inu's already this possesive of Kag (he's soo jealous of Miroku!X3) shows his usual gruff way of caring of somebody. & Kagome isn't the usual 'I trust everyone & everything!' like every person likes to portray her, but rather strong & determinated whenever neeeded, yet gentle & understanding when someone needs help. Just like the original Kagome. Also, you've got some real wicked sense of humor. The way the chapter ended was too hilarous! It really makes you laugh waterfalls yet at the same time keep you on your chair to see how on earth is Miroku doing to get out of trouble this time! (Though this time, I do think he's had it!) This 'rumor' of Kagome being pregnant is too far-fetched to me though. I'm sure that Kag's not in heat, & when she was, Inu had restrained himself from forcing himself on her even though he was a demon back then remember? Sure they had humped right after Kag got nearly raped, but she was already out-of heat & only somedays later they did it again, so I guess Kag is definitly NOT with-pup unless I'm wrong. I'd better stop writing now because I think I've wrote enough for today, lol..the longest review on this page probably! Sorry for this!XXD
| Title: Chapter 10
Reviewed By: Namine On: August 22, 2006 13:59 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked the way this chapter has started, with Human Inuyasha explaining to Kagome & Sango what happened exactly that day when he got sealed & why without the heavy burden of accepting Kikyou's request or Naraku's meddling. So light-tuned without the tragedies behind. (Not that Inu doesn't have enough Tragedies in his life already.) Also, now that Sesshoumaru's the main villian in this story, will Naraku not show up, or would he still show up somehow? Though without him, things would be real much better.0=3 I also like the way you made Miroku meet the Inu-gang even though the shards aren't involved in the storyline. Now that there are no shards, does that mean that our fav. pervert will not have his hand cursed with the blackhole? (Though the perverted hand curse doesn't count with that right?) Like Lil Rin said before, I also wonder if & how Inu & the rest are doing to meet Shippo with the shards getting involved in his father's death. Maybe the Thunder Brothers hunted him down for pure joy of killing maybe? That would soo be like what the T.B would do after all. I'm also super-duper curious wheather Fluffy would meet up with Rin or not. Probably not though, since Inu would need the sword to bash his brother up & her village would have to get killed by the wolves. & in this case, it would be bascily Sesshy's fault since he had summoned them from the north to the west. Ouch.
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