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Reviewed By: Amara LeWicked [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2006 14:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! That was so good, i luv ur writing style, i could not peel my eyes away and you kept the character in charater. XD Erin
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2006 14:33 CDT
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i was always wondering about what else would be poison, claws, saliva,...semen would be the next logical choice. now i know why i don't like sesshy/kags pairing. i just can't see it. they don't even know each other for crying out loud! great job!
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: Dimples91 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2006 11:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow that was amazing! I loved it! I'm not a fan of s/k ao it was good! HEheh... it was funny stupid girl! Anyway how will Sess ever have kids if ... you know that happens? OMG! Amazing! And the ending, very classy! Wow! ~Dimples~
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Reviewed By: razorbladesinner [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2006 00:48 CDT
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Okay is it wrong that I laughed my ass off when I read Sess's final words??? I mean here is this tragedy and yet those words are so utterly true...and I never once thought of what woul happen if someone has sex with a poison youkai...sad and yet entertaining...it was great!
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Reviewed By: FireDemon86 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2006 22:41 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Ok I have been known to read Sess/Kag pairing fic from time to time cause some authors can write good stories with this pairing. That being Said... Wonderfull job Sue!! I loved it! You blow me away with this one and the end made me laugh! Because in between laughs I sitting here say yep yep that sound like Sess.. heheheh Also I had a feeling you'd twist the ending in some way cause I know you've said before you were going to do a fic like this someday. SO all together a wonderful fic it made me laugh and I think this was perfect for april fools day.
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Reviewed By: kitsunesan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2006 22:30 CDT
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was crying by the end of this story.. sue your crule.. :(........................but i love you. (ps:that wasent a good april fools joke to me)
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Reviewed By: Rawben [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2006 22:08 CDT
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ohhhhhh!!!! ohhh!!! omg!!!! lol!!!!!!! ::dies:: that was hilarious. i should have known better... i was like.. "sueric doesn't do non-canon pairings does she??" lol!! so funny. great job!! ...on the other hand... poor sess. that's a lonely life. ;)
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Title: eeeeeuuuuwwwwww
Reviewed By: adamile [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2006 21:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yuck Oh God I am going to throw up!! I absolutely HATE Sess and Kag fics. GAWWD I feel sooo violated. Just thinkin abt them doing "IT!" (the sex) makes me want to barf!! Jeez, I'll be prayin to the porcelain for days. LOL!! LOL!! ******* OKAY now for the true serious shit. I thought the story was captivating. I had to read it a couple of times to truly appreciate it. And just when I thought I had it all figured out (thinking that maybe Sess wasn't so bad after all and he really may care ), you come out with that whip it in their faces one liner ending of Sess's. I loved it!! Honestly Sue, as nice as you are, I sometimes think you have a bit of a manical streak in you. LOL!! May not be my choice in couples but it is a well-written story and quite a surprise. thanks again. J
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Reviewed By: NekoKamiFL [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2006 20:55 CDT
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What can I say? That was hysterical. Purely, wonderfully evil in a way that only you could pull off, Sueric. Thanks a bunch. =)
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2006 20:29 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, now this was most surprising. Never thought Id see you write a Sess/Kag fic, but this was really good. Never seen that ending coming either. You sneaky wench, you! Lmao. This was really good.
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Reviewed By: serendith [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2006 20:23 CDT
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Damn - strong opinions on that pairing much? Nicely written ... but damn. For the record (even though I know this wasn't pointed at me - though the timing is rather worrisome) I simply suggested a well-written one you might want to read - not that you yourself should write one.
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Title: Twisted! I Love it!!
Reviewed By: Priestess Skye [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2006 20:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sueric, this fic just rocked! Loved the ending, LOVED IT! so sick, twisted and evil, it just makes it all the sweeter, and i'm a sess/kag fan (Not so much canon but alternate universe). thanks for writing this, for giving me such a wonderful laugh and read tonight. I'm a huge fan of all of your work and your wonderful writing never fails to entertain me. Fabulous, just fabulous.
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Title: LOL
Reviewed By: Aishiteru148 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2006 20:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LMAO! Even though I am extremly inu/kag I love to read sess/kag fanfic, why? i have no idea and I started to read this oneshot and i was like "No way" and the end I was like "awesome" "don't fuck with the poison youkai" priceless, some things money can't buy but for everything else there is mastercard.
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Title: OMG!
Reviewed By: xbitternessx [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2006 19:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay, i'm still chuckling. i knew you didn't care for this pairing, so i was waiting for something. the ending, though, made me clap my hand over my mouth. good times, good times.
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Reviewed By: kamackie21 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2006 19:20 CDT
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*jaw drops* sputters *gapes somemore* Gruesome yet funny. All hail SATIN! (hehhehehehe) ~ the mackie
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