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Title: bmlap
Reviewed By: Lap [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2006 09:21 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Lovely! I enjoyed reading the story and I hope I see more of it soon. I'm curious about what would happen to Itachi. Also...ever wondered what would happen if you have your Harry face Gaara? That would be interesting. As for the fight scene- it was good. A fight scene doesn't need to be only action to be good and you balanced action thought and feeling to make it a good one.
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Reviewed By: mistylaugh On: August 14, 2006 02:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great updadte! I love it, who should Harry fight hmmm...Shino I don't know why but his name popped up when I thought of Harry fighting. The others were all to weak or uncool. You missed a few letters in some words, so thats why the low rating on spelling/grammar. As always I love your fics and am happy that you updated.
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Reviewed By: Blacksash On: June 01, 2006 10:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aaaaaaa! I absoloutely LOVE this fanfic! I dont particularly care for yaoi pairings, but this one's actualy really cute! I really love the idea of two people from different worlds being able to meet each other in their dreams, and helping each other just by talking! yes, i know, i'm weird, ANYWAY! Please update soon, i've been waiting, and its driving me insane! Lol. Take care, and please update soon, Blacksash
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Reviewed By: toki mirage() On: May 22, 2006 20:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*grins* i loooooove it. thank GOD you update often, else i'd be jumpin from wall to wall like a bunny on speed. UPDATE SOON ONEGAI!
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Reviewed By: Oriya-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2006 22:46 CDT
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I really like this fic, and I am happy that you have been updating so quick. Now that Harry is an official ninja, I am eager to see how he deals with this new lifestyle. It is totaly different than the one he had left back in England. I know you have suddely been making the transition of Harry's attitude, but actually killing a person because it was an order is different than killing a person because you want to protect your friends and family. Mhmmm.....I don't think I have really anything else to say. I really like this fic and I hope you will continue it until the end. I am also sorry that I have not had time to review sooner. I have been studying for finals and everything...omg I think I am going to sleep for three days after school is finally over! Gawd! Hope you write more! Ja!
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Reviewed By: Oriya-Chan(Not logged in) On: May 11, 2006 22:13 CDT
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I like the fact that you are giving some of the other lesser characters a voice now. It gives a wider view about Harry's new life. I was saddened that there wasn't a full sex scene, but then the more I thought about it, the harder it was for me to actually picture Harry and Itachi actually together. From the picture of Harry that I got in my head from reading the books, to the character that plays Harry in the movies, and then Itachi...yeah... just a little hard to revert one to anime or one to real life. I was glad that you did see a reason to remention Harry's healing ability afterwards. Alot of people don't think that sodomy will hurt, just goes to show that they have never done it. I eagerly a wait the next chapter, because I think it is a good thing that you are establishing Harry's connections in Konoha before something happens. (Like him running off to save Itachi or something to that effect. -wink-) Hope to see you update soon! Thanks! Ja!
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Title: Pairings/BadGuy
Reviewed By: LynnGryphon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2006 11:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My favorite Naruto pairing has always been Iruka/Kakashi followed by Naru/Sasu (don't like Sakura! *points to pink hair for proof of evil*). For a bad guy, I'd probably go for Akatsuki (Itachi's old group). Maybe something along the lines of wanting Konoha's child prodigy for their group? Dunno, but those are my picks. Keep up the good work Kirallie! (*cheers*)
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Reviewed By: Oriya-Chan(Not Logged In) On: May 06, 2006 08:44 CDT
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Mhmm....That is an interesting thing to swollow Kira... It does give me a new perspective on Itachi. I am beside myself with the fact that Harry is now in Naruto's world. I was glad you gave Harry a reaction to the kids and the kids a reaction to him. Harry has been raised to think that killing is bad and only to be done when there is no other option. But Naruto and them have been raised to kill and torture people. There has to be atleast some confliction. I liked the smooth way you played this off. I adore HPxNar fics, but I get a litle irritable when the characters don't have reactions like that. It makes it seem like the writer has totaly abandoned their morals and teachings just to take it work. -Shrugs- And about that whole Itachi innocent thing, it seems like Harry has a nack for helping not-so guilty criminals. I have one question, who is the bad guy(Or girl) in this story? That has been bugging me lately. Hope you can answer my question soon! Keep writing! Ja!
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Reviewed By: Kallipso Eclipse On: May 02, 2006 16:37 CDT
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I love it keep it coming. Will the rest of the Naruto crew find out that Itachi is innocent? It would be interesting if while fighting they ended up helping the Hogwarts crew.Please keep it coming I can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: Aria-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2006 06:06 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Loving it! Are you going to include lemons by the way? Thank you very much for writing this and I hope you update soon :) xxxx Aria-Chan
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Title: To Oriya-Chan
Reviewed By: kirallie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2006 22:34 CDT
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If you check there are one or two hints that what Itachi may not be as guilty as you think when it copmes to the death of his family. there is at least one hint in each chapter.
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Reviewed By: Oriya-Chan(Not Logged In) On: April 30, 2006 21:52 CDT
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I could have sworn that I had reviewed for this fic...or am I just compleately crazy? I seriously don't know anymore. Usually I would say that you're writing moves too fast if you have something major happen in the second chapter...but with this fic, I find that is actually works really well. It makes me think that since Harry was able to project his soul into Itachi's world, that their is a way for his body to follow. Or better yet, for Itachi for go into Harry's world. (That is my secret wish for this fic.) But Itachi and Harry are OOC. Itach seems to be a little docile in this fic, and Harry a little too understanding. He had been taught that killing people had been wrong as long as it was 'unjustified.' But here Itachi is, having killed his whole family. I was thinking that Harry would be a wee bit more weary while dealing with a gun of that calibur. But those are just my thoughts, and they could be wrong. Well...look forward to another chapter of this! Ja!
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Reviewed By: Kallipso Eclipse On: April 29, 2006 14:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
please continue. This is really unique so far, I can't wait to read more
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Reviewed By: neosildrake [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2006 10:01 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I cannot say much about grammar and spelling but the rest has definitely got my attention. Quite original. The charas are quite OOC, but since it's an AU it's really ok. I like it so far. I also would like to know what really happened in Itachi's past, since, in your story, he does not seem to be the type to slaughter his whole clan for such petty reason as to test his own capacities. Maybe, since Harry gets teached the ninja-arts by Itachi, Harry could teach Itachi some magic... of course only if chakra and magical power have some kind of base power or relation. Anyway, continue please.
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Reviewed By: LynnGryphon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2006 01:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Definite originality points for Harry and Itachi of all the characters avaliable. Wonderful writing, as always (I'm seriously becoming jealous here). This has a definite promise to it and I really hope you continue it. Not sure how Naruto hard core fannies would/will react but I like it. It's nice not seeing Itachi as the out for blood, evil, matri/patri -cide commiter. If you continue this (and I seriously hope you do), do you think Harry would maybe be dragged to Itachi's world? Anime characters dragged to Harry's world is just so..oi-ve, common. That was my original plot bunny for TNSD, Harry in anime land, not anime in Harry land. Just a thought (*innocent Quatre facade*). Keep up the wonderful work and hopefully there will be an update to this! Also, check your story's Hidden status, this isn't out in the open archive, I had to follow my email link.
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