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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: suikidoen On: June 24, 2006 22:07 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg sango is a total BITCH how dare u stop here!!! i must read more i'm at the end of my seat damn it!
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Title: X3
Reviewed By: Boo-Boo On: June 23, 2006 13:45 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
THANK YOU that you updated! This story is way to awersome! Can't wait to read the next one now!
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Reviewed By: Anina On: June 23, 2006 13:37 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm amazed by your way of writing your fanfic & managing to keep the storyline loyal to the original plot in many many ways. I just can't stop reading this story, it totally captured me in it! It's like this fic is enchanted..with very obvious talent & inspiration! (& a certain liking for a certain hanyou, isn't it right?;)) Keep up your great work there & just don't stop writing!!I'm at the edge of my chair waiting for the next chapter like many other people out there, but you update when you can & when you feel like to ok? Don't want to rush the writer, bad things might happen!! (Like..long delayed update!? NOOOOOO!!! ~I'm joking!:P) See you soon then!!~Anina-chan
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Title: UPDATE!
Reviewed By: Boo-Boo On: June 23, 2006 13:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAAAAY!! I'm so glad you updated!! I'm going to read Chapter 8 right now!!
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Title: Chapter 8 *count.*
Reviewed By: Ki-Ki On: June 23, 2006 13:16 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm..I guess you didn't write that funny bit from the manga because Kagome didn't go back to her time to retrieve the First-aid Kit & Bike from her time right? Too bad...I had hoped that you'd have somehow added that piece in the chapter where Fluffy would have hit home a few moments later. =sigh= Oh well..guess I just answered my own question, isn't that true? Too bad though, Inuyasha's reaction would have turned out quite interesting, especially now that her treats Kagome in a more..'doggish' way than normal in this story...keh! Anyway, make sure you update ok? & keep up that awersome work of yours meanwhile!
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Title: Chapter 8
Reviewed By: KI-KI On: June 23, 2006 13:01 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter is really good all in all, but what I find sad is that you didn't include the moment Kagome tried to treat Inuyasha's wounds & ended up on top of Inu like in the manga. Though there is was innocent, I would have liked to see whether the interaction would have still held the same innocence or not (Yeah, I'm a lemon addict..& so?:P) & to see Inuyasha's reaction to that. >'~'<
Really embaressed to get caught by kaede with Kagome lying on top of him to treat his wounds or...? Well, I'd have loved to see his reaction anyway. The fiction is good in its own smooth way, other than that there's noting wrong in it!
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2006 10:53 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ya know, I coulda sworn I left a review before...heh, but with my puter being FUBAR for a bit I most likely didnt. Anyways, love the story. The whole thing. I think its very well written and not one of the norms Ive seen around. I like the fact that Inu's full demon, I think it just adds to his character. And the way Kagome reacts to him is just great. Think it'll take alotta ketsu kissing for Kagome to accept Sango after what she did so that should be interesting to see. Dunno who else you plan on bringing to the party but Im sure it'll be great. Cant wait to see what happens next. But update when you can. :D
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Title: Chapter 8
Reviewed By: Kid's Amulet On: June 20, 2006 14:16 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter is really good. You've captured Inuyahsa's over-protectivness for Kagome really well even if it's for property rights (till now:P) against Kisho and I love the way you are developing the relationship between them. I also really love the way you're sticking to the original plot of Takahashi but with your own original twist. What I find werid though is that you have totally excluded Myouga from this part of the story. I mean, he was supposed to arrive just before Sesshoumaru arrives in town (originally to find out where Inuyasha's sword is hidden but here he just wants to kick some brother's butt) to 'help' out Inuyasha whislt he wields Tesusaiga in his father's grave & to mention his blood inheritance by talking about his mother to Kaede & Kagome (+ Sango), for Kag to realise that his mother was the human parent & his father the demon one. For Kag to learn more about Inu's heritance in other words. So, would Myouga arrive after Sesshoumaru's appearence or would he come along with Shippo somehow? (I can't wait for Shippo to come also:he's a must!XD) Don't forget that Myouga helps Inu out on his first human appearence by drinking most of the poison ingected by the spider demon for the jewel shard (though this would chance a bit here right?) so I guess Myouga does hold a sort of important role in both source of information & advice of steps. On the whole, the rest is O.K!:) I look forward to reading more of this story. I will be waiting...KU KU KU!!!XD
