| "The Virgin's Experiment" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Title: Best Lemon -Congrats!
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2012 23:50 EDT
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Congratulations! Your fiction has won an award from the Feudal Association for the July 2012 term! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/feudal/ Our Yahoo Group, where the nominating and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ This terms' Fiction/Artwork Winners List can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/feudal/winners/2012-2/july-2012-2/ Fiction Awards for this term, July 2012, may be found here. http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/feudal/gallery/thumbnails.php?album=105 All awards, past or present, can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/feudal/gallery/index.php **You may receive this notice more than once if you've won multiple awards. Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~The Feudal Association |
Reviewed By: N1ta On: April 11, 2012 17:45 EDT
Comment/Review:
Loved It! |
Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2010 23:50 EDT
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hi! dont think u remember me since its been forever since we spoke or w/e xD But i ran across this and just had to read it... AGAIN! Gee, i dont think i'll EVER get tired of readin this fic. It's jus amazing... I LOVE IT!! Now i can go sleep peacefully. I was so restless cuz i had a late class - am so tired u.u LOVE THIS FIC!!
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Title: Amazing
Reviewed By: XIShadowxDemonIX [MediaMiner Member] On: February 29, 2008 00:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was extremely well written, and the best InuxKag one-shot I've ever read ^^; It was certainly a delicious treat :3
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Reviewed By: Yabou [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2007 15:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've really enjoyed reading this. I just started during the last chapter, and I thought I had reviewed... but... lol I have a very bad memory. I don't usually read Sango/Miroku based fanfictions, but you tend to jump around enough that we get to see all of the characters. And, I'm really intrigued by what *did* happen in Sango's past, and Miroku's. I also like your realistic view of the characters... you're not skewing them so much from the canon. It's great that they retain their personalities. I can't wait to see what you turn out next!
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Title: Hot, HOt, HOT!!!
Reviewed By: Briana_D [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2007 02:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
::Gives a standing ovation:: Can I give a 11 or maybe a 20 to this one. WOW, WOW, WOW!!! Your fic was absolutely smashing. Right from the get go your story was steaming hot and so very tantalising. ::Fans self:: The lemon was one of the best i have read - it was just so damn good, not sleazy or rushed. And did i mention that it was HOT! Even the dance routine was well choreographed adn even better described. I could almost visualise the whole routine...and believe me i enjoyed it very much! Hope I can write a lemon half as good as yours. Once again, kudos to you! ~~~ Briana
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Reviewed By: Inuyashas_girl_kagome2007 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2007 09:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEY this storys awsome make more like this with inuyasha and kagome u get a 10 4 everything plus its on my favs
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Reviewed By: VelvetNight [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2006 16:40 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW....that's really all I can say... WOW. I do believe I've NEVER read anything like that before. The refreshing fact about it was that it was BELIEVEABLE. I've read far too many one-shots where "boy meets girl. boy falls for girl. Girl sleeps with boy. Girl proclaims her undying love for him." or vice versa. What I really loved about your fic was that you expressed "lust at first sight" not love. And it's very believable that if you see a girl/guy that you happen to fall in "lust" with to see him/her in the future with kids, etc....provided you yourself want that. I really admire that about you and this fic. Now the major thing I have to comment on is your description, especially for the lap dance. DA-YUM! I could practically taste the tension and your imagery and ability to paint that picture in my mind....madd props to you!! All in all...this is most definitely going into my favs!! ~VelvetNight
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2006 07:44 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really, like it huh^^ THANX!!! I love your stories!! Really enjoy them too. You have me grinning from ear to ear...and it's my first fic! *sqeals* I'm now a happy happy teen on the loose. lol^_^
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha Baby_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2006 01:25 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
goood good good . i like that had me on edge at the club .
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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2006 21:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
VERY HOT, VERY SEXY!!!!!! GOOD JOB~ B reading U!
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Reviewed By: Caitriona695 On: June 10, 2006 19:19 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
DAMN! This was original and very very hot. Thanks for sharing with us!
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2006 23:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
In a word: Magnificent. This was truly beautiful. Could actually feel what was going on between the characters. I loved it. But when I saw KiKi's name in there...she'll love it as much as the rest of us. Most excellent job.
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Title: WooooT!
Reviewed By: Inus_Bad_Beyotch [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2006 02:36 EDT
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Hawt. You & your beta/giftee did an excellent job. Now all you've gotta do i grace us with more! :wink:
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Reviewed By: Teddy Bear [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2006 00:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Gives you a round of applause* That oneshot has definitely just earned its place in my top ten of best lemons ever written and trust me, I've read many. The only problem I had was with how far Kagome went with the erotic dancing. I happen to be a virgin and I sure as hell WOULD NOT have done what you made her do, but on a brighter note, keep up the good work and you will certainly be hearing fom me again.
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