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Reviewed By: Rockerchick On: June 05, 2006 02:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read ALOT of InuYasha Fics and this is one of the best yet. I love how InuYasha wasn't sure about her age then scaned her ID and POOF, happy-go-lucky sales man attitude. That part made me laugh in a OMG, that was great type of way. I love it when hummor is added into stories like this. Anyhow, Great story, PLEASE PLEASE MAKE A PART 2.
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Reviewed By: Mirage [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2006 21:34 CDT
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if only shit like this hapeened in real life... most tattoo and piercing artists look more like jakken than inuyasha... ::shudders:: ewww. interesting piece.
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Reviewed By: IC On: May 31, 2006 09:36 CDT
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that was awsome
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Reviewed By: White Luna(offline) On: May 31, 2006 01:44 CDT
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One word-HAWT!
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Reviewed By: axel721 On: May 09, 2006 01:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was awesome!! i loved it, 10/10 ^^
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Title: Amazing.
Reviewed By: AngeliaOmen On: May 07, 2006 19:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This... This I have no words that can depict such a beautiful and lovingly created story. Very good, loved it! Please if it's not too much trouble, could you maybe make a second part to this? ^_^;
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Title: Danny Girl
Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2006 14:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You lived up to the challange..great one shot story.
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Title: Nice
Reviewed By: Broken Dreams [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2006 13:32 CDT
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Niiice. Very cool. You managed to keep them in charcter... that's sort of scary to think about, ne? ~BD
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Reviewed By: GinaCat [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2006 10:01 CDT
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I love it awesome
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Title: Great story
Reviewed By: Sweet_Obsession [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2006 23:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a great story.I Loved the lemon.
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Reviewed By: Cochrann [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2006 21:27 CDT
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fun story...I really liked it Inuyasha is sooo hot!
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Reviewed By: Angel_4_life AKA Christina On: May 06, 2006 17:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omigosh! That was excellent! Kagome was very in character and Inuyasha sounded hawt with those peircings! And to think, I never would've read it if Neddi hadn't issued the challenge. Oh, these challenges are going to be fun :P I'm such a hentai, lol. Keep up the good work and Happy Writing! I can't help but be amused as well as afraid of the inevitable Kaede/Inu...*shudders and laughs at the same time* - Christina
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Title: Oh My...
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2006 17:09 CDT
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Oh my indeed...That was awesome! No orgasms at all? I bet she has many more to cum...I mean come. This was most excellent. I still think the Inu/Kaede paring would be fun...Scaring, but fun, lol.
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Reviewed By: keiko.chan On: May 06, 2006 15:23 CDT
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haha! that was great! it totally killed mine! *goes back to the drawing board* lol. And to think we thought Neddi would have made us do an Inu/Kaede fic for kicks. lol. But yah, that plot was really good. Entirely Kagome. "uhh.. i can't fucking cum!" lmao. i nearly died when I saw that.
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