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Title: Chapter 8
Reviewed By: Kid's Amulet On: June 20, 2006 14:11 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter is really good. you've captured Inuyahsa's over-protectivness for Kagome even if it's for property rights (Till now:P) against Kisho and I love the way you are developing the relationship between them. & I really love the way you're sticking to the original plot of Takahashi but with your own original twist. What I find werid though is that you have totally excluded Myouga from this part of the story. I mean, he was supposed to arrive just before Sesshoumaru arrives in town (originally to find out where Inuyasha's sword is hidden but here he just wants to kick some brother's butt) to 'help' out Inuyasha whislt he wields Tesusaiga in his father's grave & to mention his blood inheritance by talking about his mother to Kaede & Kagome (+ Sango), for Kag to realise that his mother was the human parent & his father the demon one. For Kag to learn more about Inu's heritance in other words. So, would Myouga arrive after Sesshoumaru's appearence or would he come along with Shippo somehow? (I can't wait for Shippo to come also:he's a must!XD) Don't forget that Myouga helps Inu out on his first human appearence by drinking most of the poison ingected by the spider demon for the jewwl shard (though this would chance a bit here right?) so I guess Myouga does hold a sort of important role in both source of information & advice of steps. On the whole, the rest is O.K!:) I look forward to reading more of this story. I will be waiting...KU KU KU!!!XD
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Title: You're G.R.E.A.T!!! X3
Reviewed By: Kairi's twin On: June 20, 2006 13:03 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awersome Inu fanfic, probibly the best of all!!Keep up the good work Bluezinthos!! XDD
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Title: No Shikon, no Kikyou!
Reviewed By: Rid-chan On: June 16, 2006 10:09 PDT
Comment/Review:
It's interesting the way you have written your story just like the original but at the same time it is different with your own twist of changes, like the fact that Kikyou isn't that important in the story like in the original Inuyasha & is just part of history like the Shikon no Tama. It actually makes lots of sense. In the original story of Inuyasha, Kikyou came back to the living world because the Shikon had also returned in the story, like how Rumiko explained in one of her interviews. & like she said, hadn't there been the shikon in play, probably even Kikyou wouldn't have returned to the show either. I look really foward to countinue reading this story, it is absolutly wonderful!!
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Reviewed By: Boo-Boo On: June 16, 2006 09:58 PDT
Comment/Review:
Nice, want to read more pleese
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Reviewed By: master billy On: June 15, 2006 23:59 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
my my this is an interesting read i have read the whole thing in several hours and wen you start some thing at 11 in the night it must be good to keep you read at 3 in the morning after all people do have the unfortunate issue of getting tired after a while still this is beside the point i have so far enjoyed the story and i have found my self cuios as to what will happen next so please update soon
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Reviewed By: Ronnika On: June 14, 2006 01:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey awesome story!!! I'm speachless its that good. I wonder if you are going to add anyother characters to you story. And yes!! no dead claypot to distroy the bond between Kagome and InuYasha. I'm at the edge of my chair waiting for the next chapter! keep up the awesome work!
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Reviewed By: Subtle Serenity On: June 13, 2006 12:58 PDT
Comment/Review:
I have been greatly impressed by your work and I really hope you can continue. If you ever need inspiration, then you should check out a site called fictionpress. Whenever I get writers block, I head over there and read some originals. Those people really do have some fresh ideas!(check out my fic there) Anyway, just make sure to update!( I hope I helped u out a little...(*>_
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