| "My Futures' Past" Reviews/Comments [ 382 ] |
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Reviewed By: dreamer789 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2007 21:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my god! you have to be the best writer ive ever read staries from! your stories are amazing keep up the great work i LOVE this story i cantwait to find out what happens next!
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Reviewed By: Punkrock_grl92 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2007 04:50 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say that you do a good job describing & I like the twist you put on the original storyline, but yet it's still creative & you made it your own at the same time. I was wondering though... Do you like Sesshomaru? I know there are a lot of 'Sesshy' fans out there & I don't wanna make anyone mad when I say this, but I just had to ask cause I personally don't like him very much & I think you've done a good job with keeping him pretty close to his character in your story, though maybe just a little (& I mean very little) over-exagerated on being completely heartless. It makes me mad & I hate it when people make him OOC just because they like him & want him to be nice when he's really not. & I never really understood why he wants Inuyasha's sword so much when he can't even use it. What would he do with it? I just think Sesshomaru is jeolous that Inuyasha got something better than he did. He acts like he's so much better than Inuyasha, when I think he's a little intimidated by him. I mean, Sesshomaru might not be totally cold-hearted, but he's still a complete jerk and louzy brother to Inuyasha (poor Inu has enough issues already). It must make Inuyasha feel bad that Sesshomaru accepts Rin's human blood, but then hates Inuyasha because of his human blood when Inuyasha is only HALF human. It seems like Sesshomaru just keeps Rin around to spite Inuyasha. I don't know if that's true, but it's something to think about. Sesshomaru just seems self-centered and acts like he thinks he's better than everyone else (especially Inuyasha). He just seems snobby and stuck up to me... That's just my opinion, though. I mean nobody has to agree with me & like I said, I don't want to make anyone mad at me, but I honestly don't know why everybody likes him so much... Oh, & sorry for such a long review. ^_^ Update Soon, Please!!
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2007 09:17 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice to read this again and it was incretable. Hope you update and keep it up. Peace...
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Title: great chapter
Reviewed By: seraphin03 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2007 00:09 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its so great that a new chap. is up, i really enjoyed it and your many reviews are evidence enough of that. i really can't wait until the end of the story, let alone the next chap....but... ill continue waiting...lol...hope its not too much... :-p
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Reviewed By: kittypaws182 On: July 16, 2007 21:34 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay u updated Thank You So much!this was an interesting chapter and I enjoyed it very much please update when you can & can't wait for the next chaper. Tootles. Kittypaws182
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Reviewed By: wudelfin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2007 11:06 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwww! it was so short!!!! still great action can't wait for the next installment.
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Reviewed By: Patty530 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2007 03:01 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THANK YOU SO MUCH. I really enjoyed the new chapter. I love what you're doing in this story. You've taken much beloved characters, and familiar settings and made a wonderfully exciting and different story. I'm so glad you decided to update. I look forward to seeing where this story goes. Please update again soon. (She asks selfishly) Patty
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2007 18:44 PDT
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great chapter update... have been waiting for you to update your story... really like it... update soon... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2007 17:39 PDT
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loves the new chap...update soon...SAVE THE EARTH IT'S THE ONLY PLANET WITH CHOCOLATE...Cheers
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Reviewed By: Nomina [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2007 15:28 PDT
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I'm so excited that you updated. This is my favorite of all your stories. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: crimsondragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2007 09:49 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must say that this is a rather enjoyable twist upon the original story. It is, at the same time, something very similar to the story, and something entirely unique as well. Keep up the good work, and pease continue the story through the end.
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Reviewed By: crimsondragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2007 09:48 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must say that this is a rather enjoyable twist upon the original story. It is, at the same time, something very similar to the story, and something entirely unique as well. Keep up the good work, and pease continue the story through the end.
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Reviewed By: Licentia poetica [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2007 08:36 PDT
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Glad to see a new chapter! I don't remember whether I've given an R&R before; if I haven't forgive me. I'm enjoying the interesting twist on canon that you've come up with; keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: lockedincar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2007 07:53 PDT
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excellent chapter
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Reviewed By: cynbad146 On: July 15, 2007 06:34 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed the update. This is a pretty good story. See you at the next installment. Thank you for sharing. Cynbad146
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