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Title: Chapter 4
Reviewed By: Luna18 On: August 22, 2006 18:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pleese update soon! This fanfic is so romantic yet angst story..love it!
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Reviewed By: Photographing Poetry [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2006 08:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahh, Inu-chan's so sweet. Gotta' love him. It's times like these that make me want to slap Naraku/Onigumo silly. Hmph. Great job on this story, though you could work a bit on your grammar. I really enjoyed the four chapters! Hehe. I'll be looking forward to your next update. Pho Poe
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Title: Chapter 4
Reviewed By: Boo-Boo On: August 01, 2006 04:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice story! Pleese update soon!
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Reviewed By: Suikidoen On: July 23, 2006 07:49 EDT
Comment/Review:
I DEMAND YOU UPDATE DAMN IT!!!! I NEED MORRRRRRRREEEEEEEE!!!!
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Reviewed By: anime is life On: July 22, 2006 03:01 EDT
Comment/Review:
ritemore this is good really good and if u stop now ill die so plz rite more
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Reviewed By: Kendraless [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2006 16:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I kind of had my doubts at the beginning of the sorry seeing Kagome accepted Inu Yasha so effortlessly but you worked that out nicely. This is the first IY fanfiction I've come across where they use the kind of magic you've described which makes it even more captivating. Even thought the story has not progressed very much it is wonderful to read and most importantly it has a very intriguing storyline. Can't wait for the next update.
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Reviewed By: angelion On: July 08, 2006 23:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! Characters are well-developed, and the plot is very compelling. Keep the chapters coming.
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Reviewed By: Karen Angelica [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2006 20:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love all your chapters! You are an amazing author! I was wondering if you would read my fanfiction for Inu/Kag. "The Demon's Blackmailed Bride." I would be so grateful to have someone of your skills reading my work! You are an extremely wonderful author and I can't wait till Chapter 5 of "Crossing Swords." I come here everyday hoping for an update! Thank you so much!
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2006 23:51 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent story. It has a great plot, and the chemistry between Inuyasha and Kagome is just amazing in theis story. I will definitely be following it from now on.
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2006 16:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Most excellent chapter. Some more info but a very nice lemon too boot. Wonder when the Kings gonna get his head out his ketsu to see who/what Naraku is really all bout. Update when you can. :D
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Reviewed By: Lunatickat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2006 03:35 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am consistanly amazed by your story telling skills. I like how you're working all the characters into the story and I look forward to the addition of Miroku. It's always a highlight of my day to find out you've updated your stories. Keep up the good work!
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Title: Garden of Temptations
Reviewed By: angelfire777 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2006 01:54 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Update, Blue! Another HOT lemon and 'oh boy' what a turn on. Keep up with the Great writing and take care of you!
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Reviewed By: BlackCatKitty On: June 01, 2006 14:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My lord! If this fic was food it would be a rare delicacy! It's rare to find stories as well written as the one you have produced here. It draws you in so it doesn't even feel like a story, it feels like you're actually there. Nice going!
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Title: Great!
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2006 14:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutely great. You have a way with explaining things and this is getting good. And Onigumo, the bastard, is always out for himself. But makes me wonder what's in the vial. Interesting. Cant wait to see what happens next, but update when you can.
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Reviewed By: angelfire777 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2006 09:32 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great updates, Blue! I am looking forward to more of your best writing to come. Take care.
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