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"Mortality" Reviews/Comments [ 47 ]
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 Reviewed By: futekioosha [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 03, 2006 00:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
Sorry so late in reading this, but damn that was PRICELESS! oddly enough I love it :-) Sue ish teh evilness!
 Title: oops....
Reviewed By: vvkimbo07 [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 25, 2006 23:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
teehee...my review below is meant for Purity 5!!! But great job on "Mortality" as well!
 Title: AMAZING!!!
Reviewed By: vvkimbo07 [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 25, 2006 23:10 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I was surprised to see the last two chapters posted when I got on today, and while they seem a bit short and maybe a tad rushed...I still have to say how much I loved them. I loved this whole story...but I can't wait to get Purity 6 rolling along! Great job...can't wait for P6 updates! Thank You for your Dedication Sue!
 Reviewed By: toyas_gurl [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 23, 2006 19:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
that was BRILLIANT! i have to say i was stunned at first, i was thinking over and over 'no way sue's writing a sessh/kag fic, there is NO WAY' then i see the april fools comment at the end and it turns out it was a sessh/kag pairing! LOVED IT!!!!! very very well done and the 'dont fuck with a poison youkai' just was the cherry ontop, i really wish there were a few more one shots like this coming from you, cause if nothin else they must be so much fun to write!!!! and i LOVED READING IT!!!
 Title: poor kagome
Reviewed By: vvkimbo07 [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 23, 2006 17:30 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
well...sad but good. I don't get why jaken would intentially trick kagome into sleeping with sess (would jaken think that was dishonoring sess?) unless he knew kagome would be poisoned and die. interesting to say the least.
 Reviewed By: Deceptress [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 23, 2006 15:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hmm...morbid and kind of creepy...but who are we kidding I LOVED IT! I never really thought about that before if Sesshomaru had that problem with everything being poisonous. Dont fuck with a poison youkai...lol i loved that...
 Title: 0.0
Reviewed By: Pyro Amedaus [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 23, 2006 12:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
Okay boys and girls, we must never ask for an alternate pairing ever again. That was crazy. Drug trip crazy 0.0 That was even crazier than last years April Fools Fic... though less people died this year ::nod:: I think my sense of humor died AHHH! Mac killed my inner child T-T Crazyness. Like this review. Good job gettting revenge of the Sess/Kagies? Please don't get revenge on the Slash pairing people in the same way. For the love of the world don't.
 Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 22, 2006 23:19 CDT
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
ROFLMAO *blush* My, my, how graphic. :P
 Reviewed By: InuyashaThinksImSexii [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 22, 2006 19:40 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
HAHAHA omg That was great! "Don't fuck with poison youkai..." HAHA! Sesshomaru said "fuck"! LOL That makes me giggle.. anyway, great shot, loved it! I can't stop laughing..
 Reviewed By: Hanyou_Miko_Higurashi [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 22, 2006 15:29 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hmmm, did I sense the sarcasm in the pairing much? *shrugs* It was well written, like all of your fanfiction, though, I felt that Sesshoumaru was a little out of character during the sex scene itself. To be honest? The Sess/Kag undertone in Torrent seemed to be more in character. Anyways, semi-amusing joke. Keep writing Sueric-sama.
 Title: interesting...
Reviewed By: MidnightsKeeper [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 22, 2006 12:11 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
definately not what i was expecting, but genius nonetheless as usual. if not for the "april fools" at the bottom i would have been very confused. "sueric? alternative pairings? never!" really good though. you always write sesshomaru very well, and i like that. you write all your characters well actually. anyways, good job, can't wait to see more from you. 'til then!
 Reviewed By: spookeymelichan [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 21, 2006 17:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
LMAO okay I swear even though I knew what was going to happen I got all kinds of choked up when I read kagome dyeing in his arms but then I HOWLED when I read the last part... Even though I knew it was coming great stuff!
 Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 21, 2006 17:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
This was a really well writen, but sad one-shot.
 Reviewed By: Amara LeWicked [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 21, 2006 14:55 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
OMG!!! That was so good, i luv ur writing style, i could not peel my eyes away and you kept the character in charater. XD Erin
 Reviewed By: bluezinthos [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 21, 2006 14:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
i was always wondering about what else would be poison, claws, saliva,...semen would be the next logical choice. now i know why i don't like sesshy/kags pairing. i just can't see it. they don't even know each other for crying out loud! great job!
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