| "Ryou’s Series of Misfortunate Events: Heat Wave" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
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Reviewed By: Chrys On: March 30, 2009 11:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update!!!! Why haven't you updated? I want to know Bakura's decision!
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Reviewed By: SweetMisery1 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2008 11:54 CDT
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Great Story
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Title: WHAT!!!???
Reviewed By: Yamiace1321 - nli On: February 01, 2007 15:07 CST
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I just found this, and read the prequel and everythig you've done of this one, and I have to say that this is really good. You're spelling and grammar is better than most fics on here who look almost as if a monkey typed them, so it's easy to read. I have to agree with you about sglily's cliffhangers, though. YOU HEAR THAT, SGLILY? DIE ALL CLIFFHANGERS!!! But seriously, who doesn't have any idea what's going to happen next in the next chapter of her story 'Rings that Bind'? UPDATE, DAMN YOU! And the same goes for you, Tjay. Just because she's doing it doesn't mean you should! I mean honestly! None of the good fanfics have been updating much lately, and it's pissing me off! Pleeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaase update? *chibi eyes of DOOOOOOOOOOM!*
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Reviewed By: LSS On: November 11, 2006 11:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHY!? WHY!? WHY!? Why, the cliffhanger!???? I HAVE TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS! I HAVE TO! PLEASE Dont keep us waiting long for the next chapter! @O@! LSS
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Reviewed By: sglily - nli On: November 08, 2006 11:07 CST
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Ow, damn it, Saiyamaru! That poke hurt! And, TJ! What the hell? You're going to abuse me, too? Geesh... The next "cliffhanger" is going to have both your names on it, I swear! ... o.O Regardless of finger POKING and the evil nature of cliffhangers, this was a good chapter setting up the inevitable confrontations between Ryou/Bakura, Bakura/Atemu, Bakura/Zork, and maybe Ryou/Zork? I liked Ryou's arguments for Bakura to stay with him, to not die a senseless death that would start the cycle of pain all over again. You know what pisses me off? Well, I'm going to tell you anyway! And this is just a general observation not directed at you, my dear. Rarely does anybody ever believe Ryou. And rarer still does anyone (except Ryou for the most part) ever believe in Bakura. Makes me want to smack somebody... However, it does my heart good to see Ryou and Bakura sticking up for each other and doing all the crazy love stuff they do - emotional and otherwise. So, yes! I did like the chapter! And, I look forward to more! Long live Ryou and Bakura fics! I agree there has been a steady decline... as has there been a decline in readers/followers it would seem...
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Reviewed By: Saiyamaru [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2006 03:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bakura and Ryou almost got it on and we only get a vague first hand recollection of it? I'd say I was short changed, but I'm not really paying, so I guess I'm getting what I bought.*snerk* This was of course, a joy to read and I'm glad you were able to update. Poor 'Kura and Ryou, people (and vermin) just keep butting in and making things difficult. And cliff-hangers can be pretty nasty, cant they? *pokes sglily*
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Reviewed By: sglily - nli On: September 20, 2006 09:35 CDT
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Ah, and the plot thickens! Very nicely done! It was painfully obvious that Ryou was hurt and horribly upset by the lack of emotion and/or caring on Bakura's part. Plus the fact that he realizes that Bakura is losing himself to some other force... Sorry to hear about the broken arm... hopefully it is on the mend and will be good as new in no time!
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Reviewed By: Saiyamaru-nli On: September 20, 2006 01:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My, that was evil. Ending the fic right as it was getting really interesting. You know, Bakura probably wouldn't be half as bad as he is now if he had actually done something with Ryou instead of just mopeing about it with the paracite.
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Reviewed By: Saiyamaru [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2006 15:05 CDT
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Well damn, that was hot. A little cruel to keep Rypu out of the action though, heh. Love the chapter, just wish it was longer, and I agree with sglily. Get rid of the parasite.
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Reviewed By: mewMew2 On: July 05, 2006 22:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I no one shall feed you then I will *strikes a heroic pose then procedes to throw her a medium rare stake* I hope that you are no longer as hungry. I shall review untill well, let's just say I motivaited a writer and I think helped a authoress to keep on writing her story over a spand of 3 years! Seriously, if you need motivation, I'm the one.
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Reviewed By: sglily [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2006 15:54 CDT
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Poor Ryou... alone all day, hot and sweaty... gets naked and tries to take a "shower" under the waterfall in peace. Prying Bakura eyes! Nice, the jerk shows up long enough to acquire a raging hard-on and then leaves his embarrassed light to go jerk off... Well, I guess his nickname was aptly given then... jerk! He needs to be slapped! I enjoyed the chapter. Zork is definitely a fifth wheel... lose him quick, Bakura! So you can get down and friendly with your pretty little sexy light...
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Reviewed By: sglily -nli On: May 23, 2006 21:31 CDT
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This was a good chapter. I liked the bantering back and forth. The line about the "skirt"/kilt was hysterical! It seems that Bakura is happy overall that Ryou has showed up in his time. Let's hope that Bakura can keep Zork at bay... Looking forward to more... and Happy Birthday!
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Title: Good story
Reviewed By: Redconvoy-the writer On: May 22, 2006 06:13 CDT
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I always wondered how people would interpret Bakura's relationship to the Zork. I have seen in doujinshis that there are actually two spirits in the Ring, one being the theif and the other being Zork. Bakura would protect Ryo.
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Reviewed By: alonegirl_34 * On: May 21, 2006 21:16 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting... >:D I can't wait to see how all of this plays out... (BTW HAPPY BIRTHDAY TOMORROW!!)
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Reviewed By: Saiyamaru [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2006 19:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fuck, it was just geting interesting. Meh. When Bakura said he and Ryou weren't lovers, I take it he was just stating a fact. At that moment, they weren't lovers.(they have only themselves to blame for not speaking up) Anywho, this is really interesting, and I hope to read more soon.
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