| "Oh...Crap..." Reviews/Comments [ 57 ] |
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Reviewed By: who cares!!! On: June 22, 2006 20:44 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good grief!! i am Mormon and my religion says that gay, bi, lesbian are bad and evil and yet i still love to write and read about yaoi!! you can think it bad in the real world but view it as ok in the fantasy sense. there's no law stating you must hate them. i accept my friends who are gay, bi, or lesbian even though it's wrong. its their choice and stuff. if you like it then all the more power to ya but dont let others sway your judgement!! i truly feel you should allow your talent as a writter to continue and finish this story. its wonderful and beautiful.
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Reviewed By: Nanx [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2006 13:50 CDT
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By the way, if my choice of words and expressions are a little... unfortunate... It's because I'm Dutch and with some things I have problems to express myself correctly in English ^^; *points at 'being gay' part* I didn't mean gay Christians, but something like that Christians can accept gays... Ha, that's better I think :)
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Reviewed By: Nanx [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2006 13:46 CDT
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Well, I haven't reviewed (I don't do that very often ^^;) on your story, but I liked it. It's a shame that you quit this. However I can understand your feelings on this. I don't agree with them, I really think Christianity (I'm not Christian anymore, but I do know a thing or two about it) and being gay can go together, but that's not the point now. It's what you believe... and I think it great that you're able to believe... I respect your choice, and hope you will be writing other nice, non-yaoi stories (they're just as great ^^).
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Title: Damn... *Sniff* ;-;
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: June 17, 2006 09:31 CDT
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Im not angry, a bit disapointed that I wont get to see the end but I understand that it is your religion and I totally support you! Though I dont think being gay is an abomination, I think love is love but thats just my opinion, I tend to be open minded ^^; I will miss this story though, I wish I coulda seen the way you woulda ended it >< Much Wuv! Passing Reader~
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Title: Very Nice
Reviewed By: Hells_gatekepper [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2006 22:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved your writing. I think it had the element of action, romance in a fun way, and overall, it was just a good read. I love how you portrayed Bakura and Marik as something besides pure evil. And Atemu wasn't a total jerk, major good point for me. Can't wait to see what happens next. Maybe you can enlighten me on some of mine with your talents. ^_~
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Reviewed By: RyousGirl567 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2006 21:30 CDT
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I am amazed at the nice mix of plot and random comedy. Very well done. A little iffy on the grammar/spelling/etc., but I can overlook that when the story is good enough. ^_~ Very cute and original story idea. I can't wait until you post the next chappie! ^_^ It's been quite a while since I've found a new YGO story that I like. Makes me happy inside. ^_^ If you like comedy, I have a comedy fic of my own. I also have a story that starts out angsty for the first two chappies and then has either a sad or happy ending (you choose which chappie to read). The happy ending has Malik and Marik(u) in it. ^_~ Well, happy writings and I hope to see more from you soon! ~Tori-chan~
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Title: The damn things broke I tell you!!!!! I dient get any of my review in the last one!!!! >< Basicly worshiping you *sigh* Damn thing *Mutters*
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: June 08, 2006 23:07 CDT
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Read Title, this is a usless pice of @#$&!!! >:(
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Title: Ouuuub
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: June 08, 2006 23:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Title: I want more ;-;
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: May 30, 2006 17:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I reviewed, so now you havta love me forever muahahaha!!! j/k Hehe, I got so excited when you updated I jumped up and down >< I thought Marik(u) would have been too impationt to wait 4 days just like I am for your next update ^^' and thx for replying to the reviews! Makes me feel special :D Cant wait till your next update!!!! Ja ne! XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX
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Reviewed By: Tjay_Motou(NLI) On: May 18, 2006 07:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You need to work on you're grammar... if you don't have a beta, get one, if you do... get a different one. I like the plot idea but the characterizations are... different and vague. You could add some more detail... However overall I liked the fic... and please don't take this as a flame, its just some things you should work on to better you're writing.
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Title: It cut off, Basicly I was worshiping you ^^' Dident wanna make the message 2 long
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: May 16, 2006 19:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry, Please update! ;-; This things not working XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX
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Title: LOVE IT!!!!!
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: May 16, 2006 19:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I knew this was going to be a good story!!! It just keeps getting better and better with each chapter, and its so suspensful!!! XD You left me at a cliffhanger ;-; now I havta wonder whats gonna happen till you update and its gonna drive me crazy >
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Reviewed By: sympa On: May 16, 2006 13:47 CDT
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:) I like the beginning ^^ I added this fic to my bookmarks, and I'll definitely wait for the next chapters. Sorry for my crappy English, I'm German *lol*
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Title: Beautimus!!!!
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: May 14, 2006 21:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it!!! Well, the beging anyway ^^' I can tell that this is gonna be one hell of a story though, please update!!! XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX
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Title: It's Sour... I like it! ^^
Reviewed By: Sour Akio offline On: May 09, 2006 22:01 CDT
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Sour here! ...^^ I liked the intro! Please continue soon!
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