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Reviewed By: Glaedr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2007 00:00 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Awesome story, please continue it.
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Reviewed By: Anon01 On: March 28, 2007 06:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a fantastic story. I cannot wait to see where you where heading with this story. I usually don't like cross over stories but have pulled it off. I am looking forward to he next update.
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Title: Nice one!
Reviewed By: Brownies On: January 18, 2007 19:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
For me, this is one of the most entertaining and pleasurable reads I have ever come across in a Love Hina fanfic... Nice blend of drama and angst, I must say :D The only thing i can gripe about is the side story of kanako.. Unless you can connect it to the story of keitaro in the later chapters it doesn't seem right. I mean, those two stories can stand independent of each other... Well, unless you have other plans... :p Oh, and one last thing... Don't you think you can lighten up a little on Motoko's attitude? I mean, yeah, she comes across as one who would smack keitaro around for the slightest hint of perversion, but she's capable of assesing her own faults too, not just using keitaro as a scapegoat.. well, that's my own thinking, by the way... if u have other plans, then don't mind my rantings here :p great fic, great plot, very good read.. dats it :D
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Reviewed By: Master Lethe On: December 26, 2006 21:51 CST
Comment/Review:
I like the fic, I really do. Unfortunately the cross-over stuff turns me off in a big way. The main Tsuroko/Keitaro plot is more than enough to carry the story without all the other SG1 et al. crossing over. It's gotten to the point where I've just plain stopped reading.
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Reviewed By: Vilkath [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2006 16:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great stuff, glad to see an update to one my favorite Tsuruko/kei fics. I just hope chapter 10 isn't delayed to long, this story is detailed and addictive =p Each update always seems like torture. Not mention we seem to be finally arriving at the climax, if the format continues we have 5 more flashback day chapters to go, then the present to account for.
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Reviewed By: Lum_the_Mad On: November 21, 2006 10:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Highly enjoyable fan fic, some lines and spelling errors (mostly things like he/she that get past spell check), but overall very well written. I agree with some the other people that the cross overs seem a bit forced, and not really needed. A few character refrences, or one or two maybe. But I just didn't feel the need to include all of them. Especialy with the etreeme detail some the middle chapters went into just to explain their importance. I really felt the first chapter introducing Tsu-chan was really bogged down by them. I think this fan fic could been perfectly fine without the cross overs maybe even get to the plot point faster (all that foreshadowing really makes it harder to accept the filler info). Still overall I enjoyed this anyways.
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Reviewed By: Sieg_15 On: August 18, 2006 14:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
Dang...This story is always getting better. I've been reading/following this story since it was posted up on Fanfiction.net when it first came out. Really want to know how this story plays out in the end. Great story.
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Reviewed By: Godslayer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2006 12:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thoroughly enjoying reading this fic, the plot is well developed and it was most enjoyable to read. I hope you continue to publish chapters, and I will have to see if you published anything else.
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Reviewed By: Sexy23 On: July 17, 2006 10:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fan fic alot please write more
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Reviewed By: lust69 On: July 17, 2006 10:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow this fan fic is realy exiting i won't be able to slept tonight because of it
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Reviewed By: Tear90 On: July 17, 2006 09:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fan fic is great but the whole stargate sg1 thing is something this story didn't realy need
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Reviewed By: Darkmaster12 On: July 17, 2006 09:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the greatest fan fic I have ever read please finish the next chapter soon i am dying here!
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Title: AMAZING!!!!!
Reviewed By: Darkwing63 On: July 17, 2006 09:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOWWWWW this is a realy great fan fic, but the whole stargate thing is confusing
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Reviewed By: Dragonheart76 On: July 17, 2006 09:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the best love hina fic I have ever read please finish the next one soon ^_^
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Title: Hmmm....
Reviewed By: DarkiveDracormia [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2006 18:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmm... Very interesting... I like how you started it off, though its something to question where the entire kendo organization comes into play. Aside from that it's a good story, though (even if I'm a Naru x Keitaro supporter) just make sure that Tsu's organization fits into Keitaro's plot at some point.
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