| "My Futures' Past" Reviews/Comments [ 382 ] |
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2006 10:48 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an excellent story. I just found it with the latest chapter, and I have loved every bit that I've read so far. I will definitely be keeping up with it from now on. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Piroian On: June 30, 2006 07:15 PDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're good! Can't wait for the next chapter to come up soon!!
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Title: :'(
Reviewed By: Blue_Thunder On: June 29, 2006 15:40 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's like forever now since you've updated! Pleese find some time to update your story soon, cause I'm really curious to find out what's going to happen next now!
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Title: Chapter 8
Reviewed By: Hyena On: June 26, 2006 02:26 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NICE CHAPTER, BUT UPDATE THE NEXT ONE SOON PLEESE, THANK YOU. YOU WRITE WELL.
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Title: 100th review!
Reviewed By: Thiera On: June 25, 2006 13:45 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sesshoumaru's going to meet up with Inuyasha now? Say, will they still fight in their father's grave now since Tessussiga (Sorry if I've spelt the name wrong) was already found by the older brother somehow? I can't wait to see Fluffy transform & read the battle between him & Inuyasha, it will surely still be awersome, fought in Daddy's grave or not! Oh, & in this story, will Sesshy still meet up with Rin somehow or not? I like those 2, & I hope that somehow they'll end up together (Grown-up Rin though! I'm no perv!! XXP) in the manga, but this is your story, so you should decide upon that. Anyway, I just wanted to know whether they'd still meet or not (I'd like to read Sesshoumaru's reaction to that!) that's all! P.S: I'm the 100th reviewer of 'My Futures' Past'!!! WOOOHHOO!! Beat you lamly you fast-typing people!
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Reviewed By: Thiera On: June 25, 2006 13:43 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sesshoumaru's going to meet up with Inuyasha now? Say, will they still fight in their father's grave now since Tessussiga (Sorry if I've spelt the name wrong) was already found by the older brother somehow? I can't wait to see Fluffy transform & read the battle between him & Inuyasha, it will surely still be awersome, fought in Daddy's grave or not! Oh, & in this story, will Sesshy still meet up with Rin somehow or not? I like those 2, & I hope that somehow they'll end up together (With grown-up Rin though! I'm no perv!! XXP) in the manga, but this is your story, so you should decide upon that. Anyway, I just wanted to know whether they'd still meet or not (I'd like to read Sesshoumaru's reaction to that!) that's all! P.S: I'm the 100th reviewer of 'My Futures' Past'!!! WOOOHHOO!! Beat you lamly you fast-typing people!
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Reviewed By: Namine On: June 25, 2006 13:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think Sango would have actually acted like this towards Inuyasha had they met in different circumstances (Like in your story) & it would have made a lot of sense. I mean, she was raised in a Demon exterminator village after all, & I don't think the villagers said nice things about their usual way of making a living out of them. The sudden change of heart in Sango towards demons in general in the actual manga seems too unreal for me. It's was a too modern change of heart to be a exterminator man/woman from the fedual era where all what he/she hears about demons are bad things, especially about half-demons. Well, it's like seeing a die-hard Dragon exterminator who killed god-knows-only how many dragons & keeps them as trophies, then one day decides to talk to one & the very next day you see that person accompany the dragons during a village raid & participates in the hunt with them. Too far-fecthed if you ask me. Still, Sango is a vauable person & warrior in the story, so I guess no one can complain about that, demon slayer or not.
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Reviewed By: (*>_ On: June 25, 2006 09:37 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Since Kikyou died old she wouldn't appear in this story? So, no dead clay pot in the way of Inuyasha? Just want to know this...if yes... YAAY!!! & if no..well..it's still ok
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: suikidoen On: June 24, 2006 22:07 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg sango is a total BITCH how dare u stop here!!! i must read more i'm at the end of my seat damn it!
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Title: X3
Reviewed By: Boo-Boo On: June 23, 2006 13:45 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
THANK YOU that you updated! This story is way to awersome! Can't wait to read the next one now!
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Reviewed By: Anina On: June 23, 2006 13:37 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm amazed by your way of writing your fanfic & managing to keep the storyline loyal to the original plot in many many ways. I just can't stop reading this story, it totally captured me in it! It's like this fic is enchanted..with very obvious talent & inspiration! (& a certain liking for a certain hanyou, isn't it right?;)) Keep up your great work there & just don't stop writing!!I'm at the edge of my chair waiting for the next chapter like many other people out there, but you update when you can & when you feel like to ok? Don't want to rush the writer, bad things might happen!! (Like..long delayed update!? NOOOOOO!!! ~I'm joking!:P) See you soon then!!~Anina-chan
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Title: UPDATE!
Reviewed By: Boo-Boo On: June 23, 2006 13:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAAAAY!! I'm so glad you updated!! I'm going to read Chapter 8 right now!!
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Title: Chapter 8 *count.*
Reviewed By: Ki-Ki On: June 23, 2006 13:16 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm..I guess you didn't write that funny bit from the manga because Kagome didn't go back to her time to retrieve the First-aid Kit & Bike from her time right? Too bad...I had hoped that you'd have somehow added that piece in the chapter where Fluffy would have hit home a few moments later. =sigh= Oh well..guess I just answered my own question, isn't that true? Too bad though, Inuyasha's reaction would have turned out quite interesting, especially now that her treats Kagome in a more..'doggish' way than normal in this story...keh! Anyway, make sure you update ok? & keep up that awersome work of yours meanwhile!
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Title: Chapter 8
Reviewed By: KI-KI On: June 23, 2006 13:01 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter is really good all in all, but what I find sad is that you didn't include the moment Kagome tried to treat Inuyasha's wounds & ended up on top of Inu like in the manga. Though there is was innocent, I would have liked to see whether the interaction would have still held the same innocence or not (Yeah, I'm a lemon addict..& so?:P) & to see Inuyasha's reaction to that. >'~'<
Really embaressed to get caught by kaede with Kagome lying on top of him to treat his wounds or...? Well, I'd have loved to see his reaction anyway. The fiction is good in its own smooth way, other than that there's noting wrong in it!
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2006 10:53 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ya know, I coulda sworn I left a review before...heh, but with my puter being FUBAR for a bit I most likely didnt. Anyways, love the story. The whole thing. I think its very well written and not one of the norms Ive seen around. I like the fact that Inu's full demon, I think it just adds to his character. And the way Kagome reacts to him is just great. Think it'll take alotta ketsu kissing for Kagome to accept Sango after what she did so that should be interesting to see. Dunno who else you plan on bringing to the party but Im sure it'll be great. Cant wait to see what happens next. But update when you can. :D
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