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Title: Good Progression Of Your Story
Reviewed By: Pugsley [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2006 17:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am really enjoying the progression of the story. I like the pairing especially, it is one of my favorites. In some places there are problems with the grammar such as words are left out or words are mixed up. This makes it hard to read in some places. But other than that I really like the story and I hope you continue soon.
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Reviewed By: NatsuTsuki On: August 21, 2006 19:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this has been reallly good so far keep up the good work^^ Please don't turn this story into an mpreg though! Even if this is a fictional story, lets keep the laws of nature in place xDD Update soon! Ja!~ Na-Chan
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Reviewed By: Polka dot On: August 15, 2006 19:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read the AN what pups? They haven't mated yet, right? Anyway this is interesting but they're both kinda pathetic right now with all the injuries.
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Reviewed By: Kill me slowly On: August 14, 2006 13:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very very hot! I love it! I can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: chibirin8 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2006 12:40 CDT
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I like it and ill be waiting for the next update.
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Reviewed By: Mysic_Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2006 00:42 CDT
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Hi I tried to go to your group, But it didn't come up.
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Reviewed By: mindfreak [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2006 18:26 CDT
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yay! inuyasha is ok! update soon, im getting rather addicted to this story...
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Title: Ouch!
Reviewed By: LadyIvy (nsi) On: July 30, 2006 16:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ouch! You quite painfully debilitated Inuyasha and forced him to rely upon his brother. I do hope that they are able to advance their relationship, regardless of this setback. ProtectiveSesshomaru! is a scary sight--I loved it! I think it's sweet that Inuyasha was concerned about his brother's gifts...there's hope for those two yet. Great job!
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Reviewed By: little-pixie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2006 13:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
kl story! luv the writin. hope u'll carry on! *smiles* update sn!!
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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2006 17:24 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No reviews for the last chapter? Well let me fix that. It's was good, I liked it very much. As for this one, I was a little shocked by Sess' personality change. It was great how he killed that boar demon, but what shocked me was his responses to the healer. I don't know if it was concern for InuYasha or absentmindedness. I thought he would have smacked her for sure for her 'insolence'. But, great chapter anyway!~ B reading U!
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Reviewed By: Beenie On: July 28, 2006 14:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is real good. I know I enjoy it, but you should put your updates out more fast, then maybe more people would read it because it's at the top of the lists. I'll always read it and start leaving you reviews and tell you how awesome the story is, if it'll make you feel better. ^_^
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Reviewed By: alisha13 On: July 25, 2006 22:21 CDT
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i luv ur story plz hurry and update it!
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Reviewed By: mindfreak [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2006 15:34 CDT
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You need to come back soon so we can find out what happens to the mates to be...
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Reviewed By: ____insert user here [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2006 14:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! this is really well written, everything's really good. i like this fan fic a lot so far! keep going when you come back from vacation, I neeeeed more chapters! lard. well good luck with the rest of your writing. it's doing well, so take that time off for a break and have a blast! =D (~___~* sorry I'm so hyper... well yeah take that break but come back soon and write more for the story! thanks, looking good so far! >_
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Reviewed By: LadyIvy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2006 18:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Inuyasha's at the palace and he's going to give a try to having a relationship with Sesshomaru. Yay--let the courting begin. I am a little confused about Koga...I thought he was only going to look out for the group for a little while because he had to deal with his pack? I didn't think he was doing it to try to get closer to Kagome, but then again, those two might deserve each other as they sometimes feel like others owe them the world and that they are excellent at what they do...Ok, done ranting. Enjoyed the new chapter and I can't wait to read the next one!
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