Title: Sadly dissappointed Reviewed By: Tusuke Kounami On: March 14, 2007 10:42 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 5 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10 Overall Rating: 6 of 10
Comment/Review: The concept of this fic was absolutely beautiul and I couldn't wait to read it. But I was sad;y dissappointed when everything started to jumble together and you just left us write there. I really wouldn't call that a cliffy. You basically left ur readers hanging. Please consider rewriting this and further detailing it so that I may review your new one. This is not a flame, just some constructive critisism. I did like the over all idea of the fic.